Read Some and I'll read back

Read/Vote/Comment

Please do some my New/Old Poems

And I'll do some of yours back.

Rule:

Strictly no one liners. Point out anything that can help me improve. The better comment you give. I'll give that back to you as well.

Just say how many poems you did and I'll the same too

Thanks
In advance

I did three of yours. :)
You are a great writer! :D

I'll do 3 of yours now

I did

Last Breath
Sun and Moon
Little Hero

Thanks

I don't have idea of how many I did, I guess three.

could you take a look at three of mine that grabs your attention.?

Done

I did

Cruel eyes
Clock of life
Flying without parachute

All of them are about life. I like reading those type of poem.

Thank you

Still Open

I will appreciate feedbacks guys

:)

Did all your featured poems.. you can check out my 3 latest poems.. thanks :)

Xanthe

I did

Don't follow me
Burning Bruises
Look at the mirror

Thanks.

Still Open Guys

Come Come

I just did three, and looking forward to reading more of your work! Your very good with metaphor's and simile's!
Gotta say kinda jealous! lol

I'm going to work now, So I'll do yours later :) I never knew that I'm good with it. my first language is not english so I'm still learning. my grammar sucks in my opinion.

Anyways. BRB :)

Thanks

I read 3 of yours, read the most recent 3 i got =) Thanks

Jenn You are so talented

I did

Breathless
Imaginary place
A place for my head

Keep on writing Mam.

Max

I did

Black life
The sun always rise
The Last Tear

You only did 2, But it is okay. I enjoy reading your poems.

Thanks

Still Open Guys

Come Come

Actually i did 3 but i didnt like the 2nd much so i didnt comment it cause i dont know if u like being criticized or not
btw thanks for the comments i'll make sure to make better one next time and about repeated words
they give other meaning every time i repeated them so u cant call that repeating literally

Rated and commented on 'Problems' and stated some opinions..
"Synaesthesia" please
I'd also appreciate constructive criticisms. Thanks in advance :)

Done.

Sorry for the delay.

Still Open Guys

Any helpful comments are well appreciated.

Oki i read 2 more of you
I used to
Almost
now your turn u can read any 2 u like and any helpful comments are welcomed and dont forget to rate
Thanks =)

I'm lacking with grammar. :) I suck at it :)

I'll do yours later I need to go to work for now

Done Max

Sorry for the delay

Still Open guys.