Marcy Lewis
11 years ago
Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1216547 |
NDiamond
11 years ago
I like that poem a lot also. Although I think it could avoid becoming self-critical when the narrator talks about not knowing what to write about. The poem is building a momentum, which gets intentionally deflated at the end, and I think it would be more effective to continue letting the momentum build |