What do you think of this poetry?

  • laura lira
    13 years ago

    Oh how I miss my dear childhood
    The dawn of my life
    that time which will never come back

    What love, what dreams, what flowers,
    those beautiful afternoons
    in the shade of banana trees
    Under the orange groves.

    How beautiful are the days
    From the dawn of existence
    the soul breaths innocence
    like fragrance to flower
    The sea is calm lake,
    The sky a blue mantle,
    The world is a golden dream,
    The life a hymn of love!

    what dawns, what sun, what life
    what melodious nights
    in that sweet joy
    in that naive play
    The sky embroidery of stars
    A land full of flavors,
    The waves kissing the sand
    And the moon kissing the sea!

    Oh my childhood days,
    Oh my spring sky!
    How sweet life was not
    On that cheerful morning
    Instead of hurts now,
    I had such delights
    My mother’s caresses
    And my sisters kisses

    Free child of the mountains,
    I was well satisfied,
    Bare feet, bare arms,
    Running through meadows
    near the waterfalls,
    Behind the wings
    Of Blue butterflies!

    In those blissful times
    i used to reap cherries
    I climbed up to get the sleeves
    Played by the sea!
    I thought the sky was always beautiful
    I fell asleep smiling
    And awoke to sing!

    Oh how i miss my dear childhood
    The dawn of my life
    that time which will never come back
    What love, what dreams, what flowers,

    those beautiful afternoons
    in the shade of banana trees
    Under the orange groves.

  • Amreen
    13 years ago

    Well it is a beautiful poem emoting the innocence of childhood..
    I liked it..5/5