Song tilte Poetry contest :)

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Hi! this is my first poetry contest so please enjoy and have fun :)
    You can only enter once, but it also depends on how many people enter.

    You may use song title for you're poem or make you're own title
    BUT!
    It must relate to the song title or the song it's self.

    Listen to the song if you wish because you can or may be able to draw inspiration from the song.

    Be sure to be creative :)
    Be a good sport and be nice and curdious to others :)

    And again have fun and enjoy :) :)
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    Deadlines for reservations are October 1st 2011

    Deadline for poem submission is October 20th 2011

    side note- If anyone needs more time let me know so please don't feel pressured :)
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    1.Cut by Plumb
    -Roses and Lilys{DONE}
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    2.Fighter by Christina Aguilera
    -Larry chamberlin the god father{DONE}
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    3.Breath Again by Sara Bareilles
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    4.This is the stuff by Francesca Battistelli
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    5.Somebodys Me by Enrique Iglesias
    -Flynel{DONE}
    -Biya{DONE}
    6.Decode by Paramore
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    7.You Lost Me by Christina Aguilera
    -Roses and Lilys{DONE}
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    8.Little Sparrow by David Cook
    -dollwithafrown{DONE}
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    9.Out from under by Joanna Pacitti
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    10.She's like the wind by Patrick Swayze
    -TJ BECKER Airizona eagle{DONE}
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    11.Hungery Eyes by Eric Carmen
    -The Poetess{DONE}
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    12.Stereo Hearts by Gym Class Heroes Ft. Adam Levine
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    13. Through the tress by low shoulder
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    14. Only hope by Mandy Moore
    -Biya{DONE}
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    15. Fly to your heart by Selena Gomez
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    16. Fireflies by Owl city
    -Lebanese Phoenix{DONE}
    -The Poetess{DONE}
    17.Just a kiss byLady Antebellum
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    18.Toxic by Britney Spears
    -Larry Chamberlin the God Father{DONE}
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    19. Boats and birds by Gregory and the Hawk
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    20. Core of my addiction by Fireflight
    -Beautiful Chaos{DONE}
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    21. Crazy by simple plan
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    22. Not over you by Devin DeGraw
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  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Sorry i forgot but everyone will be rewarded with comments,rates, and i hope to do reviews on all poems :)

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    I'll take Fighter by Christina Aguilera, please.

  • lOsT sOuL
    13 years ago

    I'll take Somebodys Me by Enrique Iglesias, please.

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Hey, can you please add more titles?

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    How many more titles and if u have any in mind feel free to let me know :)

  • Poet on the Piano
    13 years ago

    I had the privilege of seeing Francesca Battistelli in concert last year! I love how you have this Christian artist up there- very bright and encouraging.

    I'll take "This is the Stuff"
    please and thanks :)

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Thank u ur very kind and I love that song an seein her in concert would be great :) I plan to do a hole poetry contest on just Kris Allen songs next :) :)

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Mmm, I'm not thinking of any, just increase the songs choice because I can't find anything to write of these choices :S

  • nouriguess
    13 years ago

    ^^^I agree.

    And how many titles we can reserve? make it two or three please I like writing like this, I mean when I'm given the title. XD

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Ok :)

  • dollwithafrown
    13 years ago

    "Little Sparrow", please.

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Ok I've changed things and added more songs everyone may now reserve only two titles :) :) have fun and enjoy :)

  • morgan
    13 years ago

    Hi, Can i reserve Just a Kiss please!! :)

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    FIREFLIES :)
    please

  • nouriguess
    13 years ago

    Firflies and Hungry Eyes please :)

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Flies on Fire

    Beneath cuddling oaken arms,
    I lay upon fuzzy bushes
    as untamed waters flow
    against me hastily,
    like my own thoughts.

    Through a starlit sky,
    an ivory moon gleams
    throbbing-
    hypnotizing my brain fluids,

    and I drift with kinky air
    as myriad of daisies grow weary
    of fluttering amidst damp grass,
    muttering love ballads
    and succumbing to warm nights
    of July.

    I inhale jovial tranquility
    and exhale negative energy
    as my dreamy eyes
    sigh and flicker,
    lustfully...

    And no longer I find myself
    asleep, floating closer to your
    darker thoughts
    perchance they twinkle again,
    with a handful of fireflies.

  • nouriguess
    13 years ago

    I am a Poetess not Poetress. :(

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    But you are a poetess with tresses!

    I'd also like to take Toxic by Britney Spears

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Oh sorry and a poem already I'm excited :) :)

  • nouriguess
    13 years ago

    Lol Sir Larry! :D

  • Brittany C
    13 years ago

    You Lost Me please

  • dollwithafrown
    13 years ago

    Little Sparrow
    by dollwithafrown

    In a nest, cradled by the pulse of his mother's heartbeat,
    his mind races like firecrackers and rainbows,
    and he clings to the thought that he's
    a bigger man that he'll ever really be.

    (he clings to the thought, he does.)

    His brothers are monstrous; the chirps of a lion's roar,
    and it takes him all his might and gut,
    breaking through his infant frame,
    to halt the rapid flutter of feathers.

    He breathes,

    only in his dreams,
    can he be a better man.

  • nouriguess
    13 years ago

    -Hungry Eyes-

    They tell me to never
    dream, to lock my
    eyes and slumber,

    whether between
    the jungles of my
    wooden words,
    where inspirations
    lay down their swords.

    Or...

    Beneath the tent
    of my stars-shaped
    misery, cuddling
    within the emptiness
    of time.

    They tell me to never
    let my reveries get that
    far, beholding not
    a single tint

    of orange

    whenever a sleepy dawn
    leans at my windowsills.

