Creative Contest!!!

The challenge is to create a poem based off the Title : Golden Memories

It must be submitted by April 5th 2012.

Rules: Must be at least 10 lines long.
Has to include the title "Golden Memories" in one of the verses. Can't be an explicit poem or have any bad language.

1st place: 5 comments...10 ratings
2nd place: 3 comments...5 ratings

Please participate...I would love to see what you come up with :)

Neat! Do you want our poems messaged you or posted on here? And can we submit more than one?

OK yes I'll try it! Also like it was mentioned before do u want us to pm you saying we have written it after we have submitted it?

It's all you fault you've made me cry,
because know i have to live this lye,
you have broke my life into two,
plainly by just being you.

You gave me hopes of something more,
then discarded me, like trash on the floor,
the golden memories of you and me,
must be hid forever for no-one to see.

You made me cheat, you made me lye,
you lifted me up then dropped me from high,
you broke our friendship, you broke my trust,
For nothing more than fulfilling your lust.

So know i lye here next to your friend,
and i know that you friendship is all pretend,
because the golden memories of you and me,
must be hid forever for no-one to see.

Linzi xx

Post it here when u have it :)

And 2 poems of yours at the most :)

Well my title is the same also. Though it tied in also. :p

Golden Memories

As they lie in bed hand in hand
They remember the good times when they could stand
Two lovers young full of vigor and youth
Even when she lost her first tooth
They grew up together not too far apart
As they got older she stole his heart
Times flew by when they said I do
The bond of love remained so true
Then it hit her like paralysis
She could no longer feel below her hips
Not realizing this would be all
Time after time she would fall
His love for her never faded
Like two doves he stayed sedated
Golden memories tell stories of time
Oh how his love for her shined
He said I love you as she fell asleep
My soul for you is your's to keep

Golden memories

They say time tells all
With each leave that falls
Beginning a new day
Time just passes away

Reliving times of joy and pain
Times of sun and of rain
I relive every moment with you
Ready to create more memories soon

As time passes while I hold your hand
The hourglass drops another grain of sand
Years will vanish like a mist in the air
But all our golden memories will be there.

I tried my best. Lol

^^
(I think this one should win) lol No but great job. :) I really liked it. Your use of imagery was done very well. With your first stanza: I really liked this. Time can tell so many stories it's amazing. And of course creeates new ones too.

2nd stanza: This was great. You have sad and then happy times. Every moment is different from time to time.

3rd and last stanza: I really liked this part. Especially incorporating the hourglass was really cool. I could really imagine that grain of sand dropping. Great job. :)

Lol, of course you'd think that. :p and I think yours should win, good thing tainted melody is the judge huh? :) I have to post this on my account when I get the chance.

All of the poems have been sooo great...I didn't think ahead about having to choose just one lol I love how each of the poems is a completely different interpretaion of the title...ty for writing for me :)

By the way I will let everyone know the winner on the 6th and i will post it here :)

Here is mine

The Golden memories

Like water to a fountain
are the golden memories
that spring out of nowhere
during a hot and tantalizing
summer day
to bring out freshness to our souls
as the droplets of water
that were scatteringly
drenched in our body
slowly evaporate
with the temperature
of our summer's time
along with our golden
memories of our previous days
to soon come back like
the water to the fountain
to spring out coolness
whenever the water
touches our face.

So the winner is ICE CRYSTALS!!!!!and the runner up WHITE ORCHID!!!! Everyone did a fantastic job, but you 2 had poems that I felt best fit the Title...Thanks everyone for posting your creative poems :)

Congrats to the winners :)

Yay! :) I felt ice crystals shoud have one too. That poem was really good. Although all of them were good, I loved seeing everyones take on that title. And thank you everlasting! :)

Oh cool thanks. :) Well everyone is a winner in my book anyways. :p I love contests like these cause they bring out a more creative side of the person. So great job everyone. :)

I guess am late..if there is another one, be sure to let me know