New Contest :D

  • Moonlit Candles
    12 years ago

    So I wanted to kick off a new contest for you folks. This one will be a little challenging but fun. Everyone that wants to participate feel free. All I ask is please no vulgar language and have fun.

    You are to write an acrostic with the title.... "Sweet Lullabies"

    The winner will receive 10 votes and 7 comments.
    The deadline is May 20th so get your thinking caps on.
    So have fun and enjoy. :)

  • Lofallenve
    12 years ago

    I'd love to do this :D

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Yes! I will join also. :)

  • Poet on the Piano
    12 years ago

    This sounds wonderful! I'm in :)

  • tainted melody
    12 years ago

    I'll try and come up with something...good challenge by the way.

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    Ohhh the deadline is on 20th May? MY BIRTHDAY! Then I'll have bonus as a gift, ha? xD just kidding!

    God, there is no member in the site who hasn't yet heard of my birthday date lmao.
    Okay I'll stop it. Here is my poem! ;P

    Sweet Lullabies

    Since you, I and the sound of rain
    were the rise of an
    emerald morning, the sky started to fall off the
    edges of a nonchalant God
    to paint a haiku in our kiss.

    Lonely moons; our hearts decided to
    unbosom. I grew up to believe that you are a
    lyrical, queer creature-
    lost between Autumn
    and the hugs of a mother who's never
    been to my daydreams.
    I never harked to a lullaby, I never
    even slumbered in my life without the
    sounds of you dying again.

    --

    Tada!

  • Lofallenve
    12 years ago

    Saccharine, as if honey dripped from her lips,
    While her babe lay wreary from the day;
    Enunciating fictional stories of heroes,
    Entering battles, rescuing the damsel.
    Tales of lore before sleep takes it course,
    Lulling the young down the path of slumber.
    Under the security of her blankets,
    Love from a mother drifts in the air,
    Like the scent from a lit candle in the night.
    Ambrosial words drift off the mother's lips;
    Beauty in the words, beauty in the imagination
    Insistent,eyes close, flying to the castle in the air.
    Entering her dreams, she hears her mother speak.
    Sacharrine, as if honey dripped from her lips.

  • Moonlit Candles
    12 years ago

    Everyone is doing an excellent job. Inspirations came quick. lol These are very good. Keep them coming. :)

  • Poet on the Piano
    12 years ago

    She has always blossomed like the rose of Juliet,
    waiting for the night echoes to love her once more and
    endlessly approach her lips, with the sound of music.
    each lullaby her children sought is here
    tonight- and there is no regret when she dreams.

    Losing sleep over dancing with the wind,
    uttering no more than whispers to keep the
    lucid touch of his name, the silk beauty none but her see.
    laying across dew of dawn and memory's feel
    at the mouth of sunshine- she will not let day end
    by running on oily breaths like a tear stained painting.
    it's never too late to call upon him and wish
    eloquence to live on through him- where
    she will sing and dance with her beloved, forever.

  • Xanthe
    12 years ago

    My attempt:

    Sin painted a
    Wilting flower in your eyes,
    Echoing
    Everything you did
    To her.

    Last season will never be forgotten.
    Utter all your pray'rs-
    Loudly scream;
    Level your voice with the stars
    And still, you will never
    Be forgiven; you will never be heard.
    I'll never hear your lullaby
    Even if the sun stops rising; please, just
    Stop trying...

    ~X
    05/17/12

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Wow! That was really good. @ moonlit candles, I'm still trying to come up with something. Lol

  • L
    12 years ago

    Here is my attempt

    Sweet lullabies

    Sing me ethereal dreams
    Whenever I go to sleep,
    Empyrean cherubim,
    Enchant my reveries and
    Torture all immortal sins.

    Light up your celestial wings,
    Unwind the heavens on me
    Let the rainbow be my soul,
    Legendary seraphim,
    Armor my bare heart with love
    Before and after a fall
    Ignite my somber days with
    Empyreal hopes, but don't
    Set asunder my free will.

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    MarryAnne's one is the best. Announce the winner already, MC.

  • Moonlit Candles
    12 years ago

    Great job everyone. Your doing a wonderful job. If needed please pm me and let me know if you need more time. I can extend the date a little longer. Lovely work.

  • H
    12 years ago

    Sweet Lullabies

    Drifting to sleep,
    I eagerly close my eyes,
    All thanks to my love's
    Sweet lullabies.

    The thought of my love,
    His beautiful voice slipping between his lips,
    Always gives me peaceful rest,
    As I see an angel behind my closed lids.

    His voice like none else,
    His blonde hair and blue eyes,
    Bring me sweet rest,
    These are my sweet lullabies.

    Even more than all of this,
    His love forever promised.
    Ever the sweetest lullaby,
    He is my eternal bliss.

  • Moonlit Candles
    12 years ago

    I will let that slide but this contest involves acrostic writing style. :)

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    Here is my attempt. :p

    Serenate me with your song
    Whisper it quietly into my ear
    Every word my anticipation lingers
    Enticing me into joining the melody
    Tuning out everything except you and me

    Lasting memories our melody will create
    Undescribable feelings it illuminates
    Lovely notes we both desire to share
    Listening to our hearts without a care
    Abounding with joy the both of us are
    Belief in our song will take us far
    Igniting a light to our path together
    Each waking moment we'll cherish forever
    Such a sweet lullaby we've given to each other.

  • Moonlit Candles
    12 years ago

    Okay everyone. I will be looking things over throughout the day. Submissions must be by 6pm. And I will announce the winner around 8pm. Thank you everyone for your fantastic and intricate works. Wonderful jobs. :)

  • Moonlit Candles
    12 years ago

    Well I have to say everyone done an amazing job. All the poems were well written. A round of applause for everyone. But unfortunately I have to choose one. The one I liked best is..... Poet on the Piano. I thought your stuck out the most with such emotion. You could really get the feeling of the title throughout the poem as you read. Great job. Will get to your poems and all for you. Thanks everyone. :)

  • L
    12 years ago

    Congrats to the winner!!

    Thank you guys for making this contests. They are fun and challenging :).

  • Poet on the Piano
    12 years ago

    Thanks so much Moonlit Candles! Really enjoyed this contest, thank you for hosting it. I agree it was a challenge :P

    Great job to all the poets who entered, your poems are beautiful

  • White Orchid
    12 years ago

    That was one of my favorites also, actually I think it was my favorite. :) congrats to poet on the piano. :) your poem was beautiful. :)

  • Xanthe
    12 years ago

    Congrats MaryAnne :D
    Well-deserved

    Thanks, Moonlit Candles for this awesome contest.

  • nouriguess
    12 years ago

    Told ya! Told ya! Told ya!

    :P congratulations sweets. I knew it! Mwa.
    Thanks MC. :)