Cast your vote (Everyone!)- SbS Round 1

  • Chelsey
    12 years ago

    Alright everyone, round one is complete. All prompts and titles have been chosen.

    Heres how voting is going to work for ROUND 1:
    Since this is a story telling contest, you all are authors. Everyone buys books and reads them not just the authors. With that being said ANYONE ON THIS SITE CAN READ THESE POEMS AND VOTE!
    So club members, encourage your club, even if they didn't participate, their vote matters!!

    I'm not able to vote since I'm hosting this, buttttttttttttttt....if I could vote I tell ya, I'd vote on creativity. This was a tough challenge to pick a prompt and create a mini story and telling it in a poetic way...So think before youre quick to vote on these poems. Don't think "Oh thats good"..Read deep into these poems, feel what the author was trying to get you to feel and understand.

    Since there are so many poems, and its round one, which is going to be tough to pick your favorite one out of all of these, THIS ROUND ONLY, you can vote for your TOP TWO FAVORITE POEMS.

    If you only want to vote for one thats your call, but just know for this round you are able to vote for two.

    Also, remember no one is getting eliminated. This contests winners are chosen by highest number of votes.

    Guys, these poems are awesome! So please take your time, a few days, to read through all of these and PM ME your vote. Do not vote here!!

    You have until Sunday at Midnight then the voting will be closed.

    #1 Dream Weaver
    Prompt: Finding your soul mate

    I etched my hopes into your
    skin

    enchanted by a whirlwind
    I faltered

    trembling for the hand
    not yet masked with
    hope

    I reach once more

    for you have always been my
    dream weaver

    the breath on my lips
    pulsating with
    anticipation

    gone
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    #2 Alive and Kicking
    Prompt: Being 14 yrs old and pregnant
    Alive and Kicking

    One night of breath taking passion
    With my first, real, true love...
    Will forever remain bitter sweet memories
    Etched within the remains of a shattered heart

    "Heart rate is strong and steady
    Babies beat is 150 per minute
    All looks great, young lady
    Pretty soon you should start feeling movement"

    Tears overtake any composure
    Wishing your daddy was here
    He should have heard your heartbeat
    I should not have to do this alone

    He promised to stand beside me
    To be a part of our life
    And never disappoint either of us
    Yet in the blink of an eye; he was gunned down

    Left to bare our child alone
    At the tender age of fourteen
    Many have already counted us out
    Yet; we are still alive and kicking.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`~~~
    #3 Practical Magic
    Prompt: A preachers secret struggle
    Practical Magic

    He used to be adept in
    practical magic,
    Summoning the elements to
    his aid,

    He used to be known for
    spell work like no other,
    Weaving the fabrics of
    time and space,

    None now could have guessed,
    This man of God,
    Was once a witch with whom
    the Faerie did dance,

    He once raised the spirits
    'most every night,
    Now the spirit of the Lord
    raises him,

    God, oh God,
    His dreams are too tempting,
    The Fires and the Winds
    call to him,

    Back from the gates of heaven
    and book of truth,
    Has he denies the moans
    of the Earth and Sea,

    He struggles now
    to preach the word,
    When he is the one that
    needs Gods aid.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    #4 Despicable me
    Prompt: An obesity Struggle

    Once more I have buried myself in oil,
    you cannot see the despicable me.
    Soon my body will rest in the soil.
    I pray silenttly my soul will be free.

    Not that long ago I looked deep within
    when my heart, soul, and mind were almost one.
    Gluttony or sloth was not my worst sin
    and I did not feel like I weighed a ton.

    Everyone loves me while I am this fat,
    that is all but the despicable me,
    but it seems I somehow overcame that
    satisfied with much less than I can be.

    My anger surrendered, my pride was hurt,
    it will take some time for the scars to heal.
    I am prescribed pills to make me inert.
    My still soul seems like steel too hard to feel.

