HG - Round #3 POEMS

  • Decayed
    12 years ago

    So here are the 4 awesome collaborations! I intended through this topic to bring distant members together by choosing the couples from different clubs.

    There is a poem written by ME & a member who lost through the 2nd round but was able to return back to the game by guessing who wrote which winning poem of the 2nd round. Congrats for this SMART contestant ------- the 1st to be able to guess correctly all the names! (Note that the method of guessing won't be eligible in this round, since the 4th round is the final one, and we will only be left with '2' contestants, and because we exceeded the schedule I have put for this contest.)

    ENOUGH with talking; Let's read those collaborations!!

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    #1 (The orbit of his Life)

    an adversary's arrow
    struck towards a new Fog-
    a mocking-jay

    in return, with his beak,
    he pecked the septic shaft-
    until September

    dwindling the fire
    blazing from his wings-
    the bird soared into the heavens

    with flitting breaths
    and obscure eyes
    infringing death ponds,
    he fell astray

    right towards the end
    of a rocky ocean.

    TITLES USED:
    - Fog
    - September

    ~

    #2 (Ensnared Phoenix)

    Whenever your arms embrace me
    (only in public), you'd bask in my
    juvenile enchantment, just like
    reserving a sunlounger with a towel.
    By the time we reach the doorsill
    it usually shrinks to a washcloth.

    Although on the onset to myself
    I condemn me up to alienation
    because I fear venerating you.

    My fate has evolved into an
    abridged canary you keep extorting-
    must I live, small and ringed, around
    your thumbs that crowd muliebrity?

    Adorning yourself with beauty,
    how you unequivocally own me...
    But I must ascend toward those
    phoenix beckonings,
    for rebirth will christen when I
    break habits to reinforce who the
    original beauty veritably is.

    During repression I search for
    effigies, that reveal my strength,
    but all I manage to do is take
    the small outline of dreams and
    braid a silhouette, feeding
    fragrances of bygone loves.

    I wish for time, to slide into sleep
    and re-experience unsought
    yesteryears, so that my wings
    may sprout with me, letting me fly.

    I emerge, ripened and apt to envisage
    the truth of sailing on liberation,
    with nothing but a trail of our
    harmonies left to burn evermore.

    Yet, I can't endure the power
    your memories still bind me by;
    morphed into your actions like
    cement-induced heartbeats,
    I retreat within the cinders...
    unable to defy another caress.

    TITLES USED:
    - Bygone(s)
    - You

    ~

    #3 (Seeking Shelter)

    Sitting with Momma, the same place we always sit
    where we eat, talk, sleep, and live,
    it's supposed to be our sanctuary;
    we call it home, yet, it isn't even a home

    Tonight, I will sleep outside, to the closest thing I'd call home
    laying there freezing, shivering, counting the number of brittle days
    that I pray for sleep to gently extract me and take me away

    Thunder roars as the heavens open and rain washes away the crimes of
    dirty streets, tapping relentlessly on windows,
    while my broken body cries for shelter and tears fall; mixing with the raindrops... still, we strive for survival

    Momma and I struggled to do our best
    saving each penny that is tossed our way
    hoping, praying, for a better day
    dreaming of jewels and riches, wishing to cultivate our American dream

    Lightning flashes in the distance while the torrential downpour continues
    Cold seeps into my soul and I know undoubtedly tonight is just a repeat of the last, a premonition of the next and I will sit between dusk and dawn
    praying, with my eyes closed, for a better tomorrow

    Momma's arms encircle this bruised body and silently, I weep
    this life was not meant for her, for me, for us and yet still,
    she constantly glazes me with her unconditional love
    I know that somehow, somewhere, at any hour of the day or night,
    God will shine down on us and protect us

    The rain continues to splatter loudly and the cold storm is inevitable
    More lightning streaks while thunder's screams pierce through our bodies
    I look to Momma, and I see how weak she has become, while I cover her,
    and pray she finds the strength that she has given me

    The cold has overtaken her body, gasping instead of breathing,
    her eyes close slowly and I search for her icy pulse, life slowly draining
    yet her lips part slightly, mumbling a single word: "h-o-p-e."
    I nod, tears covering my face, as her eyes close for the final time

    Raising my eyes to the heavens
    overwhelmed with such loss and grief
    somehow though, I know she's watching, listening, protecting,
    and so I pray to her, only to her, and whisper,
    "The sky's still pink, Momma."

    TITLES USED:
    - Tonight, I will sleep outside
    - Between Dusk and Dawn
    - The sky's still pink, Momma

    ~

    #4 (Savanna)

    Dusk falls as scarlet paints the flower bed.
    The chilled air holds an unreachable future
    and the stars never twinkle a dream.
    In the distance life slips away from her grasp,
    for rebels had stripped her of freedom.

    Perched upon burdened branches, I supervise
    her every absorption as she soaks in redemption.
    Unbeknownst to her, I crave that soul to bleed,
    to die, to test every ounce of morality I've ever had.

    I shan't peak my victory until her final breath is taken.
    In sight of forest life, she'll not question my purpose.
    In her resting, she'll not clutch dandelion dust on
    which she once blew; to keep faith of the spirited,
    and the sprightliness to kill, will not surrender on her wings

    They gamble on her, because her innocence
    mumbles anticipated sounds of triumph.
    Her physique resembles the Mockingjay, soaring to
    a hopeful heaven; they're ignorantly mistaken.
    I will dominate this game as the arena
    stays my savanna.

    My daggers will sink into her being
    and these claws will scratch away her virtue.

    Destiny shall rise with the sun, as freedom repents
    against her immobilisation.
    A voice of crime will dampen the air with
    cackled whispers. Unwanted gasps will
    prove silent to my ears for,
    she is the victim of my hunger.

    My eagerness to hunt relies on
    the folly of my prey. My grin signals
    satanic notions and my laughter evokes
    evil into the atmosphere.

    The moment is here, and her leg triggers
    my trap. She's now dangling by the ankles,
    tantalizing me with her savoury aroma.

    I attack! Feathers flutter to the ground
    as I rip her apart, wing by wing. Blood
    sinks under my nails and dyes my skin.
    Their symbol for hope now ruined
    and reaking with the smell of despair.

    TITLES USED:
    - Scarlet paints the flower bed
    - voice of crime

    ----------------------------Stay tuned for the results!

  • Jenni Marie
    12 years ago

    Absolutely beautiful work from everyone!

  • Decayed
    12 years ago

    Results are soooon!

  • Chelsey
    12 years ago

    Yay!

  • Decayed
    12 years ago

    This round I have 5 Judges not 4 ;)

    I'm waiting on one more judge only! wohooo

  • Chelsey
    12 years ago

    Gah come on, no more judges. Lol

  • Decayed
    12 years ago

    No no, it's totally better this round, since they are collaborations..... and I am getting totally varied scores!

  • Sunshine
    12 years ago

    JUDGE...COME ON -_-