Step by Step- Round 2 Voting

  • Chelsey
    12 years ago

    Round 2 Voting begins today!!

    All poems include, their title and their ten words.

    Please note that you CAN CAST THE SAME VOTE as you did before. Since these poems are revised or completely redone, it's like voting for a different poem really :)

    For the rest of the rounds, including this one, you may now only vote for ONE poem, which you like the best.

    You have until Tuesday, April 17 to PM me your one vote.

    Id like to give 5 days dues do to the fact that these are long poems and you need time...That's what this challenge was all about anyways right? Creating a story in a poetic fashion :)

    All poems have the same number as they did before. You may notice a few missing due to drop outs or not making the deadline.

    AGAIN CLUB MANAGERS or ANYONE in a club, pass along the message that still ANYONE CAN VOTE. If you did not participate in this challenge, your vote still counts !

    Here are the poems:

    #1 Dream Weaver
    Prompt: Finding your soulmate
    First half: acceptable, believe, calendar, harass, notice
    Second half: precede, bottle, humor, intelligent, delight

    I etched my hopes into your
    skin

    deeming illusion as
    acceptable
    yet forgetting to notice
    your apathy's harass
    upon the calendar of our love
    I fought to believe

    enchanted by a whirlwind
    I faltered

    trembling for the hand
    not yet masked with
    hope

    I reach once more

    humor me in emotions
    trapped in a bottle
    aching to precede
    in melancholy
    masked by an intelligent
    allure leading with delight

    for you have always been my
    dream weaver

    the breath on my lips
    pulsating with
    anticipation

    gone
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    #2 Alive and Kicking
    Prompt: Being 14 and pregnant
    First half: denounce, frame, accommodate, embarrass, blanket
    Second half: exceed, immediate, candle, miniature, caress

    Denounced by strangers and family alike
    Desperately trying to accommodate their every wish
    Often left desolate and empty - nothing more to hide - nothing left to give
    Only heart ache left wrenching deep within the broken walls of this chest

    "You should be embarrassed" they often shout aloud
    Never once considering how the events played out
    Just a few short months ago I was once your wife
    Until that dreadful New Years Eve night.

    Do they even consider how I hide under your blanket every night
    Tightly clinging to the small wooden barn frame
    With your photograph still tucked neatly inside
    Longing to feel your hands caress me once more-as I cry myself to sleep

    No more candle light dinners for two - you and me
    Our lives together came to an immediate halt - a brutal end
    No longer seen as a loving and loyal wife standing by your side
    Instead I am just a fourteen year old pregnant slut, in the public eye.

    Our time together exceeded quickly by - leaving me behind
    But now my love; a miniature version of you
    Continues to grow abundantly within my belly and heart
    As I am pleased to announce we are both alive and kicking.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    # 3 Practical Magic
    Prompt: A preachers secret struggle
    First half: accident, height, receipt, weather, grateful
    Second half: reason, loss, goal, needle, cover

    It could of been by accident,
    Like a tailor forgetting a receipt,
    To his God he feels grateful,
    Yet his spiritual height dose retreat.

    The weather is nice this day,
    Time to take a walk,
    The needle of his fear succumbs him,
    All the things he was ever taught,

    He stands within his reason,
    To turn from the pew,
    To dance with the faeries,
    Under skies ever blue,

    It his goal to go to heaven,
    And sing praises to God
    And cover his eyes from magic,
    But now his church feels odd,

    His old faith found again,
    This new one might be a loss,
    But the Preacher still struggles,
    The Pentacle or the Cross.........
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    #4 Despicable Me
    Prompt: An obesity struggle
    First half: amateur, rug, equipment, disheveled, paper
    Second half: understand, above, skill, hang, deny

    I was an amateur when it came to romance
    I just could not sweep that detail under a rug
    Something inside told me I might have a chance
    In spite of my equipment and disheveled mug

    Maybe my love could see past the despicable me
    If I put my feelings on paper so she could see
    How passionate and romantic that I could be
    I let my heart, soul and mind go completely free

    Feelings I could neither understand nor deny
    Would hang strongly in the balance as I sought love
    I knew the despicable me would have to die
    The only way to rise was with help from above

    I had waited long enough to receive my fill
    Of what I had only felt every now and then
    Desiring with the wish to record with great skill
    The beauty of my experience armed with a pen
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    #5 Beneath these Broken Wings
    Prompt: A divorced man/woman finding love again
    First half: certificate, acquire, exhilarate, ignorance, spoon
    Second half: hungry, judgment, neighbor, mirror, possession

    I never did learn to acquire
    a taste for rainbows and all their
    pangs of death.