    Not asking for pity, or even love,
    just for the will power to rise above.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    #5 Beneath these Broken Wings
    Prompt: A divorce man/woman finding new love

    Between sun and moon
    we parted
    a day ... a week
    a month ... a year

    Once again August approached
    and the pale remembrance
    lay upon my finger like
    unspoken words lost somewhere
    between the stars or perhaps
    hanging from the moon

    and as midnight tears tangled
    within my thoughts
    and your pillow arched closer
    to the hollow of my ache
    I breathed in the silence-
    of solitude

    and it was only in the silence
    did I hear the beat-
    of my own heart
    and beneath these broken
    wings lay the strength
    to fly again

    for I had found
    the one I must love first
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    #6 History Repeats
    Prompt: Finding a message in a bottle

    A piece
    from the sky
    fell into
    the embracement
    of the oceanic waves
    from there was moved,
    to the nearest shore
    to be find by the one
    capable of understanding
    the embottle message lying
    deep within the fallen piece.

    Until history repeats
    the message will remain
    unknown to the rest
    of the unfamiliar world.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    #7 Forever and a Day
    Prompt: The Birth of your first child
    Forever and a Day

    Love introduced itself in my 24th year,
    on the fourth day of the very first month,
    during the coldest time of the season.

    It didn't come strolling in smiling,
    wearing a three piece suit
    with blonde hair, blue eyes
    carrying purple roses either...

    (that kind always went away!)

    Instead,
    It arrived toothless,
    naked, screaming, and helpless-
    weighing in at 7 pounds 13 ounces
    at 1:09 in the afternoon.

    The moment I gave her life,
    I felt it was her that had given life back to me.
    I knew those same tiny hands I held that first day,
    would be the same ones to hold mine,
    when my time on earth was almost through.

    Yes,
    Love defined itself that January morning,
    with no words spoken.
    I knew exactly what love forever and a day meant,
    I recognized it the very first time

    I looked into my daughters eyes.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    #8 Buried Alive
    Prompt: Living with an abusive, cheating husband

    The minute I heard my first love story
    I started looking for you, not knowing
    How blind I was

    Lovers don't meet somewhere.
    They're in each other all along.

    -Rumi-

    In the beginning he was in her
    and she reflected an ever expanding light,
    face to face with love.
    He made her see the flash of her own beauty,
    removing what she couldn't.
    She felt whole and embraced
    by an all-encompassing sky.

    One night,
    he arrived late and the sky fractured,
    spitting dead stars, killing the clouds
    and the red moon as he squeezed
    her wrist, freezing respect in Pluto,
    drowning her in Neptune,
    sending life to an unknown universe
    close to hell.

    Hail, Holy Queen,
    Mother of Mercy, she prayed
    every night when he didn't come
    home.
    Little by little she forgot the five
    Glorious Mysteries. Numb she was.
    Sedated she was.

    He pruned her like a skillful gardener.
    She could have been a cypress
    growing along the southern coastline,
    resisting time and weather or
    maybe a cedar in a shadowy valley.
    But little by little her soul eroded.

    Hail, Holy Queen,
    Mother of Mercy she prays mechanically
    before she lies down in her coffin
    by his side every single day, withering
    as her roots decay and the fiery sky loses
    more one star.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    #9 In a Land Far Away
    Prompt: Creating your own country

    In a land faraway.

    Right there, at the top of a moon
    miniatured lightly in pink
    and orange.
    Quested in warm rain-
    rain leaning over the shoulders
    of fate-
    fate like a molten tattoo upon
    a morning hip.

    I'd build my kingdom.
    No, not with the eagerness of a
    concrete block, or with
    tough marble backing me. Nor even
    with gold, parading in
    my bathroom.

    I'd borrow the peerless color
    of a sky; tortured and labored by
    Winter; and pour it onto
    my throne. Adorn the palisades
    with larvas learning how
    to weave a wreath upon a Lotus.
    With worms wobbling along
    a widowed wold.

    My kingdom would be found
    right there, at the top of a moon
    cuddling sparrows in its plume.

    Cuddling sparrows.
    Never sprawled away,
    never warmed enough to soar
    outside its skin.

    I'd loan my arrogance to the
    space. I 'd loan
    my frozen homeland to a century
    coming from destiny, not time.
    I'd loan my froth and silver to
    another hoopoe of words and
    sip worn-out wine
    at night.

    My kingdom would be fairytaled
    like no sultanate, although
    nobody would repeat like a
    parrot

    'Long live the Queen'
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    #10 Borderline
    Prompt: Going through your Grandmothers attic

    I don't know
    if it was the feeling
    of a nostalgic moment
    that burned my throat
    and welled eyes with tears,
    or the overwhelming smell
    of moth balls and dust covered
    trinkets that lined each box.
    The rummaging of the contents
    of her attics had been assigned,
    and it was daunting
    to say the least.