    They tell me to never
    believe in any poem that
    trills

    or in the love kids
    keep babbling about

    or in April.
    There's no April in their
    calendar, nor even in
    mine.

    They tell me to never
    dream, to lock my eyes
    and slumber,

    whether amidst my
    dusty loneliness
    or above, within the
    cerulean coat of God

    but to never dream,
    they tell me

    (your hungry eyes.)

    By : Noura Hatem.

  • Brittany C
    13 years ago

    You Lost Me

    Trust lost, eroded over time
    Lies; deceit.
    That's all I ever got.

    Shame....

    You embraced another
    behind my back; in public.
    Now you have lost me.

    Pain...

    It hurt at first; something fierce.
    Felt like a hand
    clutched my heart.

    Like rain,

    tears rolled, unchecked
    down my sore red checks.

    Sorrow,

    in the darkness I moped, feeling sorry.
    Anger enveloped me like a flame
    bring me out of my
    feeling sorry for myself trance.

    What a pitta-full state I was in.

    She didn't really want you
    used you; I laughed so hard.

    A smile touch me lips once again.

    Then you had the nerve to come to me
    You wanted me back!

    I laughed in your face.

    Sorry honey,
    that only happens
    in the senile dreams of a loser.
    For I knew better then that.

    Now content...

    I'm over you
    and your immature ways.
    So you lost me; lost everything.
    I don't feel sorry for you.

    The truth...

    You are not deserving
    of my love; affections.

    Nothing!

    Love will find me.
    My only hope for you,
    is that you learned your lesson.

    Now go cry,
    go cry to your mommy
    for she's the only one that cares.

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Wow great poems everyone :) its gonna be a tough decision and things are moving on very nicely better than i expected :) have fun and remember SMILES :) :) :)

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    I can't wait I'm getting excited :) :)

  • Brittany C
    13 years ago

    I would also like to try - Cut

  • Brittany C
    13 years ago

    Cut

    I'm cut;
    deep inside.
    My life blood
    is flowing out.

    Cut;
    it's when
    I feel relief,
    I can breathe.

    Pain;
    is strong.
    Numbness,
    it is finally gone.

    I just want
    to feel what
    you feel; emotions,
    other than this sadness.

    But I don't;
    I wait for it here
    and I search for it there
    but try as I might it eludes me.

    Cutting;
    releases the
    pent up things
    I can't get out myself.

    Warm;
    my blood drips
    to the wood floor
    where I sit by myself.

    Consumed
    by the shadows.
    Feeling lost to the world
    I don't want to die, I just want to feel.

    I want
    love in my life;
    It's been missing
    for far too long, forever.

    But
    I am hopeless.
    Unable to open up
    and trust I cannot give.

    Alone; I will stay
    for who would want
    to be with a cutter, loner.
    With more than just the physical scares you see?

    by: Brittany

  • Beautiful Chaos
    13 years ago

    Core of my Addiction please

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Peace for the Fighter

    Why did you make me a fighter?
    Thought you did me a favor
    with gin soaked breath, and
    cut to the bone sarcasm?

    Looking down from the top
    of a house on the hill
    haunted by your scorn;
    took decades to let go.

    Others rest easy in their
    modicum standards and means
    without the heart rending
    chase of the receding target.

    Still the challenge is there
    not for success - that's too easy;
    the important thing is becoming
    satisfied with who I am.

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Deadlines have been moved into October... Read the 1st post again/rules if u wish to know exactly when the deadlines are
    & thanxs for all the poems done so far and for participating hope u enjoy and have fun
    Thanxs :) :)

  • Biya
    13 years ago

    Somebodys Me by Enrique Iglesias

    Should I tell you?
    What I felt
    The moment you left
    'Cause my heart you theft

    Daily without you
    I go through hell
    You know I needed you
    Whenever I fell

    There's no one but me
    Standing alone all night
    Why could you not see?
    Why could you not forget the fight?

    I wish you were here
    When my eyes roll tear
    I wish a day to come
    When we should be near

    I want you to know
    Somebody loves you
    I want you to show
    That somebody, that somebody's me

    Did you ever try to know?
    Somebody cant live without you
    Somebody's heart will stop without you
    That somebody's me,that somebody's me.

  • Flynel
    13 years ago

    Somebody's me

    I see you walking by
    but you dont seem to see me to
    laughing around you dont even notice
    that Im standing there wanting you
    needing you all the time
    dont you even remember?
    well I do and that would never change
    even though you are gone
    the memories will stay
    it hurts like hell
    I wonder how this has gone wrong
    cause we were perfect together
    I really hope someday you
    will notice me again
    and before you forget me forever
    know that the one that
    will love you forever is me ..

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Biya,,,Fynel great poems but as u can see someone has already reserved "somebody's me"
    I'll see how there doing but I might be able to make an exception...I'll get back to u and let u know :)

  • Biya
    13 years ago

    Ok I am taking Only hope by Mandy

  • Biya
    13 years ago

    Only Hope by Mandy Moore

    Footsteps of my own
    Taken away by the waves
    All joys with air blown
    As I stand alone in the caves

    Glancing at the stars
    Sitting on the rock
    I tried to find how far
    I came with this shock

    So, I pray for me
    Let me imagine you the only
    Who could be
    My hero when I'm lonely

    I sigh hard till late
    & try to know
    What's written in my fate
    Yet with a hope I go

    A hope that you will
    Come back to be only mine
    And on the top of hill
    Moonlight will reflect our shine

  • Flynel
    13 years ago

    Sorry didnt noticed it, I just though that song I can relate to., But yeah,.. thanks

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    No problem but this i a one time exception...u've already entered and i love ur poem just watch out for next time and good luck and have fun :) :) SMILES <3***<3

  • Flynel
    13 years ago

    Thanks ! I will watch out next time xd its really fun to do soo (: