What poem has stuck with you?

  • Darren
    11 years ago

    I am interested to know which poems have stayed in your heads for many years. This poem below is one I studied at school 20 years ago. I only read it once but I still remember most of it after all these years. It was the first time I realised that poetry could have double meaning, a simple nature poem that says so much more about mans greed and the must have now culture.
    this poem is still relevant after all these years.

    Blackberry Picking

    Late August, given heavy rain and sun
    For a full week, the blackberries would ripen.
    At first, just one, a glossy purple clot
    Among others, red, green, hard as a knot.
    You ate that first one and its flesh was sweet
    Like thickened wine: summer's blood was in it
    Leaving stains upon the tongue and lust for
    Picking. Then red ones inked up and that hunger
    Sent us out with milk cans, pea tins, jam-pots
    Where briars scratched and wet grass bleached our boots.
    Round hayfields, cornfields and potato-drills
    We trekked and picked until the cans were full
    Until the tinkling bottom had been covered
    With green ones, and on top big dark blobs burned
    Like a plate of eyes. Our hands were peppered
    With thorn pricks, our palms sticky as Bluebeard's.
    We hoarded the fresh berries in the byre.
    But when the bath was filled we found a fur,
    A rat-grey fungus, glutting on our cache.
    The juice was stinking too. Once off the bush
    The fruit fermented, the sweet flesh would turn sour.
    I always felt like crying. It wasn't fair
    That all the lovely canfuls smelt of rot.
    Each year I hoped they'd keep, knew they would not.

    Seamus Heaney

  • Melpomene
    11 years ago

    When I was in high school we studied a range of poems written by Australian Poets. This is one of the poems that has stuck with me, I've always admired Bruce Dawe's use of technique.

    Memento, homo, quia pulvis es, et in pulverem reverteris.
    (Epigraph: Remember, man, that thou art dust, and unto dust thou shalt return.)

    Blink, blink. HOSPITAL. SILENCE.
    Ten days old, carried in the front door in his
    mother's arms, first thing he heard was
    Bobby Dazzler on Channel 7:
    Hello, hello hello all you lucky people and he
    really was lucky because it didn't mean a thing
    to him then..

    A year or two to settle in and
    get acquainted with the set-up; like every other
    well-equipped smoothly-run household, his included
    one economy-size Mum, one Anthony Squires-
    Coolstream-Summerweight Dad, along with two other kids
    straight off the Junior Department rack.

    When Mom won the
    Luck's-A-Fortch Tricky-Tune Quiz she took him shopping
    in the good-as-new station-wagon (£ 495 dep. at Reno's).
    Beep, beep. WALK. DON'T WALK. TURN
    LEFT. NO PARKING. WAIT HERE. NO
    SMOKING. KEEP CLEAR/OUT/OFF GRASS. NO
    BREATHING EXCEPT BY ORDER. BEWARE OF
    THIS. WATCH OUT FOR THAT. My God (beep)
    the congestion here just gets (beep)
    worse every day, now what the (beep beep) does
    that idiot think he's doing (beep beep and BEEP).

    However, what he enjoyed most of all was when they
    went to the late show at the local drive-in, on a clear night
    and he could see (beyond the fifty-foot screen where
    giant faces forever snarled screamed or make
    incomprehensible and monstrous love) a pure
    unadulterated fringe of sky, littered with stars
    no-one had got around to fixing up yet: he'd watch them
    circling about in luminous groups like kids at the circus
    who never go quite close enough to the elephant to get kicked.

    Anyway, pretty soon he was old enough to be
    realistic like every other godless
    money-hungry back-stabbing miserable
    so-and-so, and then it was goodbye stars and the soft
    cry in the corner when no-one was looking because
    I'm telling you straight, Jim, it's Number One every time
    for this chicken, hit wherever you see a head and
    kick whoever's down, well thanks for a lovely
    evening Clare, it's good to get away from it all
    once in a while, I mean it's a real battle all the way
    and a man can't help but feel a little soiled, himself,
    at times, you know what I mean?

    Now take it easy
    on those curves, Alice, for God's sake,
    I've had enough for one night, with that Clare Jessup,
    hey, ease up, will you, watch it --

    Probity & Sons, Morticians,
    did a really first-class job on his face
    (everyone was very pleased) even adding a
    healthy tan he'd never had, living, gave him back for keeps
    the old automatic smile with nothing behind it,
    winding the whole show up with a
    nice ride out to the underground metropolis
    permanent residentials, no parking tickets, no taximeters
    ticking, no Bobby Dazzlers here, no down payments,
    nobody grieving over halitosis
    flat feet, shrinking gums, falling hair.

