Is this good? my 1st poem out of anger

I fell in love with you.
and you feel for me too.
i had you in my life.
you could've been my wife.
we were together long enough.
baby i know loves rough.
we were together fourth of july.
i loved you thats no lie.
i got you on my mind.
because of you my loves blind.
i don't believe in love anymore!
because of you, you ***
because of you my hearts broken.
writing this now i've spoken.
i can't believe the pain you made me feel.
i don't wanna believe this shit but its real.
you cheated, you lied.
inside...i've died.
you cheated on me with my bestfriend.
that dumbass made our trust end.
your reputation got *** up at school.
because you went and *** around with a fool.
i guess you'll think twice before you cheat.
because in the end...you'll always be beat.

***Profanity only in the explicit poem section, please.

Yeah but this isnt the place to post it. very direct. very emotional.

Well, it depends on what you want your poetry to do.

That poem might have been really good for you.
But it was really bad for me.

Well, it depends on what you want your poetry to do.

That poem might have been really good for you.
But it was really bad for me.
[2]

Writing it is a good way to get out emotions and by reading it is very raw. It was an alright poem. Started well, but I think you let your emotions get off you because you went off track of what you were doing.

What does [2] mean?

[2} I second that :)

I think this is very good and has alot of emotion all though this is not the place to post it :) But very emotional and i like the rhyme scheme you used. Great work