Contest!!!

  • Michael
    11 years ago

    I have a contest. You can write about anything for round 1 no explict poems. Post it here and i will nominate 3 poems to win

    1st 10 votes 5 commenrs
    2nd 5 votes 3 comments
    3rd 3 votes 1 comment

    Good luck everyone

    Due 10th april

  • tainted melody
    11 years ago

    Title: Shelter

    Breathing in the icy air.
    The darkness seems to settle.
    She grasps her hand onto the rail,
    onto secure, but frigid metal.

    She feels alone, exposed, and broken.
    Not knowing where to turn.
    Everyone let her make mistakes,
    saying, 'one day she will learn.'

    But where was the protection,
    from the ones she knew and loved?
    The ones supposed to gaurd her.
    Instead they pushed and shoved.

    Protection and a shelter,
    is what they should've been.
    Instead there's total freedom.
    Never, who?what?where?and when?

    So parents, just remember.
    You have a job to do.
    Guide your childrens steps.
    For they will always need you.

  • L
    11 years ago

    Title: The Tree of Faith

    May Summer breeze squeeze your rigid knees
    And let you fall with the speed of a sneeze
    so I may stand in front of you as the tree
    that never moved not even with the wind.

    Perhaps then you will see the shade I give
    as my branches hold your hands to stand again
    because no matter the times you are to fall
    I will always be there as your standing tree.

  • Daylight Lucidity
    11 years ago

    Title: Love Rekindled

    Flames lick the back of my neck,
    heat engulfs us both
    you peeled off my deceptive mask
    to reveal the frightened girl
    that lies beneath the stone like stare
    living in her fantasy world
    afraid of loving, no one had ever cared.
    A kiss upon my lips so soft
    passion bursting in my chest
    love once thought was lost
    rekindled and stronger than before
    beauty not judged but rather cradled
    within your hands awaiting to be adored
    soul so delicately frail.
    An embrace leaving me breathless
    words can't describe how I feel
    my fingers through your hair move restless
    your eyes twinkling like the stars
    warming me with your stare
    soothing my once aching heart
    engulfing me with bottomless care,
    leaving us with,
    love rekindled.

  • Amreen
    11 years ago

    Title : A wandering soul

    Our love was born
    like a naive baby-
    tender and innocent,
    fresh and adorable.

    Days passed by
    when it grew
    like a mature infant-
    cheerful and lively.

    All seemed so beautiful
    as we both saw our bond
    grow old
    like the life of a human.

    But a day came
    when the throat of our relation
    got slit by
    the knives of mistrust.

    The wounds of it
    were severe and hence
    our love succumbed
    to the bad tidings.

    Our love's soul
    became secluded
    as we left its clutches
    to live a new beginning.

    It wandered around,
    sobbing and reminiscing
    of the perished memories
    we once lived.

    It tried haunting both of us,
    so it could
    control our lives
    and rekindle our lost love.

    But our new life
    was much stronger
    than the spirit
    of our old love.

    As we ignored
    its cry
    and simply
    moved on.

    It was depressed with the fact,
    it wouldn't grow young
    and reflect
    the beauty of a youthful love.

    It had tears
    in its eyes
    as it knew its life
    grew stagnant now.

    And that it couldn't find solace,
    but wander around
    like the dead soul
    of a forgotten love.

  • PETER EDWARDS
    11 years ago

    Title : Endings

    He put his arms around her,
    and held her so, so near
    His hands were moist and trembling,
    he couldn't hide his fear
    His mind knew it was over,
    was his Heart that couldn't see
    Her love had gone, couldn't carry on,
    the end of she and he
    They'd been so far together,
    on a white horse in the sky
    Riding through those clouds of love,
    they went so very high
    But now he was like stranger,
    the love had left her eyes
    She said goodbye, as she fell,
    falling through those skies
    He gave her one last kiss,
    he knew it was the last
    Then walked away and she became
    a figment of his past..

  • dindee
    11 years ago

    Title: Tears

    Every teardrop that fall from eyes,
    I don't know what it symbolize,
    Sadness, happiness, anger, is this right?
    I don't really know what's inside.

    I wish I never been born,
    So that I can never experienced to be alone.
    In every steps that I've take,
    It would always be a mistake.

    When the moon shows it's bright at the dark sky,
    I can't avoid to reminisce all the memories
    and began to cry,
    Every teardrop that runs on my face,
    A cold wind kiss it and would like me to embrace.

    I'm hoping someone to evade tears to flow,
    But I know I can do.
    Even tears would shed from my eyes,
    I will still stand to face the challenges in my life..

  • Michael
    11 years ago

    Stop posting entries and the results are in the next round is about nature. it must be a hiaku good luck due 1st may

    votes will be done asap

    1st talented melody
    2nd dindee
    3rd everlasting

  • Vic Johns
    11 years ago

    Beware A Nightly Visitor !

