LIKE THE FLOWING RIVER'S POEMS AND SCORES #3

  • abracadabra
    13 years ago

    * IF YOUR NAME ISN'T ON THE LIST BELOW, PLEASE DO NOT POST HERE. THE ONLY POSTS ALLOWED ARE POEMS FROM LTFR'S TEAM LIST. THIS LIST CANNOT BE CHANGED. ANY COMMENTS AND DISCUSSION SHOULD BE TAKEN TO THE "MARATHON" THREAD.

    * CONTEST STARTS 00:00 3 OCT PNQ TIME

    * MODERATORS: If this thread goes beyond 100, please don't lock it, but I will try to make new ones on time if need be. Also, please delete any posts here that aren't poems (unless they're from me!).

    LTFR'S TEAM LIST AND SCORES: 1947 (includes 192 bonus points from HH)
    Michael D Nalley: 7+9+8+8+8+8+9+9+8+8+9+8+9+8
    Elizabeth 7+7+9+7+8+8+8
    annika xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    Mathew Scutt: 8+7+7+8+7+7+7+8+7+8+7
    believeinlove (Holly): 2 xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    Alone (hassan): 6+6+7+7+6+7+6+8+7+8+7
    Larry: 8+9+8+10+7+10+8+8+10+8+8+8+8+7+8+8+8+
    9+0+8+10+8+8+0+9+8+8+8+8+8+7+7+9+9+8+
    10+7+7+9+8+7+7
    Rabea: 9+7+7+7+6+7+8+8+7+7+8+8
    Sarah (pinkyprinces): 7+7+6+8+7+8+6+6+7+8+7+7+8+6+8+7+6+7+7
    +8+8+7+8+8+7+7+7+8+7
    Girl (Meeme): 8+6+7+8+7+7+6+6+7+7+7+9+7+9+8+7+9+8+7
    +7+8+7+6+7+7+7+7+7+7+7+7+8+6+7+7
    Jon xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    sumit khanduri xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    Innocent Fairy (Kristian): 7+6+6+6+8+7+6+7+6+7+7+8+8+7+7+7+6+6+6+8+7+6+7+6
    Freeze Tyler xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    Natalie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    Ms Sunshine: 8+9+8+8+7+7+0+8+8+8+0+7+7+7+8+8
    Lebanese Phoenix: 7+8+7+8+6+7+7+9+7+6+8+8+7+0+7+7+7+8+6
    +9+8+8+8+7+7+8+8+10+9+9+7+8+7+7+9+6

    THE THEMES FOR EACH ROUND

    THE POINT SYSTEM
    * Each submitted poem, if it complies with the theme of the round, will earn an easy 5 points straight away for your team, regardless of quality.
    * Poems will also be roughly judged for quality- a maximum of 5 points can be earned for a high quality poem (giving a maximum total of 10).

    HOW TO RACE
    * The Great Marathon starts on 00:00 3 October, PnQ time.
    * Anyone can start the race by submitting a poem for the first round in this thread.
    * Another team member then completes the second round, and so on.
    * A person who has submitted a poem MAY NOT submit another entry until SIX further rounds have been completed by other members of the team.
    * All poems MUST be new and submitted here by the authors themselves.
    * You may plot your team strategy within your club. CLUB LEADERS, it is up to you to do all you can to get your team's entries racing along. Bribe, threaten, shame, PM, blackmail...but get those rounds completed!
    * With each entry, PLEASE LIST the Lap #, Round #, and the theme with your title.
    * If all 13 rounds have been completed, the team can start from the Round 1 theme again to earn more points in further laps. These laps are unlimited.
    * The team with the most points wins. Individual team members who gain the most points will also be recognised.
    * It all ends on 00:00 9 October, PnQ time.

    GOOD LUCK!!

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap 19 Round 3

    Water
    ---------
    It's what we can't live without
    Without it, we shall extinct
    It's what we need everyday
    Everyday we use it
    To drink and also to wash so
    that we don't stink
    You still wonder what it is ?

  • Michael D Nalley
    13 years ago

    Lap 19 round 4

    Unity in diversity

    To be one with the universe
    Is a diversion of a soul
    Individuality invites followers
    To evolve original characteristics
    while retaining a system of freedom
    Promoting change for good.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 19 #5 microscope

    After a week of dumbing
    down my sensibility
    you'd need to find my mind
    using a microscope

  • PinkyPrincess
    13 years ago

    Lap #19 Round #6
    Wild Card - Free Verse
    --------------

    You promised me love
    but gave me hate.
    It was unexpected
    and shocking to see,
    but I guess that's fate.

