2:1 deal

So my girlfriend keeps forgetting that i love her sometimes so i wrote her a poem called "God****it I Love You" please comment on what you think so i can improve it. if you do this, ill comment on two of your poems. danke

Just read and commented on it. Please comment on Come and may, and The Jagged Street, if you don't mind.

Cheers
Matt

Laughing at Last, My Love
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1182328
Sinse When?
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/poems.php?id=747689

^ those two poems are worth the read even without asking! Loved both of ur poems!

Just do my latest one please, perfecting the art of losing :)

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