WHERE THE MOON NESTS' POEMS AND SCORES

  • abracadabra
    13 years ago

    * IF YOUR NAME ISN'T ON THE LIST BELOW, PLEASE DO NOT POST HERE. THE ONLY POSTS ALLOWED ARE POEMS FROM WTMNIS' TEAM LIST. THIS LIST CANNOT BE CHANGED. ANY COMMENTS AND DISCUSSION SHOULD BE TAKEN TO THE "MARATHON" THREAD.

    * CONTEST STARTS 00:00 3 OCT PNQ TIME

    * MODERATORS: If this thread goes beyond 100, please don't lock it, but I will try to make new ones on time if need be. Also, please delete any posts here that aren't poems (unless they're from me!).

    WTMNIS TEAM LIST AND SCORES: 226
    Amreen
    Bird of paradise: 7+7+8+7+3+8
    Dark Secrets: 3+7+3+8+8+8
    Ethereous Abyssus Lupus xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    Even Angels Cry xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    Liliana: 7+7+7+8+7
    Roses and lilys: 7
    Senyru: 8
    The Poet 8
    Tara Kay: 8+8+7+9+8+7
    Jenni xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    The Poetess: 8+9+3+8+8+7

    THE THEMES FOR EACH ROUND

    THE POINT SYSTEM
    * Each submitted poem, if it complies with the theme of the round, will earn an easy 5 points straight away for your team, regardless of quality.
    * Poems will also be roughly judged for quality- a maximum of 5 points can be earned for a high quality poem (giving a maximum total of 10).

    HOW TO RACE
    * The Great Marathon starts on 00:00 3 October, PnQ time.
    * Anyone can start the race by submitting a poem for the first round in this thread.
    * Another team member then completes the second round, and so on.
    * A person who has submitted a poem MAY NOT submit another entry until FOUR further rounds have been completed by other members of the team.
    * All poems MUST be new and submitted here by the authors themselves.
    * You may plot your team strategy within your club. CLUB LEADERS, it is up to you to do all you can to get your team's entries racing along. Bribe, threaten, shame, PM, blackmail...but get those rounds completed!
    * With each entry, PLEASE LIST the Lap #, Round #, and the theme with your title.
    * If all 13 rounds have been completed, the team can start from the Round 1 theme again to earn more points in further laps. These laps are unlimited.
    * The team with the most points wins. Individual team members who gain the most points will also be recognised.
    * It all ends on 00:00 9 October, PnQ time.

    GOOD LUCK!!

  • Tara Kay
    13 years ago

    Round 1
    Lap 1

    21 syllables

    Farewell

    Wandering
    through clouds
    reaching heavens
    gate
    I biw to the lord
    and bid farewell
    to you.

  • Dark Secrets
    13 years ago

    Round 2, lap one

    Tanka

    Fever

    Warmness runs 'neath skin
    so cold is the crust above it
    Yet none hold the remedy
    Lo! It collides crashing
    Affected by the harsh winds of love

  • average thoughts
    13 years ago

    Round 3,lap one

    Water

    Many ways it hurts
    but still the most painful
    is through eyes.

    Helpless
    against it's nature of resurrecting
    what dead inside.

    Ripes the fruit of memories
    and burns
    what left behind.

    Dissolves the sweetness of heart
    in river of salt
    flowing with smile.

  • nouriguess
    13 years ago

    Round #4 Lap #1

    Includes the 'microscope' word in it.

    If only I could microscope
    my tomorrows within your eyes
    observing whether I'm a victim
    or a victorious dream.

    If only I could outrun time
    perhaps with my glasses,
    so round and artless
    or with the love I have within
    so crescent-shaped.

    If only, darling, I could
    see you with a rose reddening
    my nights, beckoning for my
    lines to nest outside mortality,
    or with a stream stuck between
    your fingers...

    If only I could blackmail
    these satin meteors within your
    eyes, but they caught me
    at fault once my heart skipped
    a beat, even before I could
    catch them skipping over
    my heart and daylight.

    Yet I swear, darling

    I'll grope amidst this nowhere
    till I find my way towards you.

  • Liliana
    13 years ago

    Round #5 Lap #1

    Free Verse:

    Caffeine Memories

    My head lies on
    his chest, and his
    hearts beats faster
    at every passing second.

    Our eyes give in,
    so we can meet in
    dreams...as love
    lingers at every kiss.

    The ones he presents
    me with in our sweet
    illusions, as he holds me
    in his arms I cherish this hug.

    I wake up every morning
    with a smile and the whisper
    - I love you - the one he
    dearly says in my ear.

    Running his fingers
    in my hair, as our lips
    meet and the sun shines
    troughs the window over us.

    He says he will be absent
    for just a minute, when I notice
    the scent of fresh coffee flies
    in the air, as I follow it.

    But the taste of it cannot
    compare to his kiss, so as this
    caffeine gets cold I surrender
    to his lips once more.

