Round 4 (~Dixiedaisy's~) Most Fun You Ever Had In A Contest

  • Daisy if you do
    13 years ago

    Here are the poems for round 4.
    No-one was eliminated by the judges. The poems that are not listed out of the original 10 poets have dropped out of the contest for various reasons. So below listed are the final 6 contestants.

    Good Luck everyone.

    Poem 1

    April Fool

    An April fool endures the endearing showers
    that saturate the soil in this season.
    The sun seems closer at this time
    as the earth turns and tilts through
    heavens halo, or the rainbows that dissect
    the light so bright it illuminates the horizon.
    There lies my pot of gold.

    Poem 2

    Insoluble Influences

    There bursts a gust under my skin,
    it chills me out with its frosty moans,
    inhabiting my core,
    as I endure winter, to let go of fall.

    For cold has been following me-
    it drivels and wheezes, like a bully
    awaiting each sheet to tremble
    with my nerves.

    Still, more showers pouring with insanity,
    cruelly hauling me into the petals flirting
    at the gates of April; mad for Spring.

    With curious plans, in pitiful eager for
    Summer, to sweat wretchedness in
    cheery covers..

    Alas-right now, the world is foreseeing
    harsher frosts, but I-urge not to ice up
    as Nature has this manner in the power
    of its snappy air,
    to rupture all that isn't her own,
    although we are all...hers.

    Poem 3

    Lake Eden

    Predawn paradise - leave camp
    with coffee to fog banked lake;
    dangle legs under live oak,
    wait 'til sunrise burns off cloud.
    Misty rib-branch droops to lake,
    dim contour, something's not right;
    clarity swirls - copperhead
    rests immobile at my feet!

    Name her Eve; she slithers away,
    swims through fog, disappears;
    pull back legs then she returns,
    ghostly weaving, floats to branch.
    Remain still, hope she'll stay, but
    Eve's off again into haze;
    birds cry out to sun: "arise!"
    Snake comes back, treks out again.

    There's dire penalties to spy
    on maid in her ablutions;
    head waves as undulating
    side strokes course along her spine;
    reveals need that sends her out
    swimming watery Eden:
    protruding from her mouth she holds
    the twitching tail of a minnow.

    Eve claims her seat, raises head;
    in fang filled throat her breakfast
    like forbidden apple, slides down
    to thickened body, and is gone.
    Stand to go, Eve slips the tree,
    leaves only ripples spreading
    true word: in the garden of good,
    evil has purpose and beauty.

    Poem 4

    Phenomenon.

    diverged tongues
    of lavender
    strike with harm,
    snaring memorabilia
    of nature while brontides
    rattle silence,

    yet beauty illuminates
    for the unforeseen
    is not always a
    venomous disaster.

    Poem 5

    Yearning

    Bowed against the gale
    and, melancholy as the dreary day
    a solitary figure stands
    forlorn and shivering
    'neath aphotic sky

    and

    as winter rains lash
    and squally winds thrash

    pounding! pounding!
    upon barren limbs

    still

    they remain outstretched
    as this defiant mother
    faces the elements
    knowing a myraid of buds
    will once more seek her boughs
    devouring her loneliness
    in the rebirth
    of spring.

    Poem 6

    Flushed

    Her petals curled,
    not with beauty who had
    ripened the lilac
    blooming 'pon her cheek,
    nor was pride all
    she stood for

    which had once asked
    a bee to leave her pollen,
    for his wings were bitten
    beyond attractive and
    she'd never taste honey
    as sweet as her.

    Though today she stood
    ablaze -
    a wild flower.

    Her perfumed scent was
    more than I could bare as
    the suns pastel presence
    scorched not only I, who was
    drinking bottled water

    but you whose roots were
    clawing at the spring.

    Selfish the way I let
    leaves become antique with
    rusting reds and auburns of
    certain death but

    it was true I loved you
    and all your beauty.

    I was just no match for summer.

  • Ingrid
    13 years ago

    Wow, nice poems Kay! I didn't care much for the funny ones, but these held my attention, especially the last one..I am curious to know who wrote it.

    Nice work, poets!

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    I agree. These are excellant.

  • Michael D Nalley
    13 years ago

    Can we expect to see some results by Easter?

  • Daisy if you do
    13 years ago

    Yes the judges should be done by Wednesday and I will post them all as soon as I get them.

  • Michael D Nalley
    13 years ago

    Thank you I am logging out because I feel threatened for some reason