    That is until
    my eyes fell upon
    a handmade quilt.
    With its unveiling
    discovering each little
    Holly Hobbie shaped cut out
    was from favored dresses
    of my youth.

    Thumbing
    each hand sewn bonnet,
    feeling the rise
    and swell of vintage threads,
    Borderline amazement
    at all the
    oddly colored fabric displayed.
    Memories sewn
    together from scraps
    and pieces of play clothes
    creating a beautiful
    kaleidoscope of warmth.

    Pangs of grief
    settled heavily
    in my chest,
    recalling, Granny's
    arthritic hands
    knotted in pain
    and a soul
    as anguished
    at an incomplete task.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    #11 Beyond the Rainbow, Fergus Part 1
    Prompt: Two babies being switched at birth

    To Cornac's sidhe ancient takers brought me
    and in my stead left one of their own.
    Surely, you would think, no good
    would come of this abduction -
    human infant assuming cuckoo's station.

    Carried beyond the rainbow:
    no pot of gold, just weary old folk
    whose time in the sun had expired
    long before my grandparents' kin
    came to ancient shore they called Fal.

    Reared there in cradle of another Fergus,
    he who walked in my sun, while
    they fostered me as son of the hidden king.
    Uncle Blaine taught me to run the marsh,
    to drink mead from Cornac's cups.

    He revealed roaring stone gone quiet
    on the mound of abandoned Tara;
    we drank Dagda's measure full,
    learned to respect Lugh's spear and
    warned me not to draw the shining sword.

    Yet during it all I wandered through
    darkened memories of a mother:
    her bedside crib and cooing songs
    that lulled me to dreamless sleep
    questioning: is all this real or that?

    Fey needs exceed those of humans
    longer lives absorb greater energy
    yet less food and drink consumed,
    just a dash through sunlit groves
    then hearty mead and roast bullock.

    At the tender age of thirteen cycles
    Uncle Blaine betook us a journey
    on which he showed me human folk
    where an old and sickly sallow crone
    sat by a hearth with a white-haired man.

    "Its your ma, in mortal terms,
    and your twin of separate birth."
    This wizened codger, my age?
    This ancient hag suckled me?
    "We age different," said Blaine.

    I stared at her, she looked past me,
    for we carry not a worldly form.
    I remembered again her sweet songs,
    mourned the years lost hearing them
    then turned to her adopted son.

    Great tenderness had he for her -
    it was evident as he was man;
    then I understood the trip to this plane:
    it was her time to go; my only meeting
    would be to see her to off to the next.

    We stayed through to the end,
    'til the changeling Fergus gently
    closed the lady's vacant eyes and
    placed a gold coin in her right hand;
    glad I was he'd been her strong lad.

    Unseen, Blaine combed elvish man's hair
    from crown to nape three times around;
    when done, he straightened up and turned,
    then beckoned to me; 'twas time to leave
    his nephew to the life as had become his own.

    Haunted by questions I held my peace
    when to Cornac's sidhe we returned.
    Why had I been granted a fairy life
    while Fergus-Fey made to endure
    such human torment as age and ailment?

    Resolved I am to learn the truth even
    if unmade in the bargain, for what was gained
    did not equal the unsung love long missed
    in leaving maternal devotion to a shade.
    I did not even know my mother's name.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    #12 False Identity
    Prompt: A Muslims life after 9/11

    Look at your fingers,
    are they the same?
    Are we the same?

    Though we're humans
    we vary a lot
    You may look up the world,
    and find the tall,
    short, the fat, the thin
    the black, the white
    good and bad

    It all started in that day,
    when some people
    started looking at us Muslims,
    in a different way

    The 9/11 tragedy,
    was just because couple of men
    That made some generalize,
    that us Muslims are terrorists
    I want to say we are humans,
    so we vary too

    A life of an innocent Muslim
    had never changed,

    The 9/11 tragedy
    just taught us a lesson,
    that life is not a joking place
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    #13 For Your Eyes Only
    Prompt: A mothers experience raising a down syndrome baby
    The day you were born,
    is marked on my heart
    like a childhood scar,
    reminding me how
    badly it hurt, but how
    quickly I healed.

    all the nightmares I have
    ever feared, came true-
    but, within you,
    I found trails of a
    fighter, who fought
    with the courage of
    two hundred soldiers.