  • Tara Kay
    13 years ago

    Round 6 Lap 1

    Wild Card (PnQ Member)

    King Phoenix

    His resurrection eternal,
    as his wings envelope
    the darkest soul
    allowing his tears,
    so simplistic
    heal the destroyed
    being,
    like the poetry he pens.
    His words are far
    from nonchalant
    unlike the heart he homes
    within his manly flight.
    He is a phoenix in
    the land of Lebanon
    and is still
    the king of the kingdom of
    brilliance.

  • Brittany C
    13 years ago

    Round 7 lap 1

    Cat

    Laying in the sun
    soaking up heat; purring.
    Looking up, meowing at me
    talking like I would understand.

    Going where I go
    standing behind me;
    trying to trip me up.

    Soft to the touch
    I pet you
    As you lay on my chest
    With your eyes shut tight.

  • Dark Secrets
    13 years ago

    Round 8, lap one

    Write

    Pen oozes all over the paper white
    These days I feel I just can't write
    Black and blue blobs all over the page
    Thoughts in my mind start to fight
    I badly need to scream with rage

  • average thoughts
    13 years ago

    Round 9, lap one

    P & Q member

    Adreamer

    So small with a
    heart so big,
    Spreading d seed of love
    as sweet as fig.

    Optimistic and funloving
    with friendly attitude,
    A minute spend with her
    is worth my gratitude.

    Faithful to those
    who believes in her,
    Always keeps your secrets
    and makes it a blur.

    It luks like a dream
    to have an angel as my friend,
    I wish we wud stay together
    forever with hand in hand..

  • nouriguess
    13 years ago

    Round 10 Lap 1

    Retreating Rat

    Burrow beneath breadcrumbs
    the robust rat crawled relitavely round
    the darkened drawers thinking damn dear doris
    why did she set the rat trap
    to catch my blessed being?

  • Tara Kay
    13 years ago

    Round 11 lap 1

    Passing Life

    I am feverently falling
    into the pit of living hell
    and as I gasp for breath
    clutching this oxygen air
    I am desperately willing life to pass me by.

  • Liliana
    13 years ago

    Round 12 lap 1

    P & Q member

    Senyru

    He melts thousands of
    hearts, shinning at every
    single word with the sun.

    Or the cold raindrops that
    surround his blessed
    existence in this kingdom...

    of hateful atrocities yet
    amazing wonders we call life,
    as he makes it worth to live.

    The day I met this sweet
    human being, lingers in my
    mind as I feel thankful I did.

    As he keeps shinning brighter
    at every breath, at every word of
    care he shows to each one of us.

  • Dark Secrets
    13 years ago

    Round 1, Lap 2

    21 syllables:

    Tears

    Twinklings of diamonds
    slowly find their way
    around sinuous cheeks
    as the heart lets out its juices

  • nouriguess
    13 years ago

    Round 2 Lap 2

    Tanka:

    Images formed,
    whenever I threw thoughts
    in those rivers
    of your memories
    to create my ripples.

  • nouriguess
    13 years ago

    I want my Poet back in. :)

  • average thoughts
    13 years ago

    Lap 2,Round four

    Free verse

    Gratitude

    Years, nothing grows old for me;
    you are still the same holding my
    affection.

    Sharing with me what truly yours;
    an image of kindness,

    made me a part of
    your smile.

    Pebbles were there,
    but you told me how
    to use them wisely;
    made a road for my
    destination.

    I can't even thank you
    on this special day;
    your modesty always leads your
    gratification.

    I wish we could be together
    like hands of time;
    writing every moment of life as our
    composition.

  • Tara Kay
    13 years ago

    Round 5 Lap 2

    Mocroscopic Angels

    Through the eyes
    of love
    I see
    the stars twinkling
    in reflection
    and through
    heavens microscope
    the angels are watching
    over the young, old,
    wise and naive.
    The stars twinkle distantly
    but
    they shine extra bright
    for you.

  • Dark Secrets
    13 years ago

    Round 6, Lap 2

    Wild card; 5 lines:

    Copy

    As a shadow I lurk around the rooms
    and follow your every move and stir
    Alike you in every twist and turn
    I scare your spirit out of you sometimes
    Reflected in my soul your evil features emerge

  • Liliana
    13 years ago

    Round 7, Lap 2

    Cats:

    Janitors of dark

    In the realm of dark
    it's eyes twinkle;
    revealing what sun hides.

    Rules
    the voice of silence
    with
    Malevolent
    Echoic
    Opaque
    Waves.

    Blessed with curse of shaping,
    what comes their way;
    responsible for
    myths and beliefs
    of past.

  • abracadabra
    13 years ago

    Scoreboard updated. You still have 3 Happy Hours to use (apart from the general ones.)

  • nouriguess
    13 years ago

    Aabab

    Lovekiller

    You were my sweet victim - you say
    the one with which who I got to play
    this deja vu keeps flashing in my mind
    but still lacerated I hopefully pray
    that your love stops turning unkind.

    I wish to forget this merciless attack
    but I am not following the right track
    since my heart still craves for passion
    even though I cannot get it back
    as I become more ill and ashen.

  • average thoughts
    13 years ago

    Lap 2,Round 9..

    PnQ member: Tara Kay

    Goddess

    She loops

    amidst my imagination
    with her poetic
    butterflies,

    brushing a horizon
    of April suns
    and pinky verses.

