Death & Love .. My first two poems

Hi everyone, I wanted to share my poems with you. I'm hoping to get some feedback :D I'm from Saudi Arabia where there's very few people who are interested in English poetry.

My first poem "Love":

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1166461

My second poem "Death" :

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=1166463