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- Name : Paul Gondwe
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Paul Gondwe
12 years ago

Just write down one title that you want rated and commented on. You dont have to return the favor, am doing this for free.

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- Name : Lofallenve
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Lofallenve
12 years ago

Glistening blade please? :)

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- Name : Paul Gondwe
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Paul Gondwe
12 years ago

Its done, wonderful poem..very creative

Anyone else

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- Name : Phantasma
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Phantasma
12 years ago

Could you do "Angst" please

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- Name : Paul Gondwe
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Paul Gondwe
12 years ago

Done them for you guys..

anyone else..the offer is limited to time mind you, hurry

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- Name : Ste
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Ste
12 years ago

How about a couple of mine:- Green Junction, and The Old Watcher One

Thank's!

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- Name : Paul Gondwe
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Paul Gondwe
12 years ago

Did that for you ste and can i add that you are by far, the best poet who knows his words, who i have seen on this site. you are great.

The offer still stand people

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- Name : werty
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werty
12 years ago

"you're dying..."please?

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- Name : Chelsey
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Chelsey
12 years ago

Expected battle

and I WILL return the favor, always do :)

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- Name : East Poetry
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East Poetry
12 years ago

Wavelength

thank you!

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- Name : TSI25
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TSI25
12 years ago

"Fear the Truth"

please, its my most recent

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- Name : Paul Gondwe
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Paul Gondwe
12 years ago

I have done them all guys...

Anyone else..this offer will remain for another day then will close

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- Name : dollwithafrown
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dollwithafrown
12 years ago

"Hunger Pains", please? c:

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- Name : Paul Gondwe
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Paul Gondwe
12 years ago

Its done...

anymore pliz..coz as of tomorrow..i will not respond to this, it will b closed

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- Name : Paul Gondwe
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Paul Gondwe
12 years ago

This is closed as future rates and comments will no longer be free but you have to return the favor.....

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- Name : True Happiness
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True Happiness
12 years ago

I was wondering if some one..or all of you could go look at all my poems...i only have 8...Please and thank you:D

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Name : Paul Gondwe
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Innocence, usually if you rate and comment on others, they will do the same for you..but i will check out your poems, i dont know about the others coz i started this thread for anyone who wanted rates and comments

- Name : True Happiness
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True Happiness
12 years ago

I rated a few of yours:D....just didn't have the time to comment....I really liked 'Til I Rise:D

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- Name : Paul Gondwe
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Paul Gondwe
12 years ago

Its okay..did your too and am still doing them

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- Name : Paul Gondwe
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Paul Gondwe
12 years ago

Guys, can u check out my latest..

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- Name : East Poetry
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East Poetry
12 years ago

I have a new one!

Fundamental love

Man... my girl must have me twitterpated!! lol

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- Name : Paul Gondwe
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Paul Gondwe
12 years ago

How is that for a comment Randy..i think its the longest i hav written thus far. Dude, you are good with love poems. U on my Fav list bro

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Name : East Poetry
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East Poetry
12 years ago

Thank you so much for that wonderful review, I plan to return the favor.

interesting tho... I thought I would ask you(if you get a chance) to re read it. You see... when I write new poems
they tend to go through a morphing phase in the beginning as I go through and Iron out the kinks, fix flow issues and other things. Whats funny is you reviewed my poem during its state of newness, which dont get me wrong... I sooo appreciate your wonderful review... but alas I have made many new changes to it.
I really like my changes and how it flows so much better.

so I was curious if you could even tell the difference
if you were to re read it. No need to change your AMAZING review though. lol

- Name : L
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L
12 years ago

Could you take a look at my latest " deserted roots"?

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- Name : Amreen
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Amreen
12 years ago

Could you have a look at "Non-verbal me"?
thank you...:)

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- Name : Britt
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Britt
12 years ago

Only You, please :)

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- Name : Paul Gondwe
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Paul Gondwe
12 years ago

Britt, Everlasting..am done with yours..now to Amreen's

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- Name : Paul Gondwe
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Paul Gondwe
12 years ago

Am also done with your Amreen..great poem

Anyone else...

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- Name : John Dlyan Boone BABY
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John Dlyan Boone BABY
12 years ago

Why I Hate The Way I Feel
please check this poem out and if you want my others to

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- Name : John Dlyan Boone BABY
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John Dlyan Boone BABY
12 years ago

Please rate and comment on Gods Message in my poem album thanks i think you will like it

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- Name : CuteThingsGoneWrong
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CuteThingsGoneWrong
12 years ago

Little Jonny, Just let me know what poem piece you want me to read through pm.

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- Name : Paul Gondwe
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Paul Gondwe
12 years ago

Johny, i just did that for you..you are really good bro

I dont mind you guys checking out my very latest

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- Name : Burning Angel
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Burning Angel
12 years ago

I have 6 new poems, you can comment on any of the six, i would not expect you to read all of them and comment on all

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- Name : Angel
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Angel
12 years ago

Any without comments PLEASE :)

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- Name : Lofallenve
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Lofallenve
12 years ago

"All over me" and "Butterfly Screams" please :)

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- Name : Girl of Conviction
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Girl of Conviction
12 years ago

The truth about time. :] thanks!

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- Name : Rihanna
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Rihanna
12 years ago

Any of mine(:

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- Name : Mello193
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Mello193
12 years ago

How about Contradictions of Irony?

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- Name : DeviousCharmer
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DeviousCharmer
12 years ago

Dark castle please :)

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- Name : JustAnotherPoet
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JustAnotherPoet
12 years ago

She Should be Beautiful please? thanks.

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