Trying Something New

I'm trying something new. Ever hear a beautiful song with an exceptionally beautiful intro and felt that it was deserving of words? Well this is what I'm trying to do and put what I thought was a beautiful intro into words.
The idea of this poem is to serve as an unspoken introduction for a song (it doesn't have to be a beautiful song).

The rules:
1. The written piece will be based on a song and go under the appropriate category for the song.
2. Listen to the song in the title beginning to end (links will be given below)
3. Read the poem while listening to the song's introduction up to the beginning of the verse. You'll find that the stanza's should fit a unique tune and occur in chronological order.

What do you think?

Here's an example:
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1193629

If you don't trust links head on over to my profile and select the poem titled "The Saltwater Room Intro (Read description first!)."

P.S.
It might be a good idea to read the description if you do head over to it.