LIKE THE FLOWING RIVER'S POEMS AND SCORES #3

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 22 - Round #2(17 syllables)
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    When she finger-pick
    her harp,
    I could feel music
    penetrate my heart.

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 22 Round 3

    3.AABBA rhyme

    one,two,three
    i am for free,
    give me a ring,
    for we are bewedding,
    time dose not freeze,blink one,two,three

  • RSJ
    13 years ago

    Lap 22
    round 4

    Before you end your life
    Need I remind you of your strife?
    Of every hour you spent resisting
    Not giving up for the sake of existing
    To avenge the love you had for your murdered wife.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 22 # 5

    When a squirrel buries acorns
    to dig back up in winter
    he only remembers ninety-one
    the rest go to the renter.

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 22, Round #6 (Wild Card)
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    (acrostic)

    Science, languages and extracurricular activities,
    caring teachers and flawless tutors,
    how genuine it is to nest lifetime experiences in us,
    only that you show us a diversity of paths
    on what suits the best for everyone

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 22 Round 7 INSECT

    lady bugs,
    fireflies,
    butterflies,
    all flying in the sky.

  • PinkyPrincess
    13 years ago

    Lap 22 Round 8

    Acrostic
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    O ver the mountain
    C an you hear my echo?
    T ake me by the hand
    O n this beautiful day
    B ring me what I need
    E ach moment spent with you is
    R eally special, just like an October's eve.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 22 # 9

    Heros are sometimes surprising
    like the kid who catches his sister
    falling from a tree
    but Superman is no surprise:
    he always comes through
    when the dam has burst on thee.

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 22 Round 10
    10. Cooking

    cooking
    and baking
    with flour,eggs,milk,
    i make cake,
    cooking,
    is my making.

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 22 - Round #11 (Nature)

    I envy those ducklings
    upon calm waters,
    those pigeons above fluffy clouds,
    those nosy squirrels amongst trees...
    Do they think of what's bound to come
    like us humans?

  • PinkyPrincess
    13 years ago

    Lap 22 Round 12

    Seven Lines
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    Engulfed in water,
    can't breathe or see,
    fighting the currents,
    in this whirlwind tornado.
    My head is spinning,
    losing my consciousness,
    but I will not succumb to this pain.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 23 #13. Magic

    Let me work magic
    on your heart
    we will not have
    cause to part.

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 23 Round 1(Grandmothers)

    Oh grammy i love you
    all too much you see,
    for when you are mean,
    you can also be funny.

    You may be an alcoholic,
    slowly diying,
    you may have favorites
    but i know deep down you care,
    you can be stupid
    and drink you're life away,
    it's so sad i wanna cry.

    oh granny i love you too much
    you see
    for i know you will never change
    and i hope you will make it to heaven
    one day, it pains me to say you are not great,
    you're not always there,
    it kills me to see you this way.

    oh granny please change

    but i will always love you the same
    for only alcohol is to blame
    and stole you're life away.

  • Decayed
    13 years ago

    Lap 23 - round #2 (17 syllables)
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    She sways like
    butterflies
    when she belly dances
    in oriental nights.

  • PinkyPrincess
    13 years ago

    Lap 23 Round 3

    aabba rhyme scheme
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    I have lost all of my saved hope
    In this situation, I can barely cope.
    My heart is losing its blood,
    I'm slowly drowning in this flood.
    I'm barely hanging on this rope.

  • Boy
    13 years ago

    Lap 23 Round 4 Free

    A day is come, for which I waited
    The shinning day in a marriage hall
    She was standing in bridal dress
    I was with wedding suit next to her
    smiling, Smoothly holding her hand
    Prior to the audience appreciation
    Gently, softly I kissed her.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 23 #5 Include the word "squirrel"

    Two squirrels ran onto the road
    one ran under my car untimely dead
    the other made it out the other side
    just in the nick of time.

    Looking back I watched the survivor
    come back to the comrade's body
    think he grieved, not a bit
    he peed on the carcass & ran away

  • RSJ
    13 years ago

    Lap 23 round 6

    There she is, standing right next to me
    And here I am, not knowing what to do
    Here is my heart, about to stop beating
    And there is hers, beating so smooth

    Destiny, what is your game this time
    Taking away all that was mine
    Oh Time please tell me
    Will you be in favor of my fantasies

    Hope, are you still there?
    Or have you abanded me again
    Faith, where were hidden
    When all I wanted was for her to care

    Now I call on you Love
    Do you even exist to be lost ?

  • PinkyPrincess
    13 years ago

    Lap 23 Round 7

    Insect
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    You can't contain something
    that wasn't meant to be jailed.
    You have to set it free,
    and let it live in its natural habitat.

    Butterflies come in various shapes,
    and they can blind eyes with their colors.
    They flutter their wings beautifully,
    and show the beauty of freedom.

    Fly and live life to the fullest,
    oh beautiful butterfly -
    since you only have
    two more weeks to live.

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 23 Round 8 Acrostic
    SUNSHINE

    Sunshine
    Unify
    Never cry
    Sunshine
    His loving eye
    Intese
    Now
    Each time we kiss

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 23 #9 Superhero OR mythological being OR movie star

    On the Birth of Venus

    Imagine walking down the beach
    in mid-summer afternoon
    with wildlife all around, birds singing
    and far out to sea you can just detect
    an object floating toward the land
    a woman on the half shell.

