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  • CuteThingsGoneWrong
    13 years ago

    Please read, don't have to comment on if you do not wish, Demonology & Heartache / Chained by the faith of the...

    I would appreciate feedback, but none is necessary.

  • Tara Kay
    13 years ago

    I commented on "Chained by the faith of the..."
    very good! The only thing i would say is see if you can shorten the title in someway, as i think maybe it being too long draws people away, but overall i liked it.

    xxx

  • CuteThingsGoneWrong
    13 years ago

    Thank you, sometime within the next week ill read one of yours :D