Song title contest!

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Okay, so the challenge is to create a poem where each line is a song title, but the lines must go together and be cohesive. It can be as short or long as you want, but no explicit poems and NO profanity or vulgarity please.

    The winner will receive 5 comments and 10 votes!

    The title can be whatever you choose! I can't wait to see what people come up with! The poems must be submitted by may 10th.

  • tainted melody
    12 years ago

    Ok! This is a really good challenge of creativity...I will start tryingm to come up w/ something but this wont be easy lol

  • L
    12 years ago

    Oh so then do we have to say who sings that song at the bottom in a note?

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Actually that is a good idea, yes I would like that. :) oh and u can submit them on here as well. I know it is a challenge but you guys can handle it! :)

  • Lofallenve
    12 years ago

    I'd love to do this!

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Awesome! Well give it a try. :) and yes if egveryone could put what songs they were fcrom at the bottom. That'd be great! Thx!

  • Max
    12 years ago

    Gr8 at last listening to music will come in handy with poetry haha i will join this

  • tainted melody
    12 years ago

    So here is what I came up with !

    'Come back to me'
    'The war is over'
    'We're not gonna fall'
    So 'Break the spell'
    and 'Rescue me'
    Then this can be 'The time of my life'

    These lines are titles from kelly Clarkson's C.D. (Stronger) David Cook and Daughtry's C.D.(Break the Spell)

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Awesome! I loved that one! :) and it flowed and told a story as well. Great job! :)

  • tainted melody
    12 years ago

    Thanks ... I am excited to see what everyone else writes :)

  • L
    12 years ago

    That was really good, nice job.

  • Moonlit Candles
    12 years ago

    Okay so this is what I came up with: :)

    Have you really ever loved a woman
    Seen her true colors
    But she seems so far away
    Do you remember when it rained
    Lost in the land of confusion
    But I'm coming home
    I will be dying in your arms tonight

    We have line by line
    1. Bryan Adams
    2. Phil Collins
    3. Nickelback
    4. Josh Groban
    5. Chris Daughtry
    6. Cutting Crew

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    @moonlit candles. Wow! I loved this one and the story it told and how u did it with the song titles but yet it gave a powerful message! I am loving this contest already and I only have 2 submissions.

  • L
    12 years ago

    Here is mine:

    Song Title Poem

    1._Please don't go
    2._I don't wanna to live without your love
    3._you light up my life
    4._you keep me hanging on
    5._Whenever, wherever
    6._no matter what

    7._How do I live
    8._life after you

    9._ Can't stop
    10._It's not over
    11._I won't let go
    12._My heart will go on
    13._all I need is a miracle
    14._brighter than the sun

    15._I feel the earth move
    16._the heat of the moment
    17._Not falling apart
    18._back at your door
    19._won't go home without you

    20._Now is the time
    21._baby can I hold you

    22._I'm with you
    23._if you could read my mind
    24._then
    25._you will know
    26._I'll never break you heart.

    27._I know it's you
    28._my love
    29._hold me now
    30._love will keep us together

    31._take your sweet time
    32._I can wait forever
    33._ All for love

    -----------------------------------------------------

    1._by no Mercy
    2._by Chicago
    3._by Leann rimes
    4._by Vanilla fudge
    5._by Shakira
    6._by Boyzone

    7._by Trisha Yearwood
    8._by Daughtry

    9._by maroon 5
    10._by Daughtry
    11.-by James Morrison
    12._by Celine Dion
    13._by Mike and the mechanics
    14._by Colbie Caillat

    15._by Carole Kind
    16._by Asia
    17._by Maroon 5
    18._by Maroon 5
    19._by Maroon 5

    20._by Crystal method
    21._by boyzone
    22._by Avril Lavigne

    23._by stars on 54
    24._by Brad paisley
    25._by black men united
    26._by backstreet boys

    27._by Crystal method
    28._by westlife
    29._by thompson Twins
    30._by Captain & tensile

    31._by Jesse McCartney
    32._by simple plan
    33._by Bryan Adams

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Wow! Very nicely done. Putting all the right titles together makes for an emotional and touching poem. Nice write. :)

  • Midnight Sky
    12 years ago

    Here is mine

    'You and me' is all I need
    'The one I love' is all I think about
    'Everything' I do is all for you
    I learned the truth and now it's 'goodbye time'

    It pains me but I'm 'already gone'
    'Crying' night and day while I'm singing this song
    I 'hurt' when I think about you
    If only you would have just told me 'the truth'

    But I still would 'run' back to you
    One day I will love a 'wife and kids'
    All my life I liked 'living on the edge'
    Meanwhile still knowing 'everybody hurts'

    1. Lifehouse
    2. R.e.m.
    3. Lifehouse
    4. Blake shelton
    5. Kelly clarkson
    6. Aerosmith
    7. Christian aguilara
    8. Jason aldean
    9. Snow patrol
    10. Kenny chesney
    11. Aerosmith
    12. R.e.m.