    My child,
    a part of me would
    give it all for normality,
    except that, normality
    would've never made
    me this human.

    I'm blessed with you,
    regardless of what
    they may say, regardless
    of what they may think

    you stand for,
    all the crimes
    I'll never be strong enough
    to commit,

    for your eyes only
    speak of an endless
    innocence, and
    a tenderness so soothing
    it reminds me that I must
    forgive nature

    because,
    although she's unfair-
    just like me,
    she's a mother
    too..

    Dearest,
    if anyone should ever ask you
    who you are tell them;

    "I am loved"
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    #14 Sleeping with the Enemy
    Prompt: A soldiers experience after returning home
    There's a canary on the sill.
    A coal-miner's yellow warning light
    sings mournfully its own murder, so
    my fingers clench and
    for a moment I look for bodies around me.
    Arms broken, necks broken,
    hearts...

    Death follows yellow songs,
    poisons and flares,
    burns and bombs and the corners of eyes,

    and here I've forgotten again
    that while I'm dead
    tired from another restless night of
    sleeping with the enemy -
    another silent wake with the quiet
    murderer in my own heart,

    I'm frozen in
    a suburb of Chicago,
    stirring cream into my coffee
    and choking with guilt for
    a bird on my window.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    #15 Invisible Touch
    Prompt: Living in a haunted house

    Antique dwelling, house of old
    Eerie secrets, stories untold.

    Living In silence, upon a mist
    Horrific tale, with a tragic twist.

    Alone In darkness, thunder screams
    Falling asleep, devoured in dreams.

    Frozen hands with an invisible touch
    Clinking, clanking, sounds of a crutch

    Feeble man, dressed In black and grey
    Walks with a limp, coming my way

    Rustic chains, choking my throat
    Smells of moth balls upon his coat

    Scurry and scatter do I to the stairs
    Breaking windows, falling into chairs

    Moaning whispers behind my back
    Demonic spirits, begin to attack

    Ghostly fangs lunge at my face
    Suddenly it's silent, alone In my place

    Drenched In sweat, my gown Is soaked
    Stumbling to the floor, I begin to choke

    I hear a whisper, directly behind me
    Shocked In horror at what I see

    Nobodies there, but on the floor
    A picture that I have seen before

    Blood stained clothes, shots to the head
    Both lay lifeless, pale, and dead

    Man and woman side by side
    Reality setting In, I am the murdered bride

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    #16 Brilliant Disguise
    Prompt: Faking your own death

    I sit upon this grief ridden pew
    hidden behind a veil of torment
    Watching all these people
    who've drifted in and out of my life
    Weeping....laughing....
    So many emotions

    But I can't help but wonder,
    hidden beneath my brilliant disguise,
    where were they in my darkest hours?

    Why did it take faking my death
    to see how they really felt about me?

    All this love and sadness
    is lost upon me
    as I look at my draped casket
    in wonder

    What was I thinking.....
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    # 17 Title: After the Sunset
    Prompt: Titanic survivor

    When the sienna sun
    bids its love to the quarter moon,
    I'll be awakening
    in that subtle distance.
    I am certain the angels
    don't think I'm very far away,
    for my own one has wings
    never failing to guard me
    from fears here and beyond.

    April drives silently by
    with twisted umbrellas
    and oversized tears....
    I try to hold on,
    for it's all I can do now.
    My breaths become strained
    whereas my heart further
    ties itself to your memory.

    New blushes open up
    before creation
    and still, I do not forget-
    time will never change
    how we lived.

    Your warm russet eyes
    surrounded by the passion
    of your red tangles-
    they keep me from stumbling back
    and forcing myself to drown,
    after you.

    It feels like only yesterday
    since water as abundant
    as the sky, froze our words,
    our fingers the only
    attachment, the only sense
    of touch we had.

    And it still feels like we are
    perched on the rail of that ship,
    watching stars settle
    and midnight wink-
    though it's been a hundred years.

    Only fifteen
    yet we thought we had won the world,
    hearts up on mountains- cheering
    that we'd live longer than gold.

