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Hi,
I'd love some more comments on "Confirmation Fragmentation", and if you have time "The Cat is dead". In return I'll throw you a comment on one of yours, or two of yours if you comment on both.

I understand if "The Cat is dead" is a bit ambiguous, and to make it a bit easier to understand, I can say that the Cat is a reference to "Schrodinger's cat", which in turn is a metaphor for a romantic relationship.

I'll do this. :)

Once again, thanks for the feedback. I've commented a few of yours now as well.

If anyone else feels like commenting on some of mine that'd be great. And as I've said, I will of course return the favor.

I am done with two of your mentioned poems...good work...:)

Thank you, and you too. Great poems you've written, and I've commented and rated two of em.

Cheers!

If anyone else feels like commenting on my stuff, please consider "My personal torturer" as well. It isn't as good (I think) as some of my others, but I could use some feedback to make it better, or simply thoughts you may have.