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Hello everybody
I just wrote new poems called(The end of my world) and (the puppet show)
read-comment and rate and i'll do the same for any 2 poem of u
i welcome feedback and comments to tell me if i made any mistake
Thanks =)

I have done so. :)
If you could do either "Bloody Hope," Or "Mine Own Heart, Soft Hands."

Since ive already done "The end of my world" i wont do it again lol.. but i'll be sure to have a look at "the puppet show"

if you could do any one of mine that would be awesome =)

Done!, do any two you like.:)