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  • Yakari Gabriel
    11 years ago

    Joke, we're all going to die.. here is
    Death poem by alysia harris..written completely

    I know most of us have heard it, but ugh it is such a good read

    "There will come a day when the fear of death will be the favored joke passed amongst corpses - and they're already laughing. My love, please don't be afraid, but there will come a day when field mice play in our empty sockets, when our bones become homes for living creatures other than our egos and when time will jostle our skeletons out of the composition that is me and you. And will write with us love letters that spell I owe you eternity.

    If we believe in life after death, then I often wonder why we assume the dead like coffins, when people were never meant to live in boxes. So I pray that our children will have the good sense to leave us a little wiggle room, leave us exposed like stray dogs in a thunderstorm. And I will hear the breeze but I will not know it as the breeze.

    And I will feel the rain but not know it as the rain. And I will behold the sky but not know it as the sky. Instead, I will hear the breeze and think it is your laugh returned into the hearth of my ear. And I will feel the rain and think that it is the pinprick of your kiss and when the rain is tender I will know that something has softened you and when the rain is violent

    I will know that something has shaken you. And, in this new found understanding, without eyes or ears or hands or lips, our bare bones will make love in the dirt; never knowing our nakedness. Imagine, the wind coursing through a calligraphy of weeds, in our disrepair we have grown gardens of ourselves, sprouts of curious grass shooting from our eye sockets.

    Our knuckles, hard, smooth skipping stones meant for children's play. And the devilish sun, picking its way through your missing teeth and neither of us can keep from smiling these days. And the days go unnoticed and the nights go unslept and we talk with our souls through the holes in our ribs where the organs once sat.

    Imagine, your skull and mine both reduced to grins. Both washed clean of our sins and our skins, going young again, forgetting why we ever wrinkled or why we ever furrowed our brow with the plow of anger. Become dust with me, insignificant and everywhere for I will love you even after your marrow has become a whisper and your bones; nothing but the snickering of gravel.

    Let us soak in the spaces our shadows left behind. Your skeleton, laced with mine, I will tie your soul to my ankles and know what it is like to step into a dream. And you will try on my backbone and see how bad it hurt the day you said you were calling it quits.

    I don't remember why you left or why you came back. I don't know how many years have passed, I'm not really sure years passed at all. All I know is the rain falls; you kiss me like a rain fall. The sun, it bleaches us clear and every day is a romance. All this to say; we are already laughing.

    There is a wedding of earthworms and pebbles waiting when our tuxedo skeletons no longer fit. There is a place for our faces to lie planted beside, forever smiling. There exists a place where we can still be in love. There exists a place where we can be still and in love. Just two gentle skulls."

  • Sunshine
    11 years ago

    :) ..

  • Karla
    11 years ago

    Lovedddddddddddddddddddd it

  • Larry Chamberlin
    11 years ago

    It killed me.

  • sibyllene
    11 years ago

    Not me, I'm going with a Viking cremation. I wrote a poem about it.

    But seriously, I truly loved this. I think it's about perfect. Thank you for posting.

  • abracadabra
    11 years ago

    I rarely comment on things anymore, but this is truly beautiful. I haven't read such a stunning piece for a while.

    But I'm for going up in flames, much like Sibs. It always bothers me to think that Nikko wants to be buried. I don't want to think of him one day perhaps as rotting flesh with worms in his beautiful eyes.

    This piece makes burial seem so romantic... I'm almost having second thoughts. Though I'd have to time my death with his to get it to work properly.

    Otherwise it won't make sense.

  • sibyllene
    11 years ago

    I'm hoping I go at the same time as Tony, anyway. Not to be dramatic, but I would definitely be happier not having to live in a world where he didn't exist anymore. And I wouldn't want to leave him alone, either.

    "This piece makes burial seem so romantic... I'm almost having second thoughts."

    On that note, despite my ideal burial, I've always found this picture to be very touching:

    http://asset1.cbsistatic.com/cnwk.1d/i/ne/p/2007/eternal_embrace_513x600.jpg

    There's probably some mundane explanation for it, but I prefer the romantic interpretation. In any case, it's fitting for this poem.

  • abracadabra
    11 years ago

    Awww, good pic, very fitting. Reminds me of the incredibly moving in situ plaster casts of the victims of the Pompeii eruption. Lovers entwined, mother crouching over her child, the lonely man, the strangled dog on a chain. Okay, the last one wasn't lovely.

  • Jenni
    11 years ago

    This is so beautiful.

  • Colm
    11 years ago

    The poem/story and picture also reminded me of the part in the movie Titanic when an old couple are holding each other as the water starts coming into their cabin. I think it happened in the Notebook *spoiler alert!* too where they die in each others arms? Obviously they are scripted Hollywood movies but I often thought afterwards, that it does happen in some shape or form. Quoting The Smiths: 'To die by your side, is such a heavenly way to die.'

    P.S Abby I remember seeing those in Pompeii too, can't remember the dog though, don't know how I missed that one

  • Exostosis
    11 years ago

    And, in this new found understanding, without eyes or ears or hands or lips, our bare bones will make love in the dirt; never knowing our nakedness. Imagine, the wind coursing through a calligraphy of weeds, in our disrepair we have grown gardens of ourselves, sprouts of curious grass shooting from our eye sockets.

    I will tie your soul to my ankles and know what it is like to step into a dream.

    ^ Quite beautiful.

    A recitation would be most emotionally devastating.

  • Yakari Gabriel
    11 years ago

    Http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YnyTbpR3mLc

    don't die :')

  • Larry Chamberlin
    11 years ago

    I used to want to be buried at sea while they chummed for sharks. My daughters even discussed the logistics of it.

    Since then I have changed my plans.
    Cremation is the first step only. Then the ashes are to be held until Rosaura passes. When she is cremated each of our ashes are sent to a company that compresses your ashes into an industrial diamond. At that point we have become the family jewels.

  • Yakari Gabriel
    11 years ago

    Wow that's beautiful...

    when I die , I want my ashes to be scattered in sea sand so even then I can still get in people's pants

  • Sunshine
    11 years ago

    Beautiful pic, I'm downloading it and then sharing it, so beautiful!

    And lol Yaki, you're so funny.