New Poem - Please comment

Never wrote a poem in my life and have never studied but would like advice, so be honest. if i am no good i will stop

Twisted
Twisted thoughts haunt my mind
My anger is unleashed on all mankind
Wrong me and see what happens
My wrath is fierce
Like a sharp needle
Once pierced, the pain is all you will experience
You are all so pathetic; i can manipulate you in a second
Nice when i want to be
To use you to fufill my needs
When i am done
Don’t bother sticking around
For another second
I will destroy you before you know whats happened
All i ask is for a worthy opponent
I am bored with all these silly moments
This is all a game to me
Game called life
Were people are my puppets
And i pull the strings
Give me a challenge
Someone please
I think i am better than you
Prove me wrong
Surprise me ,for once be strong
Hurt me like i hurt you
Pain to me
Is the only thing that makes life seem real

Dark Place
I am in a dark place
Hiding my true face
Faking a laugh
Faking a smile
To ensure you don’t discover all my lies
I am not the girl you see
Just an imitation of the girl I wish I could be
I am dying inside
Praying for the pain to just melt away
Maybe if there is a god he will take pity
And strike me down here as I am sitting
I heard you are kind
Why are you letting all these thoughts enter my mind
Do you enjoy watching me cry