LIKE THE FLOWING RIVER'S POEMS AND SCORES #2

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 14 Round #4 (Free verse)

    I've seen many miracles
    and witnessed myriads of jaw-dropping events.
    But the only thing I crave seeing
    is a mother camel delivering...

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 14 round # 5
    (must have word "microscope")

    I take a microscope to my life,
    look for what's disguised,
    for the bad things hide.
    we are quite the pair,
    our life fair, though you've
    had you're share of sad care.
    We are quite the pair,
    let's join hands and be a pair.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 14 Round 6. Wild card (Water)

    Bring me the water
    from the stand, please
    the glass that's covered
    in smears of cheese;

    no, don't bother to wash it,
    I'm not abused,
    I take it like I take my life,
    overly used.

  • Sunshine
    13 years ago

    Lap 14 Round 7 Cats

    White, black, or golden
    they all have your tiny
    sharp claws, though
    unlike yours, theirs
    are never used against me.
    Faithfully following my steps
    trusting this leader who
    doesn't trust her steps.
    Furry, cozy almost the
    way it feels to be in your
    arms, wrapped up in
    that comfortable thought
    of being safe, except that
    cats never run away
    the way you do.

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 14 Round #8 aabab scheme

    I pluck my dull calendar
    in the nights of solitude and surrender
    to petrifying owls and howls
    that put my heart into a blender,
    as the fear of losing you crawls.

  • RSJ
    13 years ago

    Lap 14, Round 9, PNQ member
    To the one n only Close friend, MEME

    She wrote words that spoke her mind,
    That touched my heart,
    She wrote a letter,
    As a symbol of her trust,
    Enclosed with words for the cold hearted,
    See cold is only the absence of heat,
    Without her heat i'm heartless,
    And no mind makes the right decisions,
    Without feelings..
    She makes me human..
    I once stood heartless,
    But now,
    Forever changed...
    Forever heated,
    In her coolness

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 14 Round 10. Alliterative verse

    Howdy how handsome heavy
    we welcome ye to these ways
    here, help healthy happiness:
    when once worn, wash underwear

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 14 round 11 five lines

    You bring me sweet dreams
    but you just did something mean
    an act I can't believe, and I won't support
    don't play a girls heart, an act beyond me
    maybe if you like me I can set you free.

  • Michael D Nalley
    13 years ago

    Lap 14 Round 12

    Halloween 11

    It seems Michael Myers is back,
    Wearing a mask dressed in black.
    Down in the valley. or up a hill,
    Some evil spirits are hard to kill.
    First he escaped the loony bin,
    Trying to return to his next of kin.
    They just can't capture him any more
    He will murder again like before.

  • abracadabra
    13 years ago

    Scoreboard updated. A very well done to you all!!

    You have 1 personal HH remaining.

    Please note: All poems MUST be new and unused. There were some 0 scores here, depicting disqualified poems. If this keeps happening, I might have to deduct points.

    Keep up the excellent teamwork! A new general HH has been announced.

  • PinkyPrincess
    13 years ago

    Lap #14 Round #13

    Toilet
    ------------

    Just flush me down the toilet
    the way you flushed everything.
    My worth to you is now clear -
    clearly I am nothing to you.

    I gave you all that I have
    but nothing was good enough
    and now you compare me to the worst,
    most disgusting thing ever.

    Just flush me down the toilet,
    let me splash and swim away.

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap #15 Round #1

    21 syllables
    --------------
    Make a wish, and blow
    your candles. You may
    see me once more, just
    like that September night.

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap #15 Round #2 (tanka)

    Nature

    In the aftermath
    of natural disasters,
    life bonds are strengthened
    though many lives are shattered.
    Nature wants what's best for us.

  • Sunshine
    13 years ago

    Lap # 15. Round # 3

    Like Water, Like Love

    I told you, not all the vital things
    in life need a color, or a certain
    shape to establish its significance.
    Sometimes the things we can't
    put in words, adjectives, nor figures
    may be just too important that
    it's very hard to define them,
    just like love.
    You asked for a proof, and I
    handled you a clear glass of water,
    and a wet towel that soothed your
    sweat. And I was very glad that
    you finally understood!

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 15 Round 4 Free verse

    Like the flowing Tigris River
    you wash me clean of concerns
    refresh my outlook on life
    and make me want to be better
    than I really could be;
    each of you inspires me,
    put words that flow from my heart,
    proud you named me your godfather.

  • Boy
    13 years ago

    Lap 15 round 5 [microscope]

    Your eyes like a microscope, look after me
    Even I am in the second corner of this world
    Your heart follows me like a fast track light
    Does not matter how many miles I am away
    your whispers catch my attention quickly
    every time among thousand of people rush
    That is how u pursue me with your love fragrance

  • RSJ
    13 years ago

    Lap 15 round 6, wild card, 5lines

    The ultimate stage is to strive against oppression
    That's my religon,wherever and whenever the cruelty
    of imperialism, the sectarianism of division or injustice
    Of the hypocrite raises it's ugly head be sure
    'I' make this solemn pledge to take it's head of

  • Michael D Nalley
    13 years ago

    Lap15 round7

    Feline Friend
    I've often tried to comprehend
    The nature of my feline friend
    Descended from royal bloodlines
    From a vast zodiac where Leo shines
    To Narnia, or a place like that
    Origins of a domestic cat?