    And today our vows
    became nothing more than
    a certificate sinking
    in the depths of ignorance,
    for we knew nothing of love
    and its exhilarate touch
    of sunshine.

    -How foolish I was to believe
    a fork could become a spoon-

    And between sun and moon
    we part and August came
    with hungry winds
    and moonless air that dripped
    with judgement and sneered
    in mirrors and wept for the flesh
    of a kiss after death

    yet the pale remembrance
    lay within my eyes like
    unspoken words lost somewhere
    between the stars

    as midnight tears tangled
    within my thoughts
    and your pillow arched closer
    to the hollow of my ache
    I breathed in the silence-
    of solitude

    and it was only in the silence
    did I hear the beat-
    of my own heart
    and beneath these broken
    wings lay the strength
    to fly again

    for I had found
    the one I must love first
    -a neighbor to my shadow-
    a possession worthy to hold
    within my hand
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    # 6 History repeats
    Prompt: Finding a message in a bottle
    First half: conscience, support, fan, inches, worry
    Second half: delude, rock, exist, independent,

    A piece from the sky fell
    into the embracement
    of the oceanic waves
    located inches far away
    from a shore of a non windy land
    to later be found
    by a fan with a conscience
    to support his worry mind
    and at the same time
    be capable of understanding
    the message embottled
    deep within the fallen piece.

    Until history repeats
    the message from the fallen sky
    will remain hidden to the rest
    of the unfamiliar beings
    who later will receive a flying rock
    with an independent note
    to delude each of them to believe
    that a supernatural occasion
    of extraterrestrial beings
    have finally exist
    with the fallen of the note
    coming from a non ordinary rock
    with a foreigner style of outer-space.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    #7 Forever and a Day
    Prompt: The birth of your first child
    First half: move, private, speaker, research, complicate
    Second half: closure, ring, jovial, present, definite

    Love introduced itself in my twenty third year,
    on the fourth day of the first month,
    during the coldest time of the season.

    It didn't come strolling in smiling,
    wearing a three piece suit,
    with blonde hair and blue eyes,
    carrying purple roses either.

    That kind always went away...

    And it came not to the speaker of this poem,
    in the old complicated manner,
    where once we,
    in magic private moments,
    swam beneath neon stars,
    deep in research attempting to move the moon-
    and ourselves.

    Instead,
    It arrived in a less jovial way,
    bearing no ring nor present-
    but toothless, naked and screaming,
    weighing in at seven pounds, thirteen ounces,
    at one o nine in the afternoon.

    The moment she was born,
    the mother in me was born as well.
    I knew those two tiny, brand new hands would be
    the same ones holding my tired, old ones,
    when my time on earth was almost through.

    Yes,
    love defined itself that January morning,
    through only the echoes of a newborn heartbeat,
    I met the greatest love of my entire life.

    A love that could not disapear with the rising sun,
    or run off into the night, hiding,
    getting lost then fading away.
    This love had no definite beginning
    and certainly no end,
    this one would last forever and a day,
    bringing closure to my search for true love.

    Instinctively,
    it came the very moment
    I stared into my sweet daughters eyes
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    #8 Buried Alive
    Prompt: Living with a cheating, abusive husband
    First half: wedge, soar, depict, remarkable, shirt
    Second half: forth, whisper, congested, nail, flash

    She got up at about 6 in the morning
    and heated some leftover pizza for breakfast,
    looking at the wedge under the door, thinking
    about abstract things like how high an eagle
    could soar or the reason why Jane Austen's books
    depict remarkable women. She herself would like
    to be like Elizabeth Bennet.
    "Mr Darcy, I love you" Her thoughts exploded on her.
    She imagined him without his shirt on.
    A thunder rolled in the distance.
    "Why couldn't Mr Darcy save me too?"

