Ii NEED HELP!!!!

  • CinnamonTwirl
    19 years ago

    I just wrote a poem. Called "Settle". Its my second attempt at writing a poem that doesnt rhyme. Its something that i find hard to do, with like, keeping focus and having me not suck and all. Anyways, i NEED A NEW TITLE. BADLY! and Im not saying this to have people read my poem. I actually...like...need a new title. I dont know fits, and maybe with another person reading it, who didnt write it, an appropriate title will come to them. Please help me. -Katrina

  • Bret Higgins
    19 years ago

    Something like Shrouded or Invisible Blinkers. You should be suggesting not being able to see the whole picture.

  • CinnamonTwirl
    19 years ago

    Thanks, ill try to brain storm some more names but those are good too

  • CinnamonTwirl
    19 years ago

    and oh yea, i changed the title to shrouded, i do like the meaning of the word

  • Bret Higgins
    19 years ago

    Sure thing. I'd try and come up with your own title. But if Shrouded does it for you, no problem.

  • CinnamonTwirl
    19 years ago

    i changed my title to "twisted perceptions" but its still open for discussion.