  • RSJ
    13 years ago

    Lap 23 round 10

    As I come home
    from school everyday
    my mind ventures
    into an endless journey

    of what I'm about to
    eat when I get home
    I think of tomatoes,
    onion and spices

    The sight of
    freshly cut potatoes
    come into mind
    and brings a smile

    but, Snap
    I should have learned
    how to cook,and this is
    where Fast food comes handy.

  • PinkyPrincess
    13 years ago

    Lap 23 Round 11

    Nature
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    Sitting by the lake,
    reminiscing the memories
    spent here every summer
    for the last sixteen years.

    I recall the sound of the birds
    chirping from a distance.
    I remember jumping
    into the dirty mud.

    The enormous rocks that we climbed
    didn't move from the same place.
    I still have scars from the cuts,
    all from playing in this valley.

    The flowers still bloom
    and smell like candy.
    I still pick one and
    and place it behind my ear.

    Everything was so simple then,
    back when we were children.

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 23 Round 12 seven lines

    Now that my sunshine fades
    and the colors make my day
    I miss you and the days
    you held me in you're embrace
    I loved you and
    you threw me away
    and now you tourture me with goodbye

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 23 # 13 Magic

    Risen from the grave
    the zombie staggered
    into the cane fields
    seeking the voodoo
    master who wakened him.

    He found her in the midst
    of sunken spirits
    laid low by her tyranny,
    and laid himself before her
    croaked, "what next, Ms. Abby?"

  • RSJ
    13 years ago

    Lap 24 Round 1

    Grandmothers
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    I watched my grandmother cry
    she spoke in her sleep
    she described her dreams
    and awoke randomly every night

    I asked her if there's anything I can do
    but she just cries and says I'm too young
    to understand that losing the one you love
    is the hardest thing you can face

    I try to put a smile on her face
    by being a man just like my grandfather

  • PinkyPrincess
    13 years ago

    Lap 24 Round 2

    17 syllables
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    Frozen in time,
    we savoured the moment;
    it was like a fairytale.

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 24 Round 3 AABBA rhyme

    In a dark night
    cast a vision of light,
    a spirit guiding
    left me deciding,
    in a dark night.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 24 # 4 Free

    Freedom is my mistress
    open fields and streams
    that take me far away
    no worries, living dreams.

  • RSJ
    13 years ago

    Lap #24 Round 5
    Include the word squirrel

    She walked into a room,
    and all eyes were on her.
    She had the confidence
    of a powerful queen.

    She wore an expensive coat
    made of grey, squirrel fur.
    She was spectacular,
    an indescribable woman.

  • PinkyPrincess
    13 years ago

    Lap 24 Round 6
    Wild Card - cooking

    It was a night to indulge
    and flourish the senses.
    Everyone knows - the best way
    to a man's heart is through his stomach.

    I cooked the best meal I know,
    bought the best ingredients
    and followed the right recipe.
    Everything was perfect.

    He smelled the lavish meal
    and felt his stomach growl.
    He was ready to commence,
    and licked his lips in excitement.

    We tasted paradise and couldn't stop,
    our senses created this unique type of love.

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 24 Round 7 Insect

    creepy insects
    crawling in my bed
    infesting my house
    and crawling under my skin.
    Spiders in their webs
    feeding with delight
    and now big enough
    to feast on the whole town.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap 24 # 8. Acrostic

    Reliance

    Rare is the case
    either you can't
    lose or can't win
    if you have to depend on
    another to do it for you,
    nor should you seek that
    crutch to lean on when
    everything is in your grasp

  • RSJ
    13 years ago

    Lap # 24 Round 9
    Mythological Creature
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    How can they call themselves people
    when they have cold black heart?
    they hunt people like animals
    torture and kill them
    just for the fun of it.
    they feast on humans
    and increase their population
    Can't others see?
    that they look like humans
    but are secretly zombies.

  • PinkyPrincess
    13 years ago

    Lap 24 Round 10

    Cooking
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    You gave me the ingredients
    and I followed the recipe
    yet the cake still burned,
    with the rest of my dignity.

    I followed the rules
    but still failed helplessly.
    I hoped to make it right
    but you can't fix a burnt heart,
    just like the result of my cake.

  • Innocent Fairy
    13 years ago

    Lap 24 Round 11 Nature

    In the forest
    i wonder
    lost in a foggy wear,
    a wolf howls
    and i become scared.
    In a forest
    the trees are scarce
    but a forest
    with a foggy wear.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    13 years ago

    Lap24 # 12. Seven lines

    We started as members
    with chat room backgrounds
    and poetic revelations;
    Abby threw us under the bus
    and we came together
    as screaming loving family.
    Like The Flowing River rules!

  • Michael D Nalley
    13 years ago

    Lap 24 round 13

    Magic

    Magical mystical wizard of Oz
    Wonderfully you stepped up to a cause
    Though not giving anything not already acquired
    Your symbols are forever there to be admired
    A heart, a home ,courage and a brain
    It seems are never far from any domain

  • RSJ
    13 years ago

    Lap # 24 Round 1

    Grandmothers
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    Wisdom is something
    she acquired from age
    and hope is defined
    by her existence

    Love oozes from
    her heart to
    Define our way
    through our Resistance.

    Faith is something
    that was passed
    down to us by her
    persistence.

  • PinkyPrincess
    13 years ago

    Lap 25 Round 2
    17 Syllables
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    The blue waves rippled
    into the ocean and
    danced along the music.