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    I liked this one also! I am loving how you all are coming up with great ones! This is gonna be a tough decision!

  • Jenni
    12 years ago

    Just wanted to stop by and tell you that this is one original idea! :)

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Thank you! :)

  • Lofallenve
    12 years ago

    In the arms of a monster,(1)
    This(2) Infinite embrace.(3)
    My beloved(6) disease,(7)
    Numb(8) my screams.(9)
    In these arms(10), suffocate me.(11)
    Ravage(24) my dying heart.(12)
    In my blood(13), a message(14)
    written in red(15), tell him(16)
    It's too late(17) to save me(18)
    Too late, too late.(19)
    Leave My Body(20) steal my soul(21)
    Evil Angel(22), take me away.(23)

    1-clockwork hero 2-darius rucker 3-Planetary nights 4-Bon Jovi 5-Blake Shelton 6-Kari Jobe 7-Matchbox twenty 8-Linkin park 9-Ocean Blue 10- Bon Jovi 11-Angelfish 12-Dry Kill Logic 13-Black Stone cherry 14-Coldplay 15-My Tiger My Timing 16-Lauryn Hill 17-Carole King 18-M. Ward 19-Jojo 20-Florence and the machine 21-Rahzel 22-Breaking Benjamin 23-Lifehouse 24-Shockwave

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Gr8 job! Everyone is making this decision extremely hard.

  • L
    12 years ago

    Hehe, can we write more than one?

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Sure! Go for it! I don't mind, if you guys wanna write more than one then you are more than welcome too. :)

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    When you love someone
    beautiful
    yet
    unfaithful

    -someone like you-

    you
    just can't get enough.

    Back to December;
    I loved you

    -I can't break it to my heart-

    we kissed.

    Now you're gone;
    I set fire to the rain
    4 in the morning
    calling out your name

    you promised me
    'I'll be your man'.
    Yet
    you left me,
    breathless,
    possessionless
    lost without you.

    ---

    Goodbye my lover.

  • L
    12 years ago

    Wow noura that was really good!!

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Yes very well done! :) my decision is getting harder and harder.

  • Amy
    12 years ago

    I have seen
    The last day on earth,
    I have seen
    Santa's sleigh bells.
    But, Honestly
    It doesn't matter
    Because
    Nothing compares to you

    In your eyes
    I see
    The ocean
    In your lips,
    I feel free,
    In your hair,
    I can feel
    The youth

    Smooth
    As
    Silk,
    Over and out
    Your protector
    For all time

    I hope
    Your boyfriend,
    Won't let you down.

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Great job amy! :) glad you entered this contest. :)

  • tainted melody
    12 years ago

    Everyone has done amazing!!!! i dont think mine should win lol i can tell you guys really thought your poems out and it made them great!

  • L
    12 years ago

    Yeah.

    I'm glad, I'm not the judge.
    I was going to try to write another one, but I haven't had time.

    In any case, this was fun.

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Yes, this is going to be so tough for me to choose a winner! There were so many good ones but winner will be announced tomorrow! :) thanks to all who joined in on this contest!

  • L
    12 years ago

    The suspense.. I just hope the one I like wins.

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Okay? So I wanna thank everyone who entered this contest, but I looked really hard at everyone's poems and it was between two and it was really really difficult to pick just one, the decision was like sooo close but the one I liked the best from the very first time I read it and the one that I picked to be the winner is.......everlasting! :) I loved your poem and when I reread it I loved it even more so congrats! :) :)

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    I will comment and vote for you as soon as I can, but congratulations! But seriously it was so hard! Lol

  • L
    12 years ago

    Eh? I really thought the one winning was the other one from lofallve
    Thank you though, this was surprising and challenging.

    Thank you for hosting this contest, it was really fun.

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Nope, it was yours! It was a difficult decision but I remembered how much you used of the song titles and yet it still flowed and I like the whole thing in general. And you're welcome!

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    Yeah, yeah, for sure my baby baby Luce will win. ;P Who even doubted that, eh? Congrats, sweetheart! Thanks W.O. for the contest!

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    You're wlecome! Thank you for participating!

  • Lofallenve
    12 years ago

    Congrats! :D
    That was a mega fun contest. Should do another. :3

  • Xanthe
    12 years ago

    Sorry to butt in lol
    Congrats Lucero! Fully deserved :)
    To everyone else who entered as well, plus to White Orchid.

    I'll go now..