Contest!

This Is My First Contest, So Bear With Me!:D

Ill Put Up 5 Catagories To Write About And Only 2 People Per Catagorie, And One Entry Per Person! :)

1st Prize:7 Comments&Rates.
2nd Prize:5 Comments&Rates.
3rd Prize:3 Comments&Rates.

Pretty Cool, Huh?!

Catagories:

1. Love
-Roses And Lillies[Submitted]
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2. Saddness
-Amreen [Submitted]
-Danielle Love
3.Happiness
-Everlasting[submitted]
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4.Dreams
-Reed[submitted]
-Jessie[Submitted]
5.Fear
-The Poetess[submitted]
-Jademark07[submitted]

Deadline: October 15th

Fade Away

I'm lost ;

writing a puzzle

left unsolved

with reasons not existing .

Serenity fills my soul

and silence resounds inside my mind .

Vague echoes whisper words that I must write ,

but maybe words have lost their meaning .

Words maybe forgotten ,

but it's on we seek for their essence

that they prevail .

I maybe the sun that sets and breaks into dusk ,

or the moon that loses its luminosity as the sky turns into dawn .

I may fade away ,

but it's how I exist .

It's on oblivion

that we are soon remembered ,

and on anonymity

that we are soon recognized .

We are candles gradually burning out ,

but it's when our flames fade

that we exist longer .

Fading is existing .

And now the alkahest is near .

Thoughts lingering inside my mind

slowly dissolve .

But still I found a fragment

of the recondite quest

for existence .

Fade away .

Title: A Bloody Nightmare
Category: Dreams
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A silent forest I found myself to be,
Walking, but it was so dark I could barely see.
In the distance a neon glow, something I saw was bound,
So I tried to call out, but couldn't even make a sound.

With black wings there was an angel in the distance,
Struck by love I noticed that she was in need of assistance.
She faced opposite of me, blind-folded and chained.
Though muted my lips moved, "I'll set you free" I explained.

Scars I saw as I went to place my hand on her back,
Light had begun to shine, then suddenly my mind went black.
My fingers had turned to knives as I tried to touch her skin,
And before I realized, she screamed as they etched in.

From her deep wounds, dark blood began to spray,
Losing control of my heart the knives continued to claw away.
The more I tried to speak, the deeper her wounds became,
Feeling that all hope was lost, soon I began to feel shame.

Trying so hard to wake from this dream,
Yet easier said than done when just wanting to scream.
Thinking this can't be love, yet only thinking of the pain,
Thoughts continued spinning in circles over and over again.

Standing here just wanting to sob, letting it all out,
Yet I never thought I'd hear myself give up doubt.
I couldn't stop, I was only making it worse,
Watching her as I cried out, tears began to burst.

Slicing the blind-folds off, she turned and wept,
She saw me as I was taking another step.
Knowing that I was threat, her wings engaged,
True beauty I saw, but more pain I waged.

With hands laced on her neck I began to slice,
More blood I wanted, but I know there was a price.
She gazed into my eyes suffering in woe,
Begging for mercy, no longer she glow.

Love bled on the surface with time running short,
She wanted to stop me with one last resort.
Placing a hand on my wrist, so my heart can remember,
What it's like to feel nothing cause soon she would die here.

Her eyes grew heavy, as our bodies collide,
but nothing compared to the weight I was feeling inside.
I didn't want to feel anything anymore,
Just wanted things to be the way they were before.

Unhurt, unnoticed, unheard of,
True lies when you've fallen in love.
Blood-soaked I awoke, wishing she was there for me to hold,
But the pain became too much as her body went cold.

5.Fear

It's Bedtime

- - - - - - - - -

So, abandon me darling here.

Sewing the autumns of my destiny
with a golden yarn of

caution

or watering the adorned leaves
of my poetry like a pregnant
cloud of inspirations,

for its roots, I feel, are enchained
and scary they are

those withered trees.

Abandon my coziness.
Let me experience the cold of my
lips, crashing the edges of ice
along my words

yet, with my feminine pride
(that never weds your selfish
love)
let me bite the dried fruits
and walk to my bed

for I feel so sleepy

here.

