What do you suggest?

I have been on this site for 3 years and I have never once been to the forms. xD Wow, go me!

Anyway, I was going to ask and see if anyone would like to tell me if they think I should do something to make my poetry better? Here is one I wrote today. It is quite sloppy, but for the little amount of time I spent on it, I think it turned out alright. =D

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1161241

Thank you everyone ^^