    She went back and forth nervously for some minutes,
    saying words that reached inside her:
    "If he died, it would be a blessing".
    She saw him in a coffin, flowers all around,
    La Llorona weeping.
    She secretly wished God could hear her at least once
    and hated herself for her weakness.
    A whisper crossed her overcrowded, congested mind.
    She tried to build a wall of resistance against the intrusion
    of that dark thought as she polished her broken nail,
    deviating her not disciplined mind to something
    trivial.
    There mustn't be a space there for anger. No, she couldn't
    permit it.
    What happened next was not great.
    A flash of emotion swept over her
    and she realized that Mr Darcy would never save her
    for there was no salvation for those who are dead.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    #9 In a Land Far Away
    Prompt: Creating your own country
    First half: pattern, brush, demand, complete, health
    Second half: purpose, wheel, color, defined, ignite
    In a land faraway, where the brush
    of the morning is a demigod
    pattern...

    Right there, at the top of a moon
    miniatured lightly in pink
    and orange.
    Orange; quested in warm rain-
    rain leaning over the shoulders
    of fate-
    fate like a molten tattoo upon
    a morning hip.

    I'd build my kingdom.
    With complete heed and love,
    slab it with stars; tap dancing and tipsy
    and the light of their blonde hairs would be
    barely seen, as if handcuffed.
    I would strip a song off all its tunes, unfold its wrinkles
    and paint the walls of my corridors
    only with the sadness it holds. I'd heap
    music altogether, sip it all at once
    then split it on my bed.

    I'd build my kingdom.
    No, not with the eagerness of a
    concrete block, or with
    tough marble backing me. Nor even
    with gold, parading in
    my bathroom. I wouldn't either
    demand an army with ferrous helmets; the
    silver slivers of my land could
    embrace my health with total pleasure.

    There would be no purpose
    of death, anyway.

    I'd rather borrow the peerless color
    of a sky; tortured and labored by
    Winter; and pour it onto
    my throne. Adorn the palisades
    with larvas learning how
    to weave a wreath upon a Lotus,
    with worms wobbling along
    a widowed wold. I'd wheedle the
    wheel of whiskey and whet it with
    woolgathering winds then whips it against the
    dwellings; it'd be the eighth wonder.

    My kingdom would be found
    right there, at the top of a moon
    cuddling sparrows in its plume.
    Cuddling sparrows.
    Never sprawled away,
    never warmed enough to soar
    outside its skin.

    I'd loan my arrogance to the color of
    space. I'd loan
    my frozen homeland to a century
    coming from destiny, not time.
    I'd loan my froth and marble to
    another hoopoe of words and
    ignite worn-out wine
    at night.

    My kingdom would be fairytaled
    and roughly defined
    like no sultanate, although
    nobody would repeat like a
    parrot

    'Long live the Queen'
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    #11 Beyond the Rainbow
    Prompt: Two babies being switched at birth
    First half: principle, temperature, balloon, irrelevant, compromise
    Second half: finance, descend, belligerent, couch, bargain

    To Cornac's sidhe ancient takers brought me
    and in my stead left one of their own.
    Surely, you would think, no good
    would come of this abduction -
    human infant assuming cuckoo's station.

    Carried beyond the rainbow:
    no pot of gold, just weary old folk
    whose time had been compromised
    long before my grandparents' kin
    came to ancient shore they called Fal.

    Reared there in cradle of another Fergus,
    he who walked in my sun, while
    they fostered me as son of the principle king.
    Uncle Blaine taught me to race in the bog,
    to drink mead from Cornac's cups.

    He revealed roaring stone now irrelevant
    on the mound of abandoned Tara;
    we drank Dagda's measure full,
    learned to respect Lugh's spear and
    warned me not to draw the shining sword.

    Yet during it all I wandered through
    darkened memories of a mother:
    her bedside crib and cooing songs
    that lulled me to dreamless sleep
    questioning: is all this real or that?

    Fey needs exceed those of humans
    longer lives but at higher temperature;
    more food and drink is consumed,
    with foraging raids through sunlit groves
    then hearty mead and roast bullock.

    As my exploits ballooned in scope
    Uncle Blaine betook us a journey
    on which he showed me human folk
    where an old and sickly sallow crone
    sat by a hearth with a white-haired man.

    "Its your ma, in mortal life,
    and your twin of separate birth."
    This wizened codger, my age?
    This ancient hag suckled me?
    "We age different," said Blaine.

    I stared at her, she looked past me,
    for we carry not a worldly form.
    I remembered again her sweet songs,
    mourned the years lost hearing them
    then turned to her adopted son.

    Great tenderness had he for her -
    it was evident as he was man;
    then I understood the trip to this plane:
    it was her time to go; my only meeting
    would be to see her off to the next world.