    Six feet down nobody interested.

    Blink, blink. CEMETERY. Silence.

  • Yakari Gabriel
    11 years ago

    This poem crosses my mind each day, sometimes 3 times in a day.. ever since it i read it for the first time

    Paris
    by Melpomene

    I've heard whispers of Paris lately,
    the city of love and some place foreign to me
    where a man designed beauty with a tower
    and called it art. I guess it was something
    wonderful but I've studied beauty on your lips
    like a surrealist painting. Your tongue
    spoke of Greece and tasted of a thousand
    nights on Navagio Bay, but I will call you
    Paris anyway because you are far
    too beautiful to be anything else.

    With time I realized Paris was a city of false
    prophecies, men can't be made and frogs
    aren't princes yet not too long ago I'd chase
    them 'round the serenity of a backyard pond -
    the pond I haven't seen in months.
    I guess I thought I was a princess but
    Paris fell more remarkably than the London Bridge.
    Towers burnt and I haven't been back there since.

    I think I was born to write dreams -
    the kind that makes you sleep for hours.

    I'm the opposite of a Narcissus, Paris.
    My reflection is a reminder that a heart is never
    enough in the city of love.
    The puddles always mirror you and
    I swear I saw you in a window last night
    but you faded as quickly as you always do.

    I love time but time doesn't love those
    who cower behind written words..

    .. like I do.

  • Colm
    11 years ago

    He wishes for the cloths of heaven - W.B. Yeats.

    Had I the heavens' embroidered cloths,
    Enwrought with golden and silver light,
    The blue and the dim and the dark cloths
    Of night and light and the half-light,
    I would spread the cloths under your feet:
    But I, being poor, have only my dreams;
    I have spread my dreams under your feet;
    Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.

  • Larry Chamberlin
    11 years ago

    One of my faves since 1968:

    The End of the World by
    Archibald MacLeish

    Quite unexpectedly, as Vasserot
    The armless ambidextrian was lighting
    A match between his great and second toe,
    And Ralph the lion was engaged in biting
    The neck of Madame Sossman while the drum
    Pointed, and Teeny was about to cough
    In waltz-time swinging Jocko by the thumb
    Quite unexpectedly to top blew off:

    And there, there overhead, there, there hung over
    Those thousands of white faces, those dazed eyes,
    There in the starless dark, the poise, the hover,
    There with vast wings across the cancelled skies,
    There in the sudden blackness the black pall
    Of nothing, nothing, nothing -- nothing at all.

  • Nicko
    11 years ago

    While working in London I used to catch the tube at Earls Court, on some of the advertising hoardings' were some quotes from this poem by Rudyard Kipling, it was this more than anything that ignited my interest in Poetry

    If by Rudyard Kipling

    If you can keep your head when all about you
    Are losing theirs and blaming it on you;
    If you can trust yourself when all men doubt you,
    But make allowance for their doubting too;
    If you can wait and not be tired by waiting,
    Or being lied about, don't deal in lies,
    Or being hated, don't give way to hating,
    And yet don't look too good, nor talk too wise;

    If you can dream--and not make dreams your master;
    If you can think--and not make thoughts your aim;
    If you can meet with triumph and disaster
    And treat those two imposters just the same;
    If you can bear to hear the truth you've spoken
    Twisted by knaves to make a trap for fools,
    Or watch the things you gave your life to, broken,
    And stoop and build 'em up with worn-out tools;

    If you can make one heap of all your winnings
    And risk it on one turn of pitch-and-toss,
    And lose, and start again at your beginnings
    And never breath a word about your loss;
    If you can force your heart and nerve and sinew
    To serve your turn long after they are gone,
    And so hold on when there is nothing in you
    Except the Will which says to them: "Hold on";

    If you can talk with crowds and keep your virtue,
    Or walk with Kings--nor lose the common touch;
    If neither foes nor loving friends can hurt you;
    If all men count with you, but none too much;
    If you can fill the unforgiving minute
    With sixty seconds' worth of distance run,
    Yours is the Earth and everything that's in it,
    And--which is more--you'll be a Man my son!

  • Naughtymouse
    11 years ago

    One of my favs.....The Song of Amergin.

