I'd love some comments

Hey,
Recently signed up here, and I would love some comments on my poems.

In return I'll comment and rate a few of yours.

I Commented And Rated Both Your Poems. There Were Amazing, And Thats Even A Understatement. Can You Do, Smokin and sippin whiskey and One Other Your Choice.:) Thank You!

Thanks for the feedback. Greatly appreciated!

I will indeed take a look at Smokin and sippin whiskey. I looked at one of your others a while ago as well.

Cheers!