When Lfe Get's Hard, Smile, And Write A Poem :D

If You Could, Comment And Rate My "Lies Are What We Live For".. And/OR "This Is The Story Of A Girl" And I Will Do However Many You Wish :)

Im Not Really Sure About This Poem, Its Not Really My Style.
Except I Read Others Poetry, And It Inspires Me (:

I Want To Be A Better Poet And Im Looking For Some Critiques.:) Or Just A Simple Rating Would Be Just Perfect,:]

Well, Thank You In Advance~
Cant Wait To Take A Look At Some Of Your Poems!