FANTASTIC POEM. It needs recognition.

  • Marcy Lewis
    11 years ago

    Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1216547

    I can't even tell you much about this. It's straight up coffee-shop monologue poetry. I love it. If I could nominate it, I totally would.

  • NDiamond
    11 years ago

    I like that poem a lot also. Although I think it could avoid becoming self-critical when the narrator talks about not knowing what to write about. The poem is building a momentum, which gets intentionally deflated at the end, and I think it would be more effective to continue letting the momentum build

  • Jade
    11 years ago

    I really like this poem considering its more modern and it appeals to the young eye.