My first poem here!!!

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1218064

I hope you like it.

Nice, I especially liked the end :). Keep writing, amigo :)

That's great dude! :) - Very good rhyming style, and I like how well organized your lines are. It gives the piece a good appearance, and make it easier to read.

Keep Penning

Tim