    At the end she lay still on the couch,
    so that changeling Fergus gently
    closed the lady's vacant eyes and
    placed a gold coin in her right hand;
    glad I was he'd been her strong lad.

    Blaine placed hand on elvish man's hair
    calling on Lugh and Bride to carry him;
    when done, he straightened up and turned,
    then beckoned to me; 'twas time to leave
    his nephew to the life as had become his own.

    Haunted by questions I am belligerent
    now that to Cornac's sidhe we returned.
    Why had I been granted a fairy life
    while Fergus-Fey made to descend
    to human torment of age and ailment?

    Resolved I am to learn the truth even
    if unmade in the bargain, for what was gained
    does not finance the unsung love long missed
    in leaving maternal devotion to a shade.
    I did not even know my mother's name.
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    #12 False Identity
    Prompt: a muslims life after 9/11
    First half: handkerchief, experiment, fallacy, body, misplace
    Second half: length, maintenance, hair, erode, ordinary

    Handkerchiefs were out to wipe
    some of the tears of the 9/11
    As many innocent bodies were buried,
    kids were orphaned,
    families were dispersed
    A tragedy that broke many hearts

    This fallacy was misplaced
    in the hand of Muslims
    "Terrorist" was the false
    identity taken on by us

    But why was that Muslim man,
    laying in blood, on a sunny afternoon
    Was he an experiment in their hands?

    An ordinary Arabic man,
    just seeking medication?
    He was murdered and
    accused for being a terrorist

    Eroded by their aggressiveness,
    but we didn't generalize that they're all bad

    The length of a hair
    is between them and the truth
    so why don't some
    maintenance take place?
    To clean up this false identity
    Humans are not the same,
    there's the good and bad everywhere
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    #14Sleeping With the Enemy
    Prompt: A soldiers experience after returning home
    First half: touch, identity, exuberance, pot, truth
    Second half: gauge, influence, bed, latter, conquer

    There's a canary on the sill.
    A coal-miner's yellow warning light
    sings mournfully its own murder, so
    my fingers clench and
    for a moment I look for bodies around me.

    Arms broken, necks broken,
    hearts...

    A moment of splintered identity, then
    I blink and am back to myself.

    I see only pots on the stove.
    I lay a hand on the burner -
    cool to the touch.

    But the truth is that
    death follows yellow songs.
    It rallies in the harsh, bright exuberance
    of poisons and flares,
    burns and bombs and the
    dark corners of doomed
    eyes

    and here I've forgotten again
    the torpid influence of reality.
    I've mistaken myself for another,
    the latter for the former,
    gauged my mind, for a moment,
    as whole.

    I forgot that while I'm dead
    tired from another restless night
    in a madman's bed,

    I'm frozen in
    a suburb of Chicago,
    conquered by nightmares
    and choking with guilt for
    a bird on my window.

    I face down the truth. In the dark of every night I'm
    sleeping with the enemy -
    keeping another silent wake with the quiet
    murderer in my own heart.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    #15 Invisible Touch
    Prompt: Living in a haunted house
    First half: Sun, knowledge, source, encounter, block
    Second half: Three, forfeit, plague, resolute, bury

    Gazing out of my attic window,
    The sun tries to warm these frozen lips.

    An evil source has held me captive, alone,
    Faded knowledge of such a tragic encounter
    Leaves me confused, a memory I try to block out.

    I wish to forfeit my soul, and live within empty space,
    The pain of haunting and being haunted is more than I can bare.

    Being a ghost with an invisible touch has left me scarred for eternity,
    and My murderer has left a plague of deceit, questions.

    I resolute to bury his toxic existence amongst the chains he rattles, daily,
    But for now, the clock strikes three am. and it's time for my spirit
    To haunt this house that haunts me, every single day.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    #16 Brilliant Disguise
    Prompt: Faking your own death
    First half: omit, parallel, curtain, disbelief, ignore
    Second half: street, possible, value, accumulate, drive

    Sitting upon this grief ridden pew
    hidden in disbelief
    behind a veil of torment

    Having fallen into
    a parallel of omission
    that I can no longer ignore

    All these people, drifters
    mere ripples upon
    the curtain of my life

    Weeping...reminiscing...laughing

    Finding the love I longed for
    only streets away
    instead of worlds

    An accumulation of my own madness
    has driven me
    beneath this brilliant disguise

