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- Name : Decayed
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Decayed
13 years ago

You get to choose TWO (only) poems of yours for me to comment on.

~ Abed :D

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Name : Jenni
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Jenni
13 years ago

I'd appreciate you commenting on my poem "Walk there where you will leave marks". I'd dearly appreciate it and I'd be more than grateful if you took a look at that poem. :)

Thanks in advance.

- Name : nouriguess
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nouriguess
13 years ago

Baddeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :P:P

"I fear"

w kamenaaaa

"When Sadness Masters Me"

:P
w rate them five hahaha
because I have been downrated too much lately LOL

thank you Abed hon (K)

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- Name : Decayed
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Decayed
13 years ago

^ Jenni, Done :)

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- Name : Decayed
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Decayed
13 years ago

^
Nora, ur wishes are under my command :D
Done!

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- Name : Jenni
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Jenni
13 years ago

Thanks a lot for your honest review on my poem. I appreciate it. :)

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- Name : Decayed
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Decayed
13 years ago

No need :)

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- Name : nouriguess
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nouriguess
13 years ago

Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
:(

When Sadness Masters Me ain't done, yet! X'(

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- Name : Decayed
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Decayed
13 years ago

:p
^ Done

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- Name : Tara Kay
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Tara Kay
13 years ago

Fruits of his labour

and

Succumbing to the darkness of early morning

Thanks

xx
love,
Tara-Kay

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- Name : Decayed
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Decayed
13 years ago

^
Done :D

Lovely poems.

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- Name : Tara Kay
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Tara Kay
13 years ago

Thank you, your,comments were very much appreciated.

x

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- Name : Decayed
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Decayed
13 years ago

No need:)
u're welcomed..

WHO'S NEXT?

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Name : Brittney Follett
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Brittney Follett
13 years ago

Hey Abed,

You already read my Teenage Rebellion poem (thank you very much) and I will be doing your three poems... but I'll never turn down free comments!

If you would like to do my poems:

Marionette
Fear's Comeuppance

Thanks!

- Name : Decayed
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Decayed
13 years ago

^
Done!

There was a double post :p

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- Name : Decayed
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Decayed
13 years ago

NEXT :D
?

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- Name : CuteThingsGoneWrong
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CuteThingsGoneWrong
13 years ago

If youd like Either or Both of my featured poems, Im not a fan of picking poems, If youd like to PM me poems you want me to read id be all over that :D

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- Name : Decayed
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Decayed
13 years ago

^
Done :)

NEXT?

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- Name : nouriguess
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nouriguess
13 years ago

Abeeedddd do these for me albii plzz lol

Never Let Go

andddd

Desires (Nonet) :P

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- Name : Decayed
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Decayed
13 years ago

^
Done :D

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- Name : Paul Gondwe
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Paul Gondwe
13 years ago

Can you please do mine...
"it wasnt meant to be".....
and..
"our last night"
..i would greatly appreciate it

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- Name : Decayed
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Decayed
13 years ago

^
DONE :)

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- Name : anjielblue
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anjielblue
13 years ago

"can't we try?"

and rate also please!!!
>>> tnxz

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- Name : Decayed
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Decayed
13 years ago

^ Done :)

NEXT?

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- Name : anjielblue
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anjielblue
13 years ago

Tnxz...it helps me a lot...

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- Name : Brittany C
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Brittany C
13 years ago

Iâ€™ll Survive
Little Wings

Thanks :)

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- Name : Decayed
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Decayed
13 years ago

^ DONE :)

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- Name : Lover Boii
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Lover Boii
13 years ago

Happy Birthday and I Left Her In Her Bedroom.

Thanks Abed!

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- Name : Something Diabolical
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Something Diabolical
13 years ago

Any 2 =)

ta!

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- Name : CuteThingsGoneWrong
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CuteThingsGoneWrong
13 years ago

What We Hate, We Make
/
Less Then a Memory

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- Name : CuteThingsGoneWrong
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CuteThingsGoneWrong
13 years ago

Just realized i already posted 2 poems haha.. And that this was a double post so ignore it :3

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- Name : BlueJay
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BlueJay
13 years ago

If this is still available, please read any two that interest you... I will return the favor...

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- Name : Decayed
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Decayed
13 years ago

SORRY GUYSSS>....

This will be done in 5 minutesss :)

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- Name : Lofallenve
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Lofallenve
13 years ago

If you could do
"For You"
and "Little Hero"
=)
I'll do the same for yours.

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- Name : Jess
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Jess
13 years ago

Can You Please Do "Lies Are What We Live For," And Another From My Latest? Thank Youu!
I Will Return The Favor!

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- Name : Decayed
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Decayed
13 years ago

Felicity and Jessi

DONE :)

Sorry guys. I'm really not noticing the new requests :S

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