A little help?

I'm not very new to the community anymore, but I still feel a little distant from everyone. If anyone can give me a little critique or feedback on my writing, and perhaps spread my name around to get me more involved with the site, I would be more than happy to return the favor. & please rate my poems, I would love to know if I need to improve.

Thank you.

Hey there...

i will try to rate all your poems that have not been rated.i am not good at commenting so bear it with me that i might not offer any advice but the rating will still give you a clear picture where u stand i guess..hope u do the same with my unrated poems