New and Shy

Hey Im new to the sight when it comes to an account perspective but i have been on to look at other ppls work when i get a writing block so i guess it would be nice if someone would look at some of my poems and comment on how i can improve my style or just like them, whtevr you wanna do:) thx

Hey, am Paul, nice to meet you. I will take a lonk at ur work and tell u what i think.

Kay thx