New to this

K guys im a new member and I just posted a poem. I wld love your feedback. Please poem name is That Night In Weightroom by purple butterfly

I really did love this poem! :) it was sweet! :) PM me if you need more poems done! :) when you make them anyways

I'm not sure how this works exactly... but, I would really love it if you guys would read and crit my stuff... especially the recent stuff.

Of course I will return the favour.
Sam.