    I thought we would last,
    but it changed quickly
    right before my eyes.
    And now I'm left to wonder...
    do you ever hear my cries?

  • abracadabra
    13 years ago

    Your scoreboard updated.

    You have no personal HH remaining.

  • Boy
    13 years ago

    Lap#19 round 7 cats

    'CRAZY CAT' aabb aabb aabb

    A crazy cat shirking at midnight
    Loudly shouting I listen her fight
    Another cat was innocent pet
    Mysterious fighting I cannot forget

    A group of cats were behind others
    I felt they are going to her murder
    I went out last night from my home
    Was trying to search a little stone

    White, black, yellow, crazy cats
    Maybe all were hungry for one dead rat
    I made them stop from that thunderous noise
    And Made them away with my loud voice

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap#19 Round 8

    Acrostic
    ----------
    Shining on a rainy day, who needs
    Umbrella when you are near, your
    Nest a shade of warmth above the
    Sky, and far away to the gates of
    Heaven, your rays reflect to give an
    Iridescent effect on every aspect,
    Now all we can do is stare at your
    Extraordinary creation in this world

    SUNSHINE

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 19 # 9 Super hero

    Green Lantern has more than
    will power, courage and guts
    he has the imagination
    to find new ways to kick butts

  • RSJ
    13 years ago

    Lap 19 Round 10

    9. Superhero OR mythological being OR movie star

    Dracula
    ------------
    In every drop of your warm
    flowing blood, I can taste the
    life you once had, you just
    smell like a sad day on a winter
    afternoon.

    Let me drink all your sorrows
    and take everything that still
    ties you to this world, all I need
    is one bite, to set you free from
    your soul.

  • Michael D Nalley
    13 years ago

    Lap 19 round 11
    Nature

    It is clear water washes
    away earth slowly
    Extinguishes fires quickly
    and can be divided
    into two gases

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 19 Lap # 12. Seven lines

    We started as members
    with chat room backgrounds
    and poetic revelations;
    Abby threw us under the bus
    and we came together
    as screaming loving family.
    Like The Flowing River rules!

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap 19 Round 13

    Magic
    -----------
    I can easily see the magical
    look in your eyes, the moment
    you see me holding that tray
    of freshly baked chocolate chip
    COOKIES !

  • PinkyPrincess
    13 years ago

    Lap 20 round 1
    grandmothers
    ------

    My grandmother taught me to sew,
    she taught me how to act like a lady.
    She bickers about others,
    and makes me laugh hysterically.

    I see where my mom gets her smile
    and her sense of humor.
    We should always thank our mothers and grandmothers
    because they brought us to this life.

  • RSJ
    13 years ago

    Lap 20 round 2

    17 syllables
    ------------
    Before you hold the knife,
    to avenge the love of your life,
    let me talk

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 20 # 3. aabba rhyme

    A young man with a french flair
    Abed honors human nature with care,
    with an eye for beauty nonpareil
    visionary whose viewpoint is aerial
    on his way to become something rare.

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap 20 Round 4

    Free
    -------------------------
    You can hold me a captive
    from the outside world
    You can close my eyes
    from seeing the sunlight
    You can steal my breath
    and stop my heartbeats
    But you can never take
    the freedom of my thoughts

  • Boy
    13 years ago

    Lap 20 round 5

    Include the word "squirrel

    Yes a small thing I see in garden
    A fast track animal with grey lines
    Little but quick to move fast tricky
    A squirel dances on the trees
    Making the home in the branches
    Feeding her slang I see her
    Shes best in her own way.

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 20 Round 6

    Wild Card (Free)
    ------------
    This contest had me so
    tied up to my chair, now
    every minute of freedom
    I get just pulls me back to
    my PC, only to find myself
    writing a poem about being
    -Free.

  • Sunshine
    13 years ago

    Lap 20 round # 7

    Insects

    Insects such little fighters
    trying to beat their fears,
    they stick so awfully
    everywhere around
    So tiny and active
    through space & ground,
    And it's hard to forget
    With all their odds
    how they are hated by men.

  • PinkyPrincess
    13 years ago

    Lap 20 Round 8
    Acrostic
    ---------

    R ollerblading in the park
    E ating ice-cream in the heat
    M aking lemonade to sell on the street
    E njoying and living every moment
    M aking friends for life
    B ouncing on castles
    E very Friday was a sleepover
    R emember your childhood?

