What Poems Are About!!!!!!!!!

  • Bret Higgins
    19 years ago

    Love is Love, have you considered writing a poem about hate?

  • Tenshix
    19 years ago

    rushing poems um it does not matter how fast you do them they still turn out great and poems mostly are good words put to together if you read alot

  • Mandy
    19 years ago

    i should write a poem on hate...hmm i have a thouhgt rushing in my head

  • Chad Reamer
    19 years ago

    I agree with you.I write the same way you do.I think about what I love.And right now that is my girlfriend.All my poems are about her and the way I feel about her.So i strongly agree with what your saying.It's worked for me.

  • Chad Reamer
    19 years ago

    yea i feel the same way joel.It lets me express my love to my girlfriend

  • Hayley Marie
    19 years ago

    erm.. no need to be like that!!! it does come inside of u... your brain.. duhhh thats inside u... and ur heart!!!! thats inside u too!!!!!!! there was no need to be so harsh!!! most ppls poems are from the heart!!!

    Hayley

  • Chris Young
    19 years ago

    Ha ha ha, you are a funny, and rather disturbing man just plain me BUT, if you want to get technical about the whole thing, you are missing a few punctiation elements in your latest post: in fact, all of your posts.

    Lets see...
    no caps - anywhere
    separate, directly related paragraphs
    the concept that you also need blood sent to your ARM and not only your brain, to use the appendage
    some quotation marks... and yet some more quotation marks
    an arguably misplaced colon
    a sentence fragment
    and wait...another sentence fragment
    last but not least, use of the word myriad, as an adjective, although not incorrect, could be misleading because it could also relate that whatever "things" you are talking about are countlessly or innumerably faceted. So even though you are stricly correct, if you believe us all to be so "retarded" then why don't you dumb it down for us just a little bit: to make sure we get the message - thanks.

    Is this annoying yet...? Good.

    I think the point, when considering the root(s) of poetry, is not that it stems from a large body of cardiac muscle situated within the human thorax but instead that it has ties to the anchient consideration of the heart as the birthplace for not only morality (have a heart lol) but also for the birthplace of an honest appraisal of love (you have such a big heart) and other, less positive, emotions (grey would be the color, if I had a heart - Trent Reznor).

    And by the by, "from myriad things"? Try to be just a little more specific eh?

    I have no doubt that you are intellegent but there truly is no valid justification for the inappropriate expression of self doubt.
    Ha ha, and by the way, I'm sure you already know all of this but remember to give the "retarded" boy - that would be me lol - a break.

  • Eibutsina
    19 years ago

    No darling you are...

    JPM is PNQ Literary Police Constable or did you not know that already?

    LOL I have tried on several occassions to get him to capitalise but to no avail - you can lead a horse to water...

  • Finalgravedigger
    19 years ago

    Poems are about expressing your emotions GG Edward Yip who likes Hillary Bellis

  • Finalgravedigger
    19 years ago

    Poems are about how you feel and your emotions those are the best ones