  • PinkyPrincess
    13 years ago

    Round 15 Lap 8
    aabab rhyme scheme

    I started writing a letter to you
    Hoping you'll write back to me too
    I wrote straight from my heart
    What else can I do?
    I keep missing you more everyday we're apart.

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 15 Round 9
    9. PnQ member
    "believeinlove87"

    Believeinlove87
    let me tell you she found it
    and gives hope to others
    She is kind
    and speaks her mind
    She's a women who shines
    like a rose divine

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    LTFR declares Happy Hour # 3 (Deal 2, 1/2 the wait period. New wait period is now 3 for one hour from this posting)

    Lap 15 # 10. Alliterative verse

    Face the facts friends and fellows
    I don't do diddle in 'dis draw
    alliteration gets me sevens
    so send me not solicitations.

  • Sunshine
    13 years ago

    Lap # 15 Round # 11

    They asked me to write only five lines,
    but I have so many endless thoughts
    about you, emotions, and craziness.
    So I decided not to, for even five
    books would be few.

  • Elizabeth
    13 years ago

    Lap 15, Round 12 (Halloween)

    My favorite thing about Halloween
    is not the candy, chocolate or chips,
    it's not dressing up or getting to stay out late,
    not the prank calls or ding-dong-ditch,
    it's not the haunted houses or the parties,
    nor is it running from the police or acting like lunatics.
    My favorite thing about Halloween is:
    I get to do it with my friends!

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap # 15 Round #13
    Toilet
    --------------------
    Our story began along time ago
    It started with my diapers and your seat
    We share a lot of memories together
    Some are good ones and the others aren't so good
    But we both agree to the fact
    That we need each other everyday
    That is the story of my toilet and me

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap #16 - Round #1 (21 syllabs)

    You Made Me Drunk

    Your high heels on,
    rimmed rouge lips,
    designer shades, skin dress,
    two whiskey shots...
    I became drunk!

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 16 # 2. Tanka

    Beaches are mountains
    that have just gotten too tired
    of holding up heads
    and floated down to the sea -
    millennial vacation.

  • Sunshine
    13 years ago

    Lap 16 Round #3

    Water
    ----------
    What if the sky stops raining?
    And rivers stop flowing?
    And oceans start drying?
    And ships stop floating?
    Will the Earth survive ?

  • Elizabeth
    13 years ago

    Lap 16, Round 4 (Free Verse)

    Dream-Nightmare [Diamante]

    Dream
    pleasant, vivid
    enlightening, aspiring, fantasizing
    inviting, harmonious, unwanted, choatic
    frightening, overwhelming, haunting
    intense, unpleasant
    Nightmare

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 16, Round #5 (include microscope)

    Kiss Me

    If you could microscope
    my feelings,
    you'd see how
    my DNA no more duplicates
    or replicates
    when I see you,
    how mitochondria become
    energy-free,
    and how my mitotic divisions
    become meotic
    when you kiss me.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 16 # 6. Wild Card (Five lines)

    Give me the site with the notices
    of heartbreaks - how many friends
    are suffering today; find it at
    Poems and Quotes where good people
    are helping to restore shattered lives.

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap 16 Round #7
    Cats
    --------------------
    Tripped by a rock, and fall down the stairs
    Then lost my glasses and got every one's stares
    I stepped on my glasses by mistake, got pushed
    by a kid running so I fall back again
    I started to shout out loudly
    everyone was laughing at me badly
    All those things started to happened
    after stepping on that Black cat's tail

  • Sunshine
    13 years ago

    Lap 16 Round 8, poem

    aabab

    Though I love my pride, in every single way,
    but I hold no excuses to make, nor words to say
    for your confidence hits hard against my wall
    unable to fight you, and definitely not today
    and hence I smile, and truly speak nothing at all.

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 16 - Round 9
    (pnq member)

    Sunny

    I've got a pocket full
    of sunshine and a club manager
    that out-shines the sun.
    Rania, in Arabic,
    she aspires for heights,
    but little does she know
    that heights can't reach her,
    anymore.

  • Elizabeth
    13 years ago

    Lap 16, Round 10 (Alliterative verse)

    Since this contest of clubs has commenced,
    I've scrambled, struggled and stressed
    over what poems to present, as the pressure mounts
    I'm counting down the clock before carpal tunnel sets in.

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap 16 Round #11
    Five lines
    --------------------
    I am tired of not loving you
    its killing me from the inside
    I can no longer hide my stares
    my, giggles, my heartbeats
    But still I know, we can never be

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 16 # 12. Halloween

    Whoever would have thought
    that Steven's untimely death
    would lead to a massive run
    on black turtleneck sweaters
    for Halloween costumes
    of Zombie Steven Job.
    Will they go bobbing for Apples?

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 16 - Round 13 (toilet)

    I miss the old days
    when our grandparents used to answer
    the call of nature in nature itself.
    But now, modernized toilets have
    invaded our homes,
    preventing us from being mesmerized by nature
    when answering its call.

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 17 Round 1 21 syllables

    I am afraid I'd die
    from the cold without
    now that I have died from
    the cold within.

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap 17 Round #2

    Tanka
    --------------------
    Sleeplessness, wrecked nights
    I hear screams in every
    corner, Release Me !!
    I am now for ever trapped
    in their hallucination.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 17 # 3. Water

    Seas in trees not good news
    tsunamis aren't welcome at all
    too much work for the crews
    getting their boats off building walls