    She unfrocks the
    sky and wears balm
    stars around her lips,
    versifying my world

    of love and enemies.

    --

    I package my half-eaten
    moons within her pocket
    of security,

    as she dabs,
    in that nostalgic way
    my palms

    where blear autumns
    hid and

    withered.

  • Tara Kay
    13 years ago

    Round 10 Lap 2
    April Animosity

    Amidst Aprils sunny showers
    I danced delicately between the breeze
    as the clouds collected in the sky.
    Raindrops ran along a painted path
    forming precious puddles
    amongst some soil.

  • Dark Secrets
    13 years ago

    Round 11, Lap 2

    Green fingers

    They dance upon the keys, black and white
    To turn the gracious notes to gold
    Amidst the notorious music that grows
    Beneath the nurtured words felt strong
    Their scent spread wide across the garden blown

  • Liliana
    13 years ago

    Round 12, Lap 2

    Halloween Hiding

    Red Noses,
    squirting water
    with those freekish grins,
    Masks that hide
    the warmth of a smile
    behind the witches pointy hat.

    Children stealing candy
    from little old ladies,
    throwing eggs and alighting
    the trash.

    Each year on Halloween,
    I ponder the thought,
    that these people I see
    are figures of imagination,
    and not the ghosts that
    haunt my dreams.

  • nouriguess
    13 years ago

    Might be my last poem on here:

    Round 13 Lap 2

    Ode To My Toilet

    It circles within its blank seat a
    canvas of brazen secrets, and some
    wet reveries too, some ashed forgotten
    letters and incinerated dreams.

    Auspicious yet never evasive,
    poetic by all means.

    It rouses my obduracy to realize that
    our dearests are those whom we never
    behold.

    Delicious, I wouldn't state this
    yet with confidence I'd say that

    my toilet is my inspiration.

  • average thoughts
    13 years ago

    Lap 3,Round one,21 slylable

    flood

    An uninvited,
    unexpected guest
    plundering
    what we save
    all life.

  • abracadabra
    13 years ago

    Scoreboard updated. You still have 3 unused HH remaining.

    A new general HH has been announced.

  • Liliana
    13 years ago

    Lap 3, Round 2

    Tanka

    Tomorrow Awakens

    A distant breeze sweeps
    through the January air,
    rustling the gentle
    trees as they rest peacefully
    in the dawn of tomorrow.

  • nouriguess
    13 years ago

    Edited: sorry forgot to wait for my turn!

  • Dark Secrets
    13 years ago

    Lap 3, Round 3

    Water

    Rumble of the waterfall

    Senses awakening from the drum roll
    High above, thumping my eardrum
    Playing it like bass, drumming through
    Mind is still as the water falls from high above
    and images whiz in my mind, refreshing
    like citrus bubbling softly in the cracks of my brain
    soothing the bruises of memory
    and I dive under the gleaming clear Estrada
    of the underworld of wondrous liquid dreams

  • nouriguess
    13 years ago

    Lap 3 Round 4

    Free Verse:

    They are very few
    those who knew
    about our love, darling.

    They envy my lips
    of your cheeks,
    they wished to have
    you by their side
    all night long.

    Yet, you've never
    forsaken my sky.
    Everytime I open my
    window you skulk that
    pretty sweet laugh

    behind your wild clouds.

  • average thoughts
    13 years ago

    Round 5, lap 3

    Germs of pain

    A deceit in love
    brings along
    the germs
    of pain.

    Highly contaminated
    with diseases like
    emptiness and silence.

    Sometimes burns the heart
    with unforgettable past
    and
    sometimes freezes it
    with cold thoughts.

    Even undetectable
    under the
    microscope of hapiness
    on the slide of tears.

  • Tara Kay
    13 years ago

    Round 6 lap 3

    Wild card 5 lines

    Speechless Tears

    No words to explain how
    these spirited tears escape
    my auspicious eyes or why
    they drench my cheeks
    with their crystal reflections

  • abracadabra
    13 years ago

    Your scoreboard updated.

    Please remember to wait for FOUR rounds between poems. You may be penalised the next time it happens.

    You still have 3 unused HH remaining and remember to use the general HH being announced as well.

  • Liliana
    13 years ago

    Round 7, Lap 3

    Cats:

    Cats In My Garden

    Never bored
    of mewing, hewing my pews,
    drinking their milk
    by my window, like furry
    angels!

    In my garden, there were
    they, lurking for rats,
    preparing for hasty
    jumps and deadly
    attacks.

    I sneak in slow steps
    to their hideout,
    then suddenly with
    their mews they scare me
    out

    Edited: I am really sorry I made a mistake and posted another poem instead of mine, in our club we make threads and I posted the wrong one, I am really sorry.

  • Tara Kay
    13 years ago

    Round 8 Lap 3 HH

    Acrostic

    Sweet surrender (words make no sense anymore)

    Suculent juices that
    wander in the
    ever sweet soul that
    envelopes
    the heart I nest.

    so I will
    undoubtedly lick the
    rainbow juices of
    robotic tears and
    escape reality and sense
    not for a minute
    do I
    even understand the words you
    read.