    Once upon a midnight eerie, while I pondered weak and weary
    Over volumes of old score books from the season over and many before,
    While I nodded nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping
    As if someone a gently rapping, rapping at my front door
    "Tis some late caller" I did mutter, rapping at my front door
    Only this and nothing more.
    Ah distinctly I remember, the cricket all over as was September
    And at my fire-side, the flames cast shadows across the floor
    Eagerly I wished the morrow, for these books brought only sorrow
    Sorrow as no runs did I score, not this season, nor none before
    At my name always a zero, always this and nothing more.
    And again although not certain, at first a rustle at my old curtain
    Then another tap upon my door, terror gripped me my nerves all tore
    So that now I stood there, my heart so fast a beating,
    Wondering who could be entreating, entrance to my front door
    It must be some late visitor, only this and nothing more.
    Presently my soul grew stronger, so hesitating then no longer
    "Sir or Madame, truly your forgiveness I implore"!
    But the fact is I was napping, when so gently you came rapping
    And I scarcely heard you tapping, tapping at my front door,
    So now I'll open up to you,... my front door,
    Darkness there and nothing more !
    Deep into this darkness I stood peering, standing, wondering ever fearing
    Doubting, dreaming dreams, no mortals dared dream before
    And the silence was unbroken and the stillness gave no token
    Was there out there, some ghostly apparition?
    Cause what I heard, lent further to my suspicion
    When forlorn was my cry, "Will someday at my name be a score"?
    Came back the echo, "Nevermore"!
    Back into my room quickly turning, all my soul within me burning
    Only soon again to hear the tapping, somewhat louder than before
    Is it now someone rapping, rapping at my window pane?
    Who is this person most profane? The mystery I shall explore
    Or is it just the wind and my imagination?
    Yes, maybe this and nothing more.
    Open quickly I flung back the shutter and without fuss or flutter
    In there stepped a stately black duck from the saintly days of yore,
    Not the least embarrassed was he.. What business did he want with me?
    Jumped down onto my armchair and then onto my front room floor,
    Standing there and staring, with beady eyes towards me, glaring
    Said I unto this fowl, "What be your name" ? Quacked back the duck,
    "Nevermore"!
    Then me thought, is he a prophet? Come to warn me, it's time to stop it,
    So closer to him I did draw, "Tell me now duck, don't be a bore!
    Even closer to him reclining, I was thinking and divining
    "Will a century, I ever score"? Quacked back the duck,
    "Nevermore"!
    Ah, this bird he made me furious, although I grew still more curious
    Is he some Tempter, sent to tempt me? This duck I was beginning to abhor!
    Again I engaged him into guessing, towards the brute expressing,
    "Shall a fifty be mine to score"? Quacked back again,
    "Nevermore"!
    Crazy yet more crazy I was going, but I had to keep on knowing,
    "Quaff, oh quaff, Tell me this and don't say nevermore
    Take thy bill from out my heart's core, and thy form back out the door
    Leave me now for it is late, dare not stop to even close the gate,
    And am I destined, always A Duck my score"?
    "Quack oh Quack and you're spot on mate"!
    Then vanished into the night, left me lamenting for now and evermore!!

  • Daylight Lucidity
    11 years ago

    Title: Moon Siren

    The sea's breath whispers
    The siren songs of the moon
    Where all is serene

  • L
    11 years ago

    Title: The Firemen

    the green foliage
    rapidly incinerates;
    earth's clouds produce rain

    P.s Firemen are earth's clouds. :)

  • tainted melody
    11 years ago

    Title: Echo

    Filling empty air
    Resounding in space and time
    Hollow and haunting

  • Michael
    11 years ago

    One thing if you win you get votes and comments bur is you come second or third you lose

  • dindee
    11 years ago

    Title: Sunset

    Colors in the sky,
    Orange, yellow, blue and white,
    Bye sun and sleep tight.

  • Michael
    11 years ago

    You have until the 2 more days

  • Michael
    11 years ago

    Stop writing i will reveal the results as soon as possible and put the votes on

  • tainted melody
    11 years ago

    I was just wondering when you are gonna announce the results, cuz the date you entered before said the first of may and it's the 8th. wasn't sure if you changed the date and I just didn't see it?

  • dindee
    11 years ago

    Yeah....i agree...and the span of your contest is too long....it took almost a month....sorry...

  • Augastus Black
    11 years ago

    JESUS THE ALMIGHTY GOD
    The almighty god Jesus created this wonderful earth;
    He is the way, the truth and the vitality.
    Jesus is called the everlasting father since his birth,
    Nobody can suspect on his capability.

    God is with us at every step and every case,
    His emotional heart always forgives the sinner;
    By every people he will be forever retrace,
    We are proud to be the son of the great lord.

    He is the prince of peace, faith and loyal;
    Jesus teaches us lesson of uprightness.
    Love the lord with all your heart and soul,
    God of salvation never let us to feel the lonesomeness.

    He is the reflection of the splendor, glory and majesty;
    We should embrace the living father blessing.
    God wants every creature to live with liberty,
    We should not eat and sleep without worshipping.

    Once again by the core of our heart;
    We are feeling the sight of the mercy god,
    And merrily say, "We love you Jesus! We love you!"
    - Augastus Black