Looking for feedback

  • E Dacaf
    13 years ago

    Hey guys I just wrote a new poem and really could use some feedback on it. This poem is amazing, one of the best I think. So please tell me what you think.

    here is the link

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1181187

    If that doesnt work the title is
    Journey of the 5

    Thanks

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  • Paul Gondwe
    13 years ago

    Am right on it...

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  • Amreen
    13 years ago

    I'm done with your poem dude....good one....:))

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