    I am the wind that blows upon the sea,
    I am the ocean wave;
    I am the murmur of the surges;
    I am seven battalions;
    I am a strong bull;
    I am an eagle on a rock;
    I am a ray of the sun;
    I am the most beautiful of herbs;
    I am a courageous wild boar;
    I am a Salmon in the water;
    I am a lake upon a plain;
    I am a cunning artist;
    I am a gigantic, sword-wielding champion;
    I can shift my shape like a god.
    In what direction shall we go?
    Shall we hold our council in the valley or on the mountain-top?
    Where shall we make our home?
    What land is better than this island of the setting sun?
    Where shall we walk to and fro in peace and safety?
    Who can find you clear springs of water as I can?
    Who can tell you the age of the moon but I?
    Who can call the fish from the depths of the sea as I can?
    Who can cause them to come near the shore as I can?
    Who can change the shapes of the hills and headlands as I can?
    I am a bard who is called upon by seafarers to prophesy.
    Javelins shall be wielded to avenge our wrongs.
    I prophesy victory.
    I end my song by prophesying all other good things..

  • Michael D Nalley
    11 years ago

    I have a copy of the most influential poem written by a beautiful poet who is dead and don't know if posting it would get me in trouble

    I also have a version of Just beyond Lifes Garden written by my mother in her hand writing from memory but I am not sure I could find the author (could be Anon or the unknown poet striking again)

    HUMILITY WITH HONOR

    "Michael, Beloved, come hold out your hand

    Let my eyes gaze upon you, God's chosen man

    No longer say: Creature, void of form

    For God called you to this work, before you were born

    While you were yet to be, God knew you then

    He developed your qualities, still hidden within

    Deep in the confines of fleshly folds

    There lay the Wisdom, and Truth would hold

    You grew up before me, so quickly you were

    A man among men. And I was so sure

    That what God had spoken to my heart would be

    Brought to fulfillment in entirety

    One day, you'd see your Aunt Agnes was right

    God's eyes never ever let you out of His sight

    Whether you wander or roam, or choose to run

    You'll always be found of the Father and Son.

    My prayers have remained, while I have gone on

    To be with my Maker, and all my loved ones

    Remember, with Wisdom, all things are done

    Humility, with honor, glorifies the Son."

    © 2004 Dorothy Womack
    Written in Memory of Agnes Bertha Clark

    Oh Lord it's hard to be humble lol
    This poem is in Crowning Touches of Bereavment page 159 a poem Dorothy Womack told me she recieved from the spirit of my beloved Aunt

  • Karla
    11 years ago

    Her Kind

    by Anne Sexton

    I have gone out, a possessed witch,
    haunting the black air, braver at night;
    dreaming evil, I have done my hitch
    over the plain houses, light by light:
    lonely thing, twelve-fingered, out of mind.
    A woman like that is not a woman, quite.
    I have been her kind.

    I have found the warm caves in the woods,
    filled them with skillets, carvings, shelves,
    closets, silks, innumerable goods;
    fixed the suppers for the worms and the elves:
    whining, rearranging the disaligned.
    A woman like that is misunderstood.
    I have been her kind.

    I have ridden in your cart, driver,
    waved my nude arms at villages going by,
    learning the last bright routes, survivor
    where your flames still bite my thigh
    and my ribs crack where your wheels wind.
    A woman like that is not ashamed to die.
    I have been her kind.

  • Sincuna
    11 years ago

    A whole lot of poems lay stuck on my mind. They are like small islands I visit to help nurture my emotions, my memories... here's one that fits well with my current being:

    Variations on the Word "Sleep"
    by Margaret Atwood

    I would like to watch you sleeping,
    which may not happen.
    I would like to watch you,
    sleeping. I would like to sleep
    with you, to enter
    your sleep as its smooth dark wave
    slides over my head

    and walk with you through that lucent
    wavering forest of bluegreen leaves
    with its watery sun & three moons
    towards the cave where you must descend,
    towards your worst fear

    I would like to give you the silver
    branch, the small white flower, the one
    word that will protect you
    from the grief at the center
    of your dream, from the grief
    at the center. I would like to follow
    you up the long stairway
    again & become
    the boat that would row you back
    carefully, a flame
    in two cupped hands
    to where your body lies
    beside me, and you enter
    it as easily as breathing in

    I would like to be the air
    that inhabits you for a moment
    only. I would like to be that unnoticed
    & that necessary.

  • Edward D Zurovec
    11 years ago

    If Is definitely a favorite of mine, Classic.
    I do also enjoy and can never forget
    Poe's poem "Eldorado"

    Gaily bedight
    A gallant knight
    In sunshine and in shadow
    Had journeyed long
    Singing a song
    In search of Eldorado
    But he grew old--
    This knight so bold--
    And o'er his heart a shadow
    Fell as he found
    No spot of ground
    That looked like Eldorado
    And as his strength
    Failed him at length
    He met a pilgrim shadow-
    "Shadow" said he
    "Where can it be--
    This land of Eldorado?"
    "Over the Mountains
    Of the Moon
    Down the Valley of the Shadow
    Ride, boldly ride"
    The Shade replied--
    "If you seek for Eldorado!"

