Back on this site after a long vacation away...

And I'm going to comment on your poems for free :)

Yea, for free. It's my way of trying to get back into writing. I'm publishing a small book of old poems, and before I critique a few of my poems I want to go line to line on someone else's... And what better place to do it but here?!

So let's seee... How about the first ten people?

IMPORTANT: Give me a name, a link, AND why you want me to read it [otherwise I will not consider reading your poem].

Please give me up to a week, as I am quite busy :) Patience is a virtue for the wise.

Much love,

~SDPW

Welcome back. I remember you from way back when. ;)

I'd appreciate it if you could give me some feedback on my poem "The Ache In My Tooth."

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1153615
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It's looking very lonely with no critiques, and I'd really like someone's opinion on it and ways to improve on it as it is something I have written after not writing for a very long period of time due to zero inspiration.

Hey welcome back.

If you could read and rate my new peom that would be awesome! 'Change Your Dream'

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1161165

Just like you I have been away from the site for a while and im getting back into writing, this one here was the one that i wrote when i was mid crisis - mid last year! So, I'd be grateful if you can give me some feedback =)

Poem 1/10: URGENT LONGINGS

I have completed my review of this poem. I'll do another review tomorrow :) Thanks for the posts!

Love,

Stephen Denny Paul White