LIKE THE FLOWING RIVER'S POEMS AND SCORES #2

  • Sunshine
    13 years ago

    Lap 17, Round number 4, Free verse

    Crush

    If I can't find the right words to use
    as I attempt to confess for you how
    happy I am to wake you up in the morning
    and to find you right there before me,
    eagerly succeeding to change the course
    of my entire day without planning,
    then dear excuse my loss of words
    for you have turned to be a plot
    that I can't modify into poems,
    and I have turned to be a newbie
    who doesn't seem to function without
    her map, anymore.

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 17 - Round #5 (include: microscope)

    The last time I observed
    your heart tissues under
    the microscope,
    I found them secreting blue blood.
    I know you're not a vampire,
    are you?
    Or is it perhaps your love for me
    is so untrue?

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap 17 Round #6
    Wild card (21 Syllables)
    --------------------
    If you let go of your pride
    widely opened up your heart
    only then I can fix you

  • Elizabeth
    13 years ago

    Lap 17, Round 7 (Cats)

    Stray

    How much you've grown
    since the winter solstice,
    that first night we met
    under the street light.

    Do you remember
    when I approached you that night,
    how I whisked you of the streets
    from a surely bitter demise.

    A sight for sore eyes,
    covered in filth and smelling of fumes,
    frostbitten on your face
    and your pads too.

    But in looking past
    your outward appearance,
    into your eyes,
    I could tell you were different.

    Taking you into my arms,
    holding you close to stay warm,
    I whisper into your ear:
    "Let's go home."

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 17 Round 8
    8. AABA rhyme scheme
    "a fair madens rose"

    A rose
    is so much sweeter than those
    though some shine like stars
    always moving close
    removing my scars

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    LAP 17 # 9. PnQ member

    Nana, you invited me into your world
    never knowing whether I was flake
    or someone more worthy of your trust;
    now months later a flag is unfurled
    of a bond that was made for friendship's sake;
    may you always find my intentions just

  • Sunshine
    13 years ago

    Lap 17 round # 10 Alliterative verse

    Dewdrops dwell in delicate
    daisies dripping
    during dazzling dawns
    when daylight dashes
    in dizzy delight delivering
    damp and distinguished distilled dances.

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 17 - Round 11 (5 Lines)

    I've lost my senses
    during my first kiss.
    It felt eerie, sensual,
    and was sure to be missed now after
    blowing candles have burned my lips.

  • PinkyPrincess
    13 years ago

    Lap 17 Round #12

    Halloween
    ----------

    Time for the masquerade ball
    dressed in a Victorian gown,
    with my face and eyes covered
    with a hand-made Venetian mask.

    It was time to the be the belle of the ball,
    on this enchanting Halloween night.

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap 17 Round 13

    Toilet
    -----------
    It was because of you
    that I learned how to let go...
    of my burning desires,
    raging yellow fluids,
    and smelly s-shaped shits.
    It was because of you
    that I learned why we aren't Gods,
    and that we'd never be ones.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    LAP 18 # 1. 21 syllables

    Daughters give hope
    for keeping you busy
    long past the time
    you'd much rather be resting.

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 18 - Round 2

    (tanka)

    P&Q

    Too good to be true,
    a great site like P and Q,
    where you find your self,
    get to know the best people
    and run with poetic winds.

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 18 Round 3 (water)

    Water follows
    those that pee
    for a shower is in need
    for lil children are unclean

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap 18 Round #4
    Free verse
    --------------------
    I want you to teach me how
    to love you, show me how a
    heart should beat when its
    falling.

    I promise you I will be a student
    in your school of love, and maybe
    one day I would take the ultimate
    test, and win your heart.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    LAP 18 # 5. Include the word "microscope"

    What if the telescope really saw small stuff
    and a microscope brought far things near
    our understanding of the universe may be really
    just the reverse of how it does appear.

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap #18 - Round #6
    Wild Card (free verse)

    Chained

    I'm chained to this bed,
    beside a roaring fire.
    Darling, why have you
    locked my heart and swallowed
    the key?
    All I wanted,
    was you to love me.

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 18 Round 7 cats

    Kisses of joy
    as you cuddle next to me,
    purring softly
    and you nibble my nose.
    You are silly,
    stuck up, like some spoiled
    rich kid.
    Oh I love you so
    my cute black kitty kat

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap 18 Round #8
    aabab rhyme scheme
    --------------------
    The idea of marriage is a bit too scary
    But I'm willing to try, if he was like Larry
    A gentleman, so kind, sweet, and sincere
    He would be the one that I'd want to marry
    Someone who is always willing to hear

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    LAP 18 # 9. PnQ member

    Meme, if you find yourself in the dark woods
    of a confused and sleepless night,
    worries bestriding your bedposts,
    taunting you with dire threats
    of imagined consequences
    PM me, dear, I'll always have your back.

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 18 - round #10 (Alliterative verse)

    Cars cross countless corners
    confusing cautious passengers
    with countless collisions,
    crumbling in circles and
    costing a collection of cool coffins.

  • PinkyPrincess
    13 years ago

    Lap 18 Round 11
    (Five Lines)

    Cuddling oaken arms encricle me
    and I flow with my thoughts
    along hasty waters
    that tickle my senses
    like warm autumn winds.

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap 18 Round 12
    Halloween
    --------------------
    Trick or Treat ?
    I skipped a beat,
    when you came out
    and screamed,
    did I scare you dear ?

    Trick or Treat ?
    All the lights in the street,
    went black all of a sudden
    now the way is guided by
    the yellow moon glow.

  • Sunshine
    13 years ago

    Lap # 18

    round 13

    Toilet

    What would a sane poet write
    about toilets, if not talking
    about nasty stuff that would
    bring on boards a laughter,
    but what if toilets are actually
    the perfect places to write at,
    when we have a creepy contest
    to look after

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap #19 - Round #1 (21 syllabs)

    Lucky Number

    Twenty one is my
    lucky number.
    See? I can easily do
    this form, in seconds.

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 19 Round 2 (TANKA)

    Miles apart so hold
    on so tight, never let go
    friends forever, you
    and me, gave death a treaty,
    love is a special greeting.

  • abracadabra
    13 years ago

    This thread can be LOCKED. Please go to your brand spanking new #3 one! Wellllll done. Keep it up, it's Happy Hour!