Poetry Game 3

  • Seronum
    19 years ago

    In this game we will make it more specific. I will start off by making a topic intro, The topic will deal with Depression and illusion. The trick is to go deep as possible in sybolic words or phrases.
    Let the game begin!~

    There was a deep approach, to fall into death's grasp. But you broke free of it and made it last. In social denial you let yourself go. Diminishing all the wounds and your thoughtless sorrow.

  • Seronum
    19 years ago

    You collided with grace as you were freed from the pain, Fading from hatred and growing more sane. Your life is growing stronger but your emotions are still dim. You fight your way from silence and steer clear of anything grim.

    Cmon people, try it out just keep the poem going...

  • Eibutsina
    19 years ago

    How can we when your clearly playing this game with yourself? LoL

  • Seronum
    19 years ago

    Well I didnt get anything till now lol

  • Dorotea©
    19 years ago

    ill give it a try...tho im not sure if this is right...but here goes:

    Thoughts of extension grew deep within the soul, with no escape from the world of demons. Uncurled by words of deception, hatred within the depths of every mind inclined to show from the edges of the insane. Though life's tremour hadn't touched yet, pain sliced the ingenious part of truth.

  • Dorotea©
    19 years ago

    oh wait sry i forgot this was supposed to be a poem! i started my own thing going...uhm...sorry! but its a great idea, but i didn't read your last line about keeping the POEM going so i thought i could make up anything i wanted...lol