My first poem

Hello! I just wrote my first poem today, and i dont know if i feel like its good bc of the connection i have to the words. or if it is really alright. I would love if someone could check it out and give me some feed back, its on my page.

Sure

I looked at ur poem its really good. :)

Well its fantastic...
Just give u one suggestion dont be limited do it un limited...
By putting it in various sites..
recently came on a site called touchtalent.com just put it there or have a look there its awesome. Its my experience.
Thank u
Regards..
Abi..

Its awesome..fantastic work..
Just giving u a suggestion.Dont be limited just put it in various sites. Recently came to a site touchtalent.com. Just sharing u my experience just have a look on it.
Thank u..
Regards..
Abi