  • Jordan
    11 years ago

    Good choice, Colm. Yeats is the MAN. I'm a big Heaney fan, too. There's just something really great about Irish poets.

    Porphyria's Lover
    by Robert Browning

    THE rain set early in to-night,
    The sullen wind was soon awake,
    It tore the elm-tops down for spite,
    And did its worst to vex the lake:
    I listen'd with heart fit to break. 5
    When glided in Porphyria; straight
    She shut the cold out and the storm,
    And kneel'd and made the cheerless grate
    Blaze up, and all the cottage warm;
    Which done, she rose, and from her form 10
    Withdrew the dripping cloak and shawl,
    And laid her soil'd gloves by, untied
    Her hat and let the damp hair fall,
    And, last, she sat down by my side
    And call'd me. When no voice replied, 15
    She put my arm about her waist,
    And made her smooth white shoulder bare,
    And all her yellow hair displaced,
    And, stooping, made my cheek lie there,
    And spread, o'er all, her yellow hair, 20
    Murmuring how she loved me--she
    Too weak, for all her heart's endeavour,
    To set its struggling passion free
    From pride, and vainer ties dissever,
    And give herself to me for ever. 25
    But passion sometimes would prevail,
    Nor could to-night's gay feast restrain
    A sudden thought of one so pale
    For love of her, and all in vain:
    So, she was come through wind and rain. 30
    Be sure I look'd up at her eyes
    Happy and proud; at last I knew
    Porphyria worshipp'd me; surprise
    Made my heart swell, and still it grew
    While I debated what to do. 35
    That moment she was mine, mine, fair,
    Perfectly pure and good: I found
    A thing to do, and all her hair
    In one long yellow string I wound
    Three times her little throat around, 40
    And strangled her. No pain felt she;
    I am quite sure she felt no pain.
    As a shut bud that holds a bee,
    I warily oped her lids: again
    Laugh'd the blue eyes without a stain. 45
    And I untighten'd next the tress
    About her neck; her cheek once more
    Blush'd bright beneath my burning kiss:
    I propp'd her head up as before,
    Only, this time my shoulder bore 50
    Her head, which droops upon it still:
    The smiling rosy little head,
    So glad it has its utmost will,
    That all it scorn'd at once is fled,
    And I, its love, am gain'd instead! 55
    Porphyria's love: she guess'd not how
    Her darling one wish would be heard.
    And thus we sit together now,
    And all night long we have not stirr'd,
    And yet God has not said a word! 60

  • Darren
    11 years ago

    Thanks everyone, these are some fantastic poems.

  • sibyllene
    11 years ago

    I wouldn't say this is my favorite poem, but it's one that I read in high school that has stuck with me. I keep going back to it.

    A Myth of Devotion

    When Hades decided he loved this girl
    he built for her a duplicate of earth,
    everything the same, down to the meadow,
    but with a bed added.

    Everything the same, including sunlight,
    because it would be hard on a young girl
    to go so quickly from bright light to utter darkness

    Gradually, he thought, he'd introduce the night,
    first as the shadows of fluttering leaves.
    Then moon, then stars. Then no moon, no stars.
    Let Persephone get used to it slowly.
    In the end, he thought, she'd find it comforting.

    A replica of earth
    except there was love here.
    Doesn't everyone want love?

    He waited many years,
    building a world, watching
    Persephone in the meadow.
    Persephone, a smeller, a taster.
    If you have one appetite, he thought,
    you have them all.

    Doesn't everyone want to feel in the night
    the beloved body, compass, polestar,
    to hear the quiet breathing that says
    I am alive, that means also
    you are alive, because you hear me,
    you are here with me. And when one turns,
    the other turns--

    That's what he felt, the lord of darkness,
    looking at the world he had
    constructed for Persephone. It never crossed his mind
    that there'd be no more smelling here,
    certainly no more eating.

    Guilt? Terror? The fear of love?
    These things he couldn't imagine;
    no lover ever imagines them.

    He dreams, he wonders what to call this place.
    First he thinks: The New Hell. Then: The Garden.
    In the end, he decides to name it
    Persephone's Girlhood.

    A soft light rising above the level meadow,
    behind the bed. He takes her in his arms.
    He wants to say I love you, nothing can hurt you

    but he thinks
    this is a lie, so he says in the end
    you're dead, nothing can hurt you
    which seems to him
    a more promising beginning, more true.

    -Louise Gluck