    Struggling with a lifetime of values
    placed within me
    possibilities shattering

    as I look at my draped casket in wonder

    What was I thinking?
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    #17 After the Sunset
    Prompt: Surviving the Titanic
    First half: beginning, counselor, socks, interference, baffle
    Second half: challenge, punch, hole, vengeance, smile

    When the sienna sun
    bids its love to the quarter moon,
    I'll be awakening
    in that subtle distance.]
    April drives silently by
    with twisted umbrellas
    and over-sized tears-
    yet I know my socks,
    my legs, will stay dry, soundless
    while searching you.
    I try to hold on,
    for it's all I can do when
    my breaths become strained
    and my heart further
    ties itself to your memory.
    I watch dawn's new blushes open up
    before creation like a
    soft beginning of angels,
    and I invite their interference
    because never, will I forget-
    that time cannot change
    how we once lived,
    on that unsinkable ship.
    Your warm russet eyes
    are the counselor I respire for,
    I cannot be baffled
    when I'm surrounded by the passion
    of your intimate irises-
    they keep me from stumbling back
    and forcing myself to drown,
    after you,

    After the sunset..........

    It feels like only yesterday
    since water as abundant as the sky,
    froze our words, challenging our fingers
    to be the only attachment
    the only sense of touch allowed.
    And it still feels like we are
    perched on the rail of that ship,
    watching stars settle and midnight wink-
    into a sapphire hole of utter
    vulnerability,
    though it's been a hundred years.
    [As if nothing could make us fall
    through horizons, as if waters
    of vengeance would keep peace....]
    I gave all of who I knew to be
    for you.
    But just as I remember
    you dropping from my frigid arms,
    the punch of summers' enemy,
    your last breath fading like smoke,
    I remember your smile-
    how I followed you, running
    into the vast blue ocean
    that would become your home.
    I will die by this ocean,
    a survivor of our love
    and of tragedy's place for me.
    I will not jump
    without you, my love.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    #18 Poisoned Youth
    Prompt: An alcoholic in rehab
    First half: appearance, camouflage, walk, construct, branch
    Second half: force, altitude, blind, intrude, basket
    Through the open doors she walked...
    steadily creeping forward with fear,
    but with a relinquished hope
    that she'd camouflage into the paintwork,
    cast into the shadows on the exit
    from her room...

    Her appearance ghostly white with vodka's tiredness,
    Sadness would walk along the branch of her drooping eyes...

    The bottles were filled with medication
    to cure many a soul,
    yet it was the ruined whiskey she still craved,
    playing helpless mind games
    that the routes of evil would construct
    in the hours before dawn or the
    minutes before dusk...

    She'd wander corridors amidst the likeness
    of herself...
    blind to what she never believed,
    forming bonds with many young ones lost over time.

    Her poisoned youth fed her kidneys...
    with the force of depression,
    as the basket of life hung from her soul
    sheltering her breasts from the touch
    of unburdened warmth...
    that may change in the altitude of faith...

    her heart
    was heavy yet dusted,
    distant and free...
    for
    maybe
    just maybe,

    Tomorrow will intrude and bring her back
    to a simple state of living...

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    #19 Who will you run to?
    Prompt: A rape victim escaping her rapist

    The river is my blanket,
    warm and torpid.

    I'll bank it with bodiless shrubs,
    barbed and blackened, for my
    bed will never be warm
    again.

    Barbs will interrupt
    the trespassing of the dog,
    so he won't have the fortune
    of fueling my bones
    like dispensable oxygen.

    And I'll breathe
    beneath its frosty skin
    as the waters will kill my
    numbness and drain the sins.

    And my eyes, they'll grow wider
    against the waters' canvas,
    wider and whiter
    than they'd ever been.

    I heard the river calling
    from a distance, while ebony
    shadows were chasing me.

    And I was running...
    I was tripping, tiptoeing
    and slipping among naked woods
    as blood was seeping, dripping
    and mushing against
    my sultry hips.

    Who will you run to?

    I will run to you, river.
    I'll hand you my breath.

    You're the only who'd lull me
    to sleep. And I swear, I will
    prepare myself to dream, river.

    I'll utilize the sunlight
    in shipping hope to the dawn,
    beneath your starry waters
    as daybreak impresses my
    bones and pulls me
    away...

    I'll run with you, river.

  • Chelsey
    12 years ago

    Keep the votes coming :) we have some ties!

  • Chelsey
    12 years ago

    LAST DAY TO VOTE!!