Day 7: Marathon - Fragments of Poetry

  • Colm
    11 years ago

    Rules/guidelines:

    - Use this thread to post your poems. Don't post anything other than poems in it please. Only start when the hour starts: Poems posted before or after the hour (PnQ time) won't be counted!

    - You can only take one option/time slot.

    - You cannot post a poem until 2 OTHERS member have posted before you. Work it out in your clubs what poems you are doing each.
    NOTE: If you want to use your simplify lifeline this round, you can use it so that only 1 person has to post before you, so that way the contest will be achievable with 2 people. Obviously though the more people you have the easier/faster it is, (so long as everybody is organised!)

    - 1 point per poem (out of 50 points total, bonus points for more than 50 poems) 50pts for average quality, 100pts total (before bonuses)

    - Use the 30 or so minutes before to organise who will take what poem and get writing, ready to hit the ground running when the hour starts. Organisation and teamwork is key here.

    Once you have done one lap, you start again! Note: Start at prompt 1 and go in order. If you are doing prompt 3, you can't post that until somebody has posted prompt 2.

    *Updated times for the challenge (please pick one to use):

    Option 1: Sunday, 7.15-8.15 PnQ time
    Option 2: Sunday, 15.00-16.00 PnQ time
    Option 3 (NEW): Sunday, 19.00-20.00 PnQ time
    Option 4: Monday, 19.00-20.00 PnQ time

    EDIT:

    Option 2: Sunday, 15.00-16.00 PnQ time - STARTS IN 30MINS.

    The prompts for clubs using this time slot are posted below. Remember, make sure you are aware of the rules before starting as there will not be time to start asking questions once the hour starts!

    - Remember you can use your simplify lifeline, you don't have to inform me beforehand. For example, if halfway through the hour you find yourselves down to 2 online members, use it. If you feel you don't have enough members to do justice, you can postpone it until one of the other hours, but once you start posting you can't change your time slot.

    Prompts/themes for option 2:

    1. Five line poem
    2. Fish
    3. Poem based on a book title
    4. Senryu
    5. aabb rhyming scheme, 2 verses
    6. Summer
    7. Include the word 'paper'
    8. 7 line poem
    9. Ducks
    10. Wild card (pick any theme)
    11. About/to a PnQ member
    12. 30-32 syllables
    13. Alcohol

  • SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG
    11 years ago

    Lap 1, Round 1- five line poem

    The hourglass is merciless.
    A cruel mistress;
    No friend of mine.
    Seconds, minutes, or hours,
    She counts them all; none remain behind.

  • Saerelune
    11 years ago

    Lap 1 - round 1 - fish

    Sailormen have cast their nets today,
    'twas storming ashore, black thighs
    in rhythm with the ocean, but fishes
    slip and keep slipping, like hands
    on bodies, and bodies on shores,
    slipping fishes until the morn.

  • The Queen
    11 years ago

    Lap 1 - round - 3 - Poem based on a book title

    A Walk To Remember

    Into the dappled,
    deploring darkness,
    I explore what remains...

    an image of
    solitude and beauty.

    And, as I carved my way
    through the tangle
    of memories

    there, I found him,
    a face until now,
    I could not name.

  • SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG
    11 years ago

    Lap 1, round 1-senyru

    Forever rushing-
    Ignoring precious moments
    For lesser pursuits.

  • Saerelune
    11 years ago

    Lap 1 - round 2 - aabb, 2 verse

    I've been dreaming about death all day
    wondering if love, like life, would end midway
    I mean, what if a trainwreck crashes right into my heart
    what if the ocean grows and keeps us further apart?

    I'd curse the gods just to keep danger at bay
    flick a witchery finger just to make you stay,
    for you I'd play my sinful card,
    for you I'd let the skeleton's dance start.

  • The Queen
    11 years ago

    Lap 1 - round - 6- Summer

    Summer comes
    like a cinnamon
    flavored tea,

    like a river of searing
    heat, gushing out
    from my tongue
    flowing down
    right to my
    weathered
    throat.

  • SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG
    11 years ago

    Lap 1 round 7 - include the word paper

    Empty pages-
    Waiting for ink.
    Craving the feel
    of ink flowing onto paper.
    -Life's story waiting
    to be written.

  • Saerelune
    11 years ago

    Lap 1 - round 8 - 7 lines

    Little Fool

    Whenever I tilted my head you'd interpret
    this mechanical movement as finding hope
    within your eyes, while I was merely
    distracted by the bright bulb of mockery
    that hung from the ceiling like a
    clean-shaven chain of animal skin.

    You've always been a blind reader of body language.

  • The Queen
    11 years ago

    Lap 1 - round 9 - Ducks

    Snail clouds dancing
    to whistling mountain
    pines

    rainbows of butterflies,
    gleefully waltzing
    in-line

    pale blue eggs cracking
    as baby duck's
    emerging.

  • slighte
    11 years ago

    Lap 1 - round 10 - wild card (include the word 'paper')

    Madness grows in grass,
    he crawls between blades and
    into
    bare feet of children. He waits
    patiently, until child is old
    enough to feel sadness
    and the colours of
    lunacy.

    Madness swims in sea, he floods
    ships and changes shades in the wind.
    He steals the nails
    keeping vessels together - boats,
    bodies - and gives them to
    hysteria.

    He found Shakespeare on paper
    ghosts, fell
    into Macbeth in the storm,
    murdered the king. The king is
    dead, lost in a grave of blood and
    aberration.

    I found delirium on the hills today,
    he was whispering to the ocean while
    I spun into
    unbalance.
    Madness never knew what madness was
    until he lived in
    me.

  • Saerelune
    11 years ago

    Lap 1 - round 11 - about/to pnq member

    For Cassidy

    I held your skeleton close to me, every
    junction or gap, but like an unstable bridge
    all collapsed in a pile of broken
    hope within my arms.

    You were fragile and I'd kill your pain
    if only I could, if only
    I had the love to take
    revenge and all that hurts.

    But I hadn't learnt of love
    in the process of burying my own bones.
    I never knew what it felt like
    skull against skull, fragments
    of regret crashing against
    a deathbed.

  • The Queen
    11 years ago

    Edit

  • zombiepikachu
    11 years ago

    Edit

  • slighte
    11 years ago

    Lap 1 - round 12 - 30-32 syllables

    the music seeped in
    not slowly through ears or eyes
    or light
    but loud enough to pour
    like an avalanche
    through skin and bones
    and heart

  • Saerelune
    11 years ago

    Z please edit away your poem, sorry :(

    LIFELINE PLEASE

    Lap 1 - round 13 - alcohol

    I was an eighteen year old girl
    who's never gone to a bar, never knew
    that wine could taste so very bittersweet,
    just because she despised everything
    with the fragrance of alcohol, that decaying smell
    of broken hearts, desperation, and
    blur ... the burglar of nostalgia, just waiting
    for the right moment to enter
    her every vein, every fragment
    of the brain, every figment and
    reality, memory
    and hallucination.

    So upon her first taste of white wine
    and a bartender with the semi-spitting image
    of her first buddy, first crush, first
    universe, she was sold. Didn't care
    it was a sequence of her past-love;
    his black hair, tanned skin, his history
    of half-blood was good enough to imagine
    it was -him-, smoking a cigarette
    even though his breath was much less tainted
    in her dreams, -him-, whose small talk
    was enough to capture her, just to stare
    at the angle of his jawline, that small ear
    barely exposed for her to whisper in ...

    And it's happened before, at the hairdresser
    when the good man ruffled her hair, came
    a little bit too close to her face, with his
    shy mouth, she could imagine him saying
    the words he never said, words as bright
    as the scarlet cusp in his hair ...
    just like the first time they met.

    And everytime she would drown
    in the colour of a stranger's skin,
    the ebony of his hair, not quite sure
    which -him- she was talking to
    in her head, not quite sure
    whether butterflies were released
    into that cold cave of a ribcage
    or whether moths were just
    too attracted to that flickery flame
    of her heart, so much
    that desire became delusion ...
    for nothing inside this body
    has ever been so bright.

