Come what may

Hi,

I could use some comments on my latest poem. It's my first poem that isn't sadish or loveish, so it's quite a new style for me. Some criticism or simply thoughts would help a lot. The poem is "Come what may"

I will obviously return the favor!

I'm done with your poem..:))
you could have a look at my latest "the non-verbal me.."
ty:)

I loved it!! Can u read my latest one please :)

Done and done.
Anyone else feel like commenting on Come what may?