    As if nothing could make us fall
    through horizons,
    I gave all of who I knew to be
    for you.

    It seems God promised
    our sailing would be safe
    in the hand of His ocean-
    unsinkable, yet always
    vulnerable in the deepest
    sapphire.

    Those depths are near me,
    I've aged through them....
    maybe they hold the mystery
    of who I've become?

    But just as I remember
    you dropping from my frigid arms,
    your last breath fading like smoke,
    I remember your birth-
    how I followed you, running
    into the vast blue ocean
    that would become your home.

    I will die by this ocean,
    a survivor of our love
    and of tragedy's place for me.
    I will not jump
    without you, my love.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    #18 Poisoned Youth
    Prompt: An alcoholic in Rehab

    Through the open doors she walked...
    steadily creeping forward with fear,
    but with a relinquished hope
    that a poisoned youth would be
    cast into the shadows on the exit
    from her room...

    The bottles were filled with medication
    to cure many a soul,
    yet it was the ruined vodka she still craved,
    playing those helpless mind games
    in the hours before dawn or the
    minutes before dusk...

    She'd wander corridors amidst the likeness
    of herself...
    forming bonds with young ones lost
    over time,
    sheltering her breasts from the touch
    of unburdened warmth...

    her heart
    was heavy yet dusted,
    distant and free...
    for
    maybe
    just maybe,

    It wouldn't feel this bad tomorrow.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`~~~~~~~
    #19 Who will you run to?
    Prompt: A rape victim escaping her rapist

    The river is my blanket,
    warm and torpid.

    I'll bank it with bodiless shrubs,
    barbed and blackened, for my
    bed will never be warm
    again.

    And I'll breathe
    beneath its waters' frosty skin.
    Icy, is my skin.
    The river will kill its numbness
    and swallow the sins.

    And my eyes, they'll grow wider
    against the waters' canvas,
    wider and whiter
    than they'd ever been.

    I heard the river calling
    from a distance, while ebony
    shadows were chasing me.

    And I was running...
    I was tripping, tiptoeing
    and slipping among naked woods
    as blood was seeping, dripping
    and mushing against
    my sultry hips.

    Who will you run to?

    I will run to you, river.

    You're the only who'd lull me
    to sleep. And I swear, I will
    dream, river.

    I will reverie
    beneath your starry waters
    as daybreak pulls me
    away...

    I'll run with you, river.

  • Decayed
    12 years ago

    Beautiful.. :)

    I skimmed through all of them, and (8 - 9 - 13 - 14 - 15) caught my attention.

    I'll read them again tomorrow, maybe I could add some to my list, or remove some!

    There is a big competition, I see!

  • L
    12 years ago

    This is tough to vote. I'm glad we have until sunday to cast our votes.

  • Chelsey
    12 years ago

    Lol Take your time guys, its hard trust me as I was receiving them I was like OMG how in the world would I be able to vote? oh thats right, i dont have to! lol

  • Larry Chamberlin
    12 years ago

    To clarify: we PM our two (2) votes to you & do not vote for our own. Correct?

  • TJ Arizona Eagle
    12 years ago

    I'll go over them in the morning...so many good ones to choose from

  • Melpomene
    12 years ago

    I had a quick skim over these, I've liked a couple so far! Great job all. I'll PM you when I get more time.

  • Chelsey
    12 years ago

    That's correct Larry.

    Take your time guys that's why I gave you til Sunday night. I just reread all of them and again, im not voting, but in my mind I was trying to narrow it down to which two I'd even pick. These are just great

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    What... Those are brilliant!

  • Chelsey
    12 years ago

    2 full days left!! Only 5 people voted so far :)

  • Ms Happiness
    12 years ago

    I'll be waiting for the results:)
    C'mon ppl VOTE

  • Maple Tree
    12 years ago

    These poems are so awesome...... what a wonderful display of creativity!!!!

  • Chelsey
    12 years ago

    7 more hrs! Thanks to those who cast their votes so far!

  • Chelsey
    12 years ago

    3 more hrs :)

  • Lostlove1
    12 years ago

    I take it that voting is closed or did you extend it?

  • Chelsey
    12 years ago

    Yup, voting ended last night at midnight. Stay tuned tonight for round 2

  • Decayed
    12 years ago

    Waiting :)