Duo-rhyme 2 for 1

I tried a Duo-rhyme from invented types Shadow Poetry

http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/types.html under "INVENTED POETRY TYPES".
I will comment on any two of yours for a r/r/c on Tiny Fairy

Okay,
Can you do "The lost creak of summer (collab with Lebanese Phoenix)"
and any of my other latest

Good job!!..I liked that u tried somethin new,,

Check my latest one out :) "nocturnal"