Brevity Round 2 - POEMS

Here are the poems for Round 2, Thank you for participating. Results might take up to 4 days.

#1 Personal Space of a Flower Child

Finger flowers stretching,
grasping marshmallow cloud dancers
and rainbows, twirling simultaneously
as gravity finds me in grasslands
of my peaceful circumference,
a bit of utopia enchants the
space in my mellow dramatic mind.

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#2 Cosmic

The moment when two lips graze together
can you imagine the sound -
a cluster of stars exploding bit by bit
crashing into the universe,
a shattering pulsating, racing -
vibrating. That's when you know
perfection has been created.

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#3 There's Room for You

Interstitial love fills my heart.
Lumps form in my throat when I see you,
sand in my mouth, I can not speak;
tears flow for all is lost,
my heart has no more space.
Then the sweetness of your kisses
permeates this conglomerate -
cements my adoration

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#4 Untitled

Without destination
there would be no distance

Without distance
there would be no roads

Without roads
there would be no arrival or departure

Without arrival and departure
there would be no space

because we would forever be
already there.

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#5

The Elevator-Gang

We are standing stiff on the first floor
like freshly jarred pickles.
Oxygen crops into the size
of sour breath, whilst
sandwiched between perverted hands,
I can read the sleepless, sex-
deprived nights on their stubbly
chins, trying to ignore
the itch of my tongue.

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#6 Untitled 2

I wish I had more space instead
Of flirting with the claustrophobia
Of your eyes. I wish the rocket
I had could find its fuel
And take me into orbit, forgetting
You were harboured in a fast food diner
Of the fifties, and I lost
In the empty space of tired, tired time

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Jeezz....I'm really loving #4 here...it really speaks to me....just didn't like the word because in the summing up, yet ...still the best poem in my eyes....Didn't have time to check the syllable count....guess the judges are there for that :)

Think the results will be out soon?

Yeah, sorry I'm still waiting for one more judge, if I don't receive anything in an hour, I will post what I have.