Daily Sip - Carnal Apple, Woman filled, burning moon

Carnal apple, Woman filled, burning moon,
dark smell of seaweed, crush of mud and light,
what secret knowledge is clasped between your pillars?
What primal night does Man touch with his senses?
Ay, Love is a journey through waters and stars,
through suffocating air, sharp tempests of grain:
Love is a war of lightning,
and two bodies ruined by a single sweetness.
Kiss by kiss I cover your tiny infinity,
your margins, your rivers, your diminutive villages,
and a genital fire, transformed by delight,
slips through the narrow channels of blood
to precipitate a nocturnal carnation,
to be, and be nothing but light in the dark.

-Pablo Neruda

Neruda fills me up like chocolate milk.

"genital fire" threw me off though, Pablo. Might wanna fix that ;) lol

Oohh myy myy... <3<3<3
can I pleeaasee listen to Sibs or Jane's interpreting/analysis on this piece :D :D

thought it's obvious..the guy is THAT much sinking..in love with me

"Fire in your junk" didn't work too well either...

"and loins ablaze," maybe? Yes? No? Haha, I can give my analysis later today, I need to go see my horse.

Sayonara suckas!

LOL ah that was enough..oh please don't ever give analysis again LOL :P

This is a beautifully written sensual poem, but I am already imagining the author getting his fire hose out for some reason.

Get it out of the gutter XD

Haha fine, no analysis.

Fire hose, love it.

Lmao..i feel like a jerk now lol

Maybe it was one of those "you had to be there" thingies

I had about three others that I wanted to do, but I couldn't find my book yesterday.

"Maybe it was one of those "you had to be there" thingies"

HAHAHAHAHA!