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap 20 Round 9

    Superhero OR mythological being OR movie star
    -------------------------
    Vampires Kiss

    Hypnotize me with your words,
    take me to another dimension,
    victimize me with your poison
    and leave me their to die

    With the absence of heartbeats
    I knew you carried the only
    venom that could paralyze me
    and slowly steal my life

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 20 # 10 cooking

    My cooking is renowned
    by kids and their families
    "granddad's making his
    Thanksgiving dinner, WOW."
    Now all I need are
    those grand children.
    Well, my children
    I'm waiting.

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 20, Round 11 (nature)

    Fireflies light my night
    as I lay half-awake
    between fuzzy bushes,
    underneath cuddling oaken arms,
    and I flow unconsciously with hasty
    waters and these June warm breaths..

  • RSJ
    13 years ago

    Lap 20 Round 12

    Seven lines
    -------------------------
    Its magical how our brains
    work, to create such fine
    lines of poetry in the matter
    of seconds, only to realize
    an hour after that we lost our
    breath, running in a speed
    of 13 Rounds per hour.

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap 20 Round 13

    Magic
    -------------------------
    Smiling pills? who need
    those when you are around
    Your magical words help
    people when they are down

    You never failed to draw
    a big smile on my face
    My cheeks now hurt form
    all those smiles you placed

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 21 # 1. Grandmothers

    Grandmothers know their grandkids
    better than anyone
    since they made all the mistakes
    raising their parents.

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 21 - Round #2 (17 syllables)
    --------------------------------------------------------------

    She is just a homeless gypsy
    who stole my clothes
    and all my money.

  • RSJ
    13 years ago

    Lap 21 Round 3

    aabba rhyme
    -------------------------
    All I want is that, my love, you inhale
    and let his love, from your heart, exhale
    Will you be there to stand by my side ?
    Take one last deep breath, and decide
    Will you be the one to finish up my fairytale ?

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap 21 Round 4

    Free
    --------
    All I need is a hot cup of tea
    your shoulder to lean on
    and my favorite book
    Thats my daily routine
    on my free time

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 21 # 5. Include the word "squirrel"

    I was driving past the park yesterday
    when I saw something made me stare at
    a woman being chased after by a squirrel
    then I saw she was just walking her ferret.

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 21 - Round #6 (Wild Card: Acrostic)

    Lonely nights and sleeping pills
    over my freezing coverlets,
    vents missing, and love too,
    ever frustrating and forever burning.

  • RSJ
    13 years ago

    Lap 21 Round 7

    Insects
    -------------------------
    Breathlessness, dizziness
    you would think I am sick
    but no, I am certainly not.
    I cant speak, I am having
    a panic attack, you would
    think that I saw a monster
    still no, nothing like that.
    Its a simple state called
    "Phobia", and in my case
    its because of Butterflies.

  • Meme
    13 years ago

    Lap 21 Round 8

    Acrostic
    -------------------------
    I never knew that
    loneliness can
    own your heart
    viciously, and that
    each time your heart
    yells it is singing an
    ode to caste you
    under the spell of LOVE

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 21 # 9. Superhero OR mythological being OR movie star

    Bogie was the man, from Casablanca
    to the High Sierra or Bronx row skid
    never gave up the stuff that makes dreams
    so remember now, he's looking at you, kid.

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 21 - Round 10 (Cooking)

    I'm sick of my wife
    always burning pots of food
    while talking, non-stopping,
    with her mom and high school friends
    who also forget themselves while cooking;
    that's why I always find it better (and healthier)
    to order some pizza.

  • RSJ
    13 years ago

    Lap 21 Round 11

    Nature
    -------------------------
    Listening to the sound
    of the rain striking a
    melodic beats as it hits
    the ground. Paired in a
    perfect symphony with
    the thunder, wind, and
    the sound of birds.

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 21 Round 12 (seven lines)

    God has a plan,
    a purpose for all,
    with him,
    my destiny awaits
    and fate takes place,
    with his wisdom and my love,
    on the right path we fall.

  • PinkyPrincess
    13 years ago

    Lap 21 Round 13
    Magic
    -----------

    Lost in the woods,
    it's dark and cold.
    The eerie wind blows,
    and the leaves dance around.

    Lost and alone,
    hopeless and fearful.
    Wondering what to do,
    I close my eyes and pray.

    A loud sound erupts,
    my eyes open in alarm.
    A fairy is flying around me,
    and asks for my hand to guide me.

    The stars were shining,
    the fairy glitter helped me move.
    I was back at home within a minute,
    I don't know how I reached - it must've been magic.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 22 - #1 Grandmothers

    My grandmom lived to ninety-five
    and blamed it on the doctor;
    she made her give up her bike at 91,
    grandma could have socked her.