THe first poem I ever read on P&Q

  • Max
    12 years ago

    Lets get over our political disagreements and come here to a more peaceful world haha
    hope you all are doing fine
    I was thinking of the first poem I ever read on here and it happened to be my 1st fav too which is

    The poet's heart.

    No uttered words the poet speaks,
    No skies of golden hue,
    No tales of unrequited love,
    They were lost when I lost you.

    No words to caress his lover's heart,
    And gone the dreams he swore they'd live,
    But alone within the poet dwells,
    No uttered words... none left to give.

    No music swells within his soul,
    Just silence surrounds his heart,
    And the solitude engulfs his world,
    When the poet and love depart.

    And lost the beauty he once could see,
    And the glory he saw each day,
    Now the poet pens his last farewell,
    No more love can he convey.

    But what's the poet's soul to do?
    To release the love he feels,
    For he'll surely die and wither,
    If that love he now conceals.

    He must hide the hurt and heartache,
    Just smile to friends and say,
    I'm fine... love doesn't matters,
    And deceive them all that way.

    For a different face he'll show them,
    To barricade his pain,
    To hide his shattered spirit,
    From the love he ne'er attained.

    But the pain within shall kill him,
    Not soon but through the years,
    For the poet knows his anguish,
    When alone he sheds her tears.

    And at night when dreams come calling,
    With her voice, her smile... her eyes,
    A single tear upon his cheek,
    Hides the pain his heart belies.

    For he loved her soul completely,
    Was consumed by beauty's bliss,
    Had shared her inner thoughts,
    But never shared her kiss.

    And when death comes to the poet,
    And to heaven his soul ascends,
    He'll smile before her beauty,
    For eternity never ends.

    So will the poet regret the life,
    Which stole away the years,
    No he'll simply recall the love,
    He felt in all her tears.

    And when his love has joined him,
    And they meet in heaven's bliss,
    Their regrets will quickly perish,
    As they kiss their first sweet kiss.

    And the words will quickly flow again,
    From my thoughts, to hand... to book,
    I'll not write of God or Heaven,
    When upon your face I look.

    So the poet's again a poet,
    For the words were always there,
    I just didn't see much beauty,
    When your love I couldn't share.

    So their souls will find the love at last,
    That in life they could not seek,
    And the poet soon finds the words in you...
    The words... he could not speak.

    this is it I know it is long but I like reading it lol

    can you remember the 1st poem you read on here??
    or even the 1st you added to your fav.??

  • Lostlove1
    12 years ago

    Lovely Piece who is the author?

  • Max
    12 years ago

    The author is BlueDreams
    yeh it is lovely for sure

  • Britt
    12 years ago

    I definitely can't remember the first poem I read here, that was roughly 7.5 years ago (holy crap!)..nor do I remember the poem I added to my favorites on my first account..

    On this account, http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1191601

    Sib's poem "Wine and Everything Else" was first poem added to my faves.

  • Decayed
    12 years ago

    I THINK, and just think, that the 1st poem I read was one that Sylvia wrote... I guess it was a winning poem... I can't remember the name :/ It was about looking in the mirror, and discovering that the old woman who's looking back is herself... oh it was wonderful :)

    But, my 1st & ONLY poem added to my favorites is this:

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1158679

    (Fleeing Sands - Ms Sunshine)

  • Melpomene
    12 years ago

    I don't remember the first poem I ever read here but I can share the first poem added to my favourites list on this account.

    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1031383

    It's still one of my favourite poems on PnQ.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    12 years ago

    Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=899385

  • Max
    12 years ago

    Nice poems :D
    Thanks for sharing people =)
    anybody willing to let me read one more piece? =P

  • Decayed
    12 years ago

    Read those, Max, I'm sure you'll like them. They are awesome, IMO:

    - http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1192752 (about lesbian love)

    - http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1161408 (about losing a father)

    - http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1173637 (about a mother)

    - http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1194407 (about pain of growing up)

    - http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1112378 (about becoming old --- OH, I found it.... the first poem I read, I guess..... for Sylvia :)

    - http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1174165 (about a novel/pain comparison)

    - http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1184826 (about OCD struggle)

    - http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1180638 (about a prostitute.)

    --> Enough for now :P

  • MyHalozChokinMe
    12 years ago

    I'm fairly new to the site and visited this forum at the suggestion from The Godfather.

    The first poem I read on this site was:

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1174165

    Absolutely loved it.