Please comment on my poem , i'm a new writer..

  • Jawwad Zafar
    12 years ago

    Please comment , i'm a new writer..

    www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1197474

  • Yrem Crish
    12 years ago

    I've done it, lol. Can you read mine too??

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1197019

    Thanks:)

  • Silent Girl
    12 years ago

    Can you read my poem's ?