By : Noura Hatem.

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Thanks! :D

Dreams please

Love please

Running through a forest, no looking back
smelling the sweet air of autumn
close my eyes, taste the sweetness of freedom,
stopping to dance under the falling leaves

Chest is open and so are arms,
to the beautiful embrace of serenity.
fall onto the ground and into the sand
to watch a burning pink and orange sunset.

barefooted am I as I taste the salty ocean,
let the grains of life fall through my fingetips
like the hourglass of life i worry not about
as I lay my back upon the powdered snow.

creating such beauty with arms and legs,
an angel who i dream is a mirror,
alas she is a wonder to behold,
with a halo that forever outshines mine.

stick out my tongue with no regrets,
to feel the refreshing cool of a snowflake,
only to feel a burning hatred
that comes as a shock to the soul.

wake up sweating, shaking, crying
heart racing, my mind is screaming.
wishing to live in this horrible
alluring
beautiful
unreachable
nightmare

I'm taking sadness...
I will submit tonight or tommorrow...

Love Of My Life

My love for you
flutters through me.
Gentle and beautiful
like the wings of a butterfly.

Amazing....

Gracefully it sings to me
like natures melody.
Growing stronger as days pass
like a springs flowers.

Blissful...

It is a wonderful thing,
my love for you.
For it is openly returned
by him every single day.

Happiness....

For the first time
it is true and really.
Like a new moms love
for her little one.

Category:sad
by amreen

Moments of loneliness...

Today the world seems gloomy,
Today my heart seems to be immensely hurt,
Today my soul seems to cry,
Today the rays of hope seems to shut.

Oh! What a gloomy time it seems,
It engulfs me with despair,
no one to enliven my spirits,
no one with whom my problems could be shared.

I am all alone and bereft,
with tears trickling down my cheeks incessantly,
no one to wipe my sorrow,
no one to put a smile on my face eventually.

Life indeed misses the care of someone,
to bring the journey in order;which derailed,
the strength and liveliness to be in forever,
which just seem to be failed.

Such a worst and aloof moment,
brings in few moments of the past,
the moments of laughter,love and happiness,
exuding out millions of tears with no moments to last.

My heart feels guilty,
deep down at the bottom,
for eluding these cherished gems,
and paving an entry for the tedious shades of grey.

but...now there seems to be no way,
which would weave the broken threads of friendship,
as when life gets all entangled,
ego then sways in.

It now feels life got concluded,
as there is no aroma of blossoms herein,
all the doors of cheerfulness are closed,
life will sustain the same it seems.

Sadness please

Happiness, please!

2 More Spots! So Far Awesome Poems!!!!

Winter at grandma's house

Winter cold
Piles of snow
Hot cocoa
And a warm hug

Christmas tree
Happy kids
Running in circles
Around him.

Aunties cooking
While children smile
As grandpa dances
And grandma claps.

Dinner time
Vegetables and fruits
Candy and turkey
In the living room.

Happy atmosphere
At grandma's house
As Christmas approach;
In winter time.

1rst Place: Everlasting
2nd Place: Jademark07
3rd Place: Jessie

Thank You Everyone!
I Will Get Your Comments and Rates Done Within The Next Few Days! And I Will Also Try And Do At Least One For Everyone Who Submitted!

Everlasting: I Think I did 7, If Not Let Me Know! :)

The Rest Of You: Im On My Way To Yours Withing Today Or Tomarow!:))
Im Very Busy With School, Work And Practice(s).. :)

Jademark07: Done!:) Good Think You Have 5 Poems, It Was Easy For Me To Tell How Many I Did. I Suggest EVERYONE Go Read Her Work!:) It Seems Im The Only One Who Commented Or Rated On Any OF Her Work! .. And Its SO Good. :)

Jessie: Done! I Will Do The Rest Of You Tomarow! I Got The Top 3 Done And That Was My Main Goal For The Day! Class Only Lasts An Hour!:O