    And I'll admit, there's no I
    or her, no him or -him-,
    I've lost track of the times
    I told myself there was any resemblance
    or difference, I've lost track of the days of soberness,
    the days in which I wasn't drunk on nostalgia,
    tapping that tune of heartbreak on my knee,
    tapping against wine glasses, waiting
    for another walking imitation
    to offer me a new drink,
    offer me
    a new hallucination.

  • The Queen
    11 years ago

    Lap 2 - round 1 - Five line poem

    Watch me dance beneath the monochrome
    moonlight as the silhouette beneath your eyelid
    burns, does my lustrous hair attract you?
    Or is it the ruffled mid-rib lace
    that tempts you the most?

  • slighte
    11 years ago

    Edit

  • Saerelune
    11 years ago

    Lap 2 - round 2 - fish

    We're all just dead fish
    within the fishermen's net,
    between shark tails and dolphin skin
    another product of the day

  • slighte
    11 years ago

    Lap 2 - round 3 - poem based on a book title

    Holes

    I swear I was a healthy child -
    I didn't scream all night, all my organs
    were there and I learnt to talk after
    my first word. But something's been digging
    at me, tearing my skin slowly
    and pulling out my life.

    (I think it's me.)

    I am covered in holes,
    searching for treasure but finding
    only rot. You're digging too but
    finding treasure I didn't think
    was ever there. It fills me up.

  • Saerelune
    11 years ago

    Lap 2 - round 4 - senryu

    To be Art

    naughty, and nervous
    creeping against the naked
    curve of a soul

  • The Queen
    11 years ago

    Lap 2 - round 5 - aabb rhyming scheme, 2 verses

    Foliage speaks of decaying beneath a cerulean FALL sky
    August gusts--stuck between rivers, searing yet fleeting by

    Leaves turn deep auburn, ceaselessly falling onto the ground
    Lorn stalks seeking solitude, numb to loneliness so profound

  • slighte
    11 years ago

    Lap 2 - round 6 - summer

    I never liked the sun -
    too thick and sickly and turning my skin.
    I was a ghost and a vampire with a moonlight
    glow from my paper skin. But sun turns me
    to fire and anger and I am no longer moonlight
    but sheets of fierceness
    but cannot even move my limbs
    out of pain.

  • The Queen
    11 years ago

    Lap 2 - round 7 - Include the word 'paper'

    Finger lickin' good
    on ivory paper and plastic plates,
    these flavorful salmon dishes
    really shine,
    only if they have been
    organically
    farmed.

  • slighte
    11 years ago

    Lap 2 - round 8 - seven line poem

    I was born with wings in my hands.
    After all these years I still didn't know
    how to fly. Chained to to a bedroom cell
    as I learnt to read music. It was the calling
    of the trees who applauded with wind
    and hurricane storms for my singing
    that finally brought me to the sky.

  • Saerelune
    11 years ago

    Lap 2 - round 9 - ducks

    Paper cranes? swan lake? too cliche
    for me to grasp, I'd rather stand obsessed
    by diving ducks, green heads melting
    with the murky water as I throw bread crumbs
    their way, as if granting them coins
    for their performance

  • slighte
    11 years ago

    Lap 2 - round 10 - wild card (senryu)

    it's cold inside
    i use blankets to cover
    my mother's cruel gaze

  • Saerelune
    11 years ago

    Lap 2 - round 11 - PnQ member

    Colm, oh Colm, where art thou Colm
    our royalty is dying before portals
    of our own, this asylum has become
    a heaven for children running out
    at midnight, please kidnap some more
    little kids once you're home

  • Saerelune
    11 years ago

    Well that was one epic failure lol ...

    Good luck everyone else. :)

    *bows and leaves the stage*

  • Darren
    11 years ago

    I disagree, well done

    some good poems written under pressure.

  • Saerelune
    11 years ago

    Thanks darren ... That helps a bit. :)

    Some organisation problems and lack of members here ... Oh well